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Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:45 AM · On: Breathe
I think all of us can feel the change of the current as despair turns to hope.
Shortly into the chapter when Felix called I couldn't help but wonder if he hoped they would miss the deadline giving E/B another 8 months to work it out.
We are seeing more and more subtle changes in the way Bella looks at Edward. Little touches, lingering moments. The suntan lotion was a nice touch.
But the little girl. Bella's unselfish act of heroism was intense as was Edward's knowing full well that things could have gone the other way in the given situation. But it is the afterward that stands out the most when she reaches out to Edward and asks him to hold her. Only too often we have watched Bella deal alone. The fact that she reached out to Edward in this vulnerable moment shows she trusts him. I know she will be sleeping due to the medication but I hope that while she is enveloped in her arms she realizes just how very much he still loves her.
*lesigh*
Sandra
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for the amazing review. I'm glad you notice the little changes taking place and how Bella is, indeed, reaching out to Edward, even if it is in the smallest way. Thanks for sticking with my story and I hope you like what is to come!
Reviewer: RiRi (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Breathe
I adore this story! It is fluffy at points but gosh--it can be totally heartwrenching too. I always stop what I am doing when I see that there has been an update. Keep on writing! I can't wait till the climax!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it! Get ready cuz next couple of chapters are going to get a little angsty again!
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Breathe
Beautiful chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Breathe
I hope he burns those divorce papers!
Author's Response: hehe we can only hope!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Breathe
Great chapter! Finally he figured it out and is going to fight for them. It's so funny that this is only 12 chapters in it just seems like so many more. I think that's why I get so antsy for them to hurry up and really get back together.
Author's Response: People have said this story seems like more chapters than it actually is and I can't tell if it is a good thing or a bad thing, but thanks for reading!
Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Breathe
Awww their getting closer together!!! Bella saved the little girl, Edward saved Bella, Bella asked edward to stay!! I can't wait until the 'get back together' thanks for the update!!! Peace and love;)
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 13 already sent in!
Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Breathe
Look at that...they are finally getting their heads out of their asses! Now if only they can keep it that way. Somehow i doubt that.
Cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: Yea let's not get our hopes up just yet. Next couple of chapters will be a bit angsty. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Breathe
amazing! can't wait for chapter 14!
love heroward
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Breathe
I know I don't review every chapter, but it doesn't mean I'm not reading. I really really loved this chapter. I think being here is really making them realize what they are missing and they want back. Edward is going to fight to get her back where she belongs in his arms and he got his wish at the end of the chapter. I think it was brave of Bella jumping in to save the girl and I'm so glad that Edward noticed before they got to far along and jumped in and saved them both. It really made Edward see how much he is still in love with her and that he would be devestated if anything happened to her. I think Bella is realizing that also. Anyway it was a wonderful chapter and I'm looking forward to the talk. Still a huge fan of yours.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate you leaving your thoughts and I am so glad you are liking my story! Thanks for sticking with me! Next chapter has been sent in already!!
Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Breathe
These two are sort of driving me crazy!!! Okay I'll try to be patient. Great chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Yes, patience is key with this story! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Breathe
:D *fist pump*
YES!!!!
I'm torn between doing some sort of football touchdown celebration where we bump chests because they're making obvious improvements and doing a fan girl squeal!
YAY!
Author's Response: LOL I think both are acceptable. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Breathe
Awwww! Great chapter. Good grief, is Bella a danger magnet or what? I'm excited to hear we'll have a resolution of sorts in two chapters. You are leading me to believe it will be a positive resolution and if it's not, you are playing with our hearts here and I fear for you. Kidding. Sort of.
Author's Response: Haha you'll just have to wait and see how it turns out! Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Breathe
where else am I going to go - my favorite line!! Love the selfless Bella and the scared-shitless-of-losing-Bella Edward. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Chapter 13 already sent in for validation!
Reviewer: blkeyes_redlips (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Breathe
Ah, fuck. Made me happy, but the divorce papers! That's screaming for a major fight and blow out. Can't wait <333
Author's Response: Haha thanks! Yea next couple of chapters are going to get heavy again
Reviewer: jammybuggerlove (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Breathe
awwww. really one of the best stories that i wait for updates here at twilighted. :D
Author's Response: Thank you SO much!
Reviewer: Edward Lives (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Breathe
Sigh. :) Excellent!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Kalimando (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Breathe
*happy le sighs* I want their discussion to go well. I want the divorce papers to get lost in the mail or sent to Timbuktu with no hope of ever reaching their intended destination. I want these two blockheads to not give up one one another. I want another update. Please? :D
Such a good chapter. This story gets better and better!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. Next chapter has already been sent in for validation!!
Reviewer: Iwant2sparkle (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Breathe
Hurrah for Heroward! Awwwwe. Gah. Chapter 14 can't get here soon enough! Although I hope it a good turning point and not a bad one....
Author's Response: Next couple chapters will actually be a little angsty. Stick with me though! :)
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Breathe
Edward's gonna make me cry!
Author's Response: Haha aw well next chapter might get to ya too! :(
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Faking It, Genuinely
The end here so great that I'll be damned if I can remember much of what I read in this chapter. Let's see it works both ways, Night, love. And a couple other references to love. And the kiss....I do remember the kiss. But that big old galoot Emmett pretty much made me forget it all when he told her the kiss seemed real. *lesigh* It was real, wasn't it?!
So now that Bella has come to a dawning happy tears could easily flow and i giggle.....
Sandra
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Next chapter is Edward's POV and we will see some revelations on his part! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: NenaTH (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Faking It, Genuinely
eeeeek!! cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much! Chapter 12 just sent in!!
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Faking It, Genuinely
awww. Not looking forward to the angst! I love the fluff. Disappointed that they didn't have hot birthday sex!!!
Author's Response: You are not alone in that, honey. Thanks for reading! I'm glad you are enjoying the lighter chapters...the next couple will be angsty. Just a warning! :)
Reviewer: blueschicka (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Faking It, Genuinely
SHIT SHIT SHIT!!! Not cool to end it here!
Author's Response: Was it a cliffhanger? Somebody else said this too lol. I didn't think it was a cliffhanger. Sorry if it was though! As I have said before, when I write cliffhangers, it is not intentional! Thank you for reading!!!
Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Faking It, Genuinely
:)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Faking It, Genuinely
This chapter was so perfect. :) The gift Bella gave to Edward was great. So sweet. :) I am glad they kissed. Finally a real kiss. :) Emmett was great at the end. I am glad Bella has finally realised she isn't faking it anymore. Great work. :) Look forward to the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are liking it! Next chapter just sent in! :)
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