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Reviewer: asja (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Say Everything
Merry Christmas! And no reason to be anxious about anything ;)
This chapter really did justice to the rest of the story. You get to read a lot of B/E makeup moments, but his one is great, becuase it's so gentle and the story is actually grounded in emotions. You really did a good job explaining what the issues were and how they affected them.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's great to hear that. :)
Reviewer: sospecial21 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 09:47 AM · On: All Fall Down
My only suggestion, too much swear words. Im not one who likes alot of swearing in a story, i think it takes away from your writing and its in poor style, to me, not to be mean. I try to picture my author and i am sure you are a nice person, do you curse this much in real life? Just a suggestion, less swearing,lol. But i love your story otherwise, you are great
Author's Response: Haha no I don't curse this much in real life. At all. Keep in mind that Edward is frustrated and the cursing only serves to emphasize how he is feeling. Sorry if it bothers you, but thanks for reading!
Reviewer: scdeloney (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Say Everything
I loved the turning point..glad they started working on their problems.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: pepper_cucumber (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Say Everything
what a good Christmas gift you gave us. i just checked my email for any holiday wishes and received notification that you updated-i was ecstatic! Thank you very much! i hope we can expect fluffiness from now on after some angst-ridden chapters... this is the best chap so far. And yeah its true not all problems will be solved in sitting, through time it will so thank you for keeping the story real. Merry Christmas!
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you liked it! Some definite sweetness is ahead! :)
Reviewer: kam (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Say Everything
thank god
Author's Response: :) thanks for reading!
Reviewer: gxtgal (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Say Everything
Great Chapter, I am so glad they have made up. I don't know if I could take angst on Christmas Day. I am still worried about the divorce papers coming in the mail....
Author's Response: Thanks! No one has forgotten about them. I have some very observant readers. You guys are amazing.
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Say Everything
I loved this chapter all the anxiety and the love was poured out between these two and two thumbs up to Rosalie for her plan it did work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now what will happen when the papers come is he going to tell her about them and they have a burning of the papers to start their knew life.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! You'll just have to wait and see what happens! :)
Reviewer: salem2004 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Say Everything
I am happy now. It's about time. Thanks to Rose and Emmett ;) Hope they move back to be near family and have a baby:) Love this story. Happy New Year
Author's Response: Happy New Year to you, too. And thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: quellabruna (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Say Everything
This was such a great Christmas present to start the day off with! I love that these two FINALLY started talking- and listening. Emmett and Rosalie are two sneaky geniuses.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. And yup, Emmett and Rosalie are pretty amazing, though they have something coming to them ;) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: ddot (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Say Everything
What a wonderful Christmas Present lol
I was so suprised to see an update today that I thought today was Sunday and wondered why we didn't go to church HAHAHAHA
Wonderful update...i'm so happy their fighting has come to an end concerning this particular issue
Author's Response: Haha thanks I'm glad you liked the early Christmas present!
Reviewer: lovesam66 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:48 AM · On: Say Everything
I love you I love u!!!! This was by far the most amazing chapter!!!!!! There r so many thing to mention, but it would take to long. Let me just say finally they r back together together!!! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked their reunion. I was definitely nervous about it :)
Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Say Everything
what an awesome reunion! I loved so many lines in this chapter. My absolute favorite is "I stopped pretending a long time ago." Speaks volumes. Merry Christmas to you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: sospecial21 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:42 AM · On: The Deal
My only thing is, Bella shouldh ave let him explain at some point. I know where you are going with this story and i wont be critical cause i like your direction. I just hate it so when bella and edward are at odds. They are my favorite couple. You are a great writer, really good
Author's Response: Thank you so much. And I know it's hard watching Edward and Bella falling apart, but now their relationship can only be stronger!
Reviewer: Kalimando (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:26 AM · On: Say Everything
LOVED this! You so made my day!
I don't want the story to end.
Author's Response: Thanks! And we still have a ways to go so no worries :)
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Say Everything
Merry Christmas... Great chapter, the make-up scene was perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you! i'm really glad you liked it!
Reviewer: lmouille (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Say Everything
i am so happy they worked everything out. i hope from now on everything is going to go good.
Author's Response: They definitely have some stuff to work through but light heartedness ahead!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Say Everything
Oh! Merry Christmas! Yes, I just printed this off and I'm taking it to my kitchen to read between fixing Christmas dinner for everyone!! I have been checking for an update daily! How SWEET of you to give us all a present!! Thank You!! *hugs* Have a wonderful holiday all!!
Joanie
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope your holiday was great! I hope you liked the chapter!
Reviewer: penguin08 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Say Everything
I really liked this chapter, but I still feel as though they are going to have a hard time getting back into the groove of things. When you stop living with someone you form new habits and such, so it will be interesting to see them move back in together and see how things have changed. Great chapter, and Merry Christmas!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it and yup, definte shyness/uneasiness ahead as these two try to get used to being a couple again.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Say Everything
thanks for the xmas present! I'm such a bad mother...I'm stalling my kids opening their stuff so I can finish this chapter!
Author's Response: Haha well thank you for reading!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Say Everything
All I can say is WOW! This chapter said and did it all. I know (as you wrote) that they have a long way to go but this is a perfect beginning.
Thank god for Rose and Emmett for setting it up for these two to finally talk! The divorce papers still bother me, I wish they would get there and they could just burn them together!
Have a very Merry Christmas and a great New Year and I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Defintely some fun and exciting times ahead. People are worried about those divorce papers. They may just make their presence known soon. Thanks for reading!!!
Reviewer: shannt27 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Say Everything
Finally!!!! I love it. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: MonkeyStar (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Say Everything
That was the best chapter yet!!! I loved it and I am soooo glad they are back together!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Say Everything
Thank you :) A great Christmas present. Just amazing. It really made my day. I am so happy that they have declared their love for each other. :)
A couple of things?
No. 1 - The divorce papers are on their way? I want to know what Bella will do when they arrive? I am sort of worried.
And second - Does the family ever find out that they had separated temporarily?
Can't wait to read more soon.
Hope you had a great Christmas and best wishes for the New Year. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and all of your questions will be answered eventually!!! :)
Reviewer: something to be (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 05:45 AM · On: Say Everything
A lovely resolution, they know they still have issues but they also know they can't live without each other. I can't wait to see how smug Rosalie is when her plan works. Also drunk, sad Edward = adorable!
Merry Christmas!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Kels1986 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Say Everything
MERRY CHRISTMAS and all that jazz! Well that was about bloody time! Perfect Christmas present, lve it love you and cant wait for more! Will there before before Tuesday cos I'm going to Japan and won't have continuous access to the web!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And next chapter has been sent in for validation! :)
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