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Reviewer: fionia (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 09:37 AM · On: Keep On
Great chapter as always!
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Keep On
Lol bless! :)
AChilles
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Keep On
Ok, that was awesome! I know exactly how Edward and Bella were feeling. ;) I'm glad the cat is out of the bag and all's well with Rose and Emmett. I really am going to hate to see this end. It's been a favorite! Great writing!!
Joan
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Keep On
Now this was a happy chapter. Yeah, I know, the girls were all tearing up at one point or another but it was still a happy chapter.
The time Edward and Jasper spent together really warmed my heart. In all the stories the girls go off and shop and well, they have girl time. I always appreciate when an author gives the guys good quality bonding time.
As for the Edward/Bella front we can see how far they have come and how they continue to talk. There is a certain bounce in their step and they both look happy.
And don't you know what was about to happen in the back seat of Jasper's car was going to be good. I could not help but laugh at the whole scene as it played out. I am still laughing at the looks on Rosalie and Emmett's faces and what thoughts were runing through their minds.
This chapter was just so good. We had some tender moments with Edward and Bella. E/B and A/J got to spend some time together. E/B and E/R got to clear the air between them. Yep. It was an all around great chapter.
Sandra
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Keep On
hahahaha! great chapter! glad em and rose had a chat witht them!
Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 07:08 AM · On: Keep On
Oh I LOVED this chapter. I really loved the end. that was too funny them getting caught in the car by Rose and Emment. GREAT JOB. I will be sad when this story is over I have really enjoyed it. thanks
Reviewer: saene (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Keep On
great chapter
im glad that bella and edward are talking
to rose and emmet again.
cant wait for more.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Sour Retributions
!!!!LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!
We knew when the next chapter came to an end the games would begin on E/B behalf. I never expected it to be so much fun though. I began to laugh the moment I pictured Rosalie's face when she realized what had happened to her dress. Emmett's arrest elicited the same reaction.
And while he sat in his jail cell waiting to be "rescued" it was so much fun to read of the further adventures of Rosalie as she ran from one task to the other.
Once Emmett realized he had been had he took it in stride. Yeah, all right, I may have felt a little bad for Rosalie when she got tears in her eyes but at least she apologized, they both did, to Edward anyway. I did find it very touching that Emmett went to Rosalie to comfort her and share the blame in all that they had put Edward and Bella through.
When Bella came in and sat on Edward's lap we did see just how hurt she had been by the whole thing. But more importantly we saw how he lovingly comforted her and that was sigh worthy.
Now about that bath ......
Sandra
Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2010 07:12 AM · On: Sour Retributions
I'm always one for a good laugh. So nicely done!! Vary entertaining!!
Now I wish I had some cop friends (hehehe), But then-again, maybe it's good I don't ;)
Reviewer: lullaby369 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Sour Retributions
I loved it! Emmett in jail was priceless.
Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2010 06:53 AM · On: Sour Retributions
Well, i thought it was a little over the top. But, fun. One comment I have: Rosalie in this story is just a bit too bitchy and crass to really be Rosalie, for me. I always saw her as bitchy, but not a bitch and cetainly she seemed to be a woman of class that would never stoop to anything beneath her. Despite, that I like your human alternatives quite a bit.
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Sour Retributions
I absolutely loved this. :) You did a great job.
II loved everything that Bella and Edward did to Rose and Em. hahhaha
Look forward to more soon
Reviewer: sospecial21 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Sour Retributions
This was cute. I think you did a wonderful job. I like how you planned out your revenege it was funny. It made me laugh alot. good job.
Reviewer: KateCayce (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Sour Retributions
Payback's a bitch! And yours was awesome!
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Sour Retributions
Great chapter.
Reviewer: Twilvr17 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 09:05 PM · On: Sour Retributions
Post Soon!!!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Sour Retributions
I loved the way Edward and Bella got back at them it was so funny I was LMAO.
Reviewer: achilles (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Sour Retributions
Loving this storyline - thank you.
Achilles
Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Sour Retributions
I have to say I liked the payback for Emmett, but as for Rosalie's... too childish. That's my honest opinion :) Still, one of my favorite stories. Thank you
Reviewer: whatacoward (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Sour Retributions
I get that Bella and Edward wanted payback, but I would be murderous if they did to me what they did to Rosalie. Seriously. I wouldn't talk to them for weeks. Emmett and Rosalie got them back togheter didn't they? They could have gotten their payback in some other way. Seriously, I would be livid, I would destroy their things, I would be livid!
Reviewer: ladybugcullen (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Sour Retributions
Great Chapter!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:20 AM · On: Sour Retributions
This chapter was brilliant. Not only did they get payback but rose and em really learn their lesson. And it was funny at the same time.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 09:25 AM · On: Sour Retributions
THIS!!!
WAS!!!
EPPPPPIIICCCC!!
I feel like I should bow down at your feet because this was BY FAR!!! the BEESSSTTT thing I've ever read.
I laughed. I felt angry. I laughed. I felt happy. IT WAS AWESOME!! YOU ARE AWWESOME!!
(Caps=FANGIRL EXCITEMENT!!)
Reviewer: melindadasril (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:58 AM · On: Sour Retributions
lol.Nice!!thas so funny!!!plis2 update next chapter.Lol
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Sour Retributions
No need to worry it was funny. I laughed right along with every crazy stunt. It was really good. And brought closure to a lot of the angst. Although I do love the angst. Funny is great too. Bring us more.
~Shani
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