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Reviews For My Life Plan
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Florida

3rd times a charm for leaving a comment i hope!

I love the role reversals of edward and jacob. I have read many fics where jacob is the boyfriend/husband/abuser and the list could go on... but rarely is edward the teenage best friend looking out for her best intrests...  i think you characterised him very well. I like the prolouge and the first few chapts... a few of the chapt were a bit slow going so I hope it picks up a little.. we want more interaction I suppose and less slow details.

I love the life plan and I think it is an interesting premise for a fic, I read over 300 fics, and I haven't seen that Idea yet! so good for originality



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I am glad you are liking my story so far. I can't wait to be done with the "introducing the characters"/setting up the story. I am hoping it picks up with the next chapter. As a new author I am learning I have trouble with balance enough detail with out going into too much detail.

Reviewer: Mick (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 11:32 PM · On: Graduation Day

Heya Girl,  This is my second time trying to type a review.  I am anxious to get back into chat to ask what was in the graduation speech from two years ago that Jasper and Edward's mentioned.  I can't wait to read more, thanks for writing a great story...who's getting married, who's baby is it?  Now that is how you leave people - always leave 'em wanting more!

Reviewer: twilightgirl98 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Invitation

So is this an Jacob/Bella story or is it gonna become an Edward/Bella story? Just curios. Anyways, awesome story. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I am glad you are liking it. Chapter 4 should be up soon - it just needs some cleaning up after coming back from my Beta. As to whether it is JxB or ExB your just going to have to wait and see.

Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Summer Vacation

Interesting story so far. Who is getting married? I'm dying to know! At first I wasn't sure who was with who bt now that I do I'm interestes to see how that will work.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! I am about two-thirds of the way through with chapter 3. which turned out not to go in the direction I thought it would. I like to leave a little mystery in my chapters, but don't worry all will be explained eventually.

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