Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:34 AM · On: All Fall Down
Edward needs to stop his fucking WHINING. (Ok, Bella does, to)
Edward continually let Tanya into his life and his relationship with his wife. Bella WARNED him. She warned him over and over and over again. But did he listen?
Author's Response: Haha I see what you are saying, but Bella was definitely in the wrong too. Don't worry, things are going to get better. Next chapter will be amusing :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
Gosh...how are they going to pull this off!!
Author's Response: Haha I'm sure you'll enjoy how they do it :) I am enjoying writing it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
I love their bickering. Bella does seem to be a tad bit harsh to Edward though...but she does think he cheated, so it's understandable. I'm awaiting your next chapter!
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Author's Response: thanks! glad you like it :)
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
Awesome work!
Interesting how Edward seems so in love with her still, while Bella seems much better at hiding it!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the reivew :) Yes, these two are an interesting pair
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
poor edward!
update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. Update coming by Monday 10-19!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 03:33 PM · On: The Deal
great chapter!
Author's Response: thanks!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 03:18 PM · On: What Just Happened
great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you (:
Reviewer: Gryphon (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
Bella's a bitch. Not only is she acting like a stubborn, self righteous and over emotional shrew, she's making me want to smack her...and I'm not normally a violent person.
I know people like her in real life, and it's annoying. *sigh*
I hope you fix her soon....
Author's Response: Don't worry, she gets her head out of her ass in the next couple of chapters ;) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: marcy20 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
I absolutely love the chapter. It was very good and I really, really hope these two stop being so stubborn and do it already!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: bb1 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
I really like this story but I really hope that Bella will stop being a bitch and you know, listens to Edward. Team Edward all the way. Bells basically made her life miserable without any help from Edward. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! And you will definitely appreciate the next chapter :)
Reviewer: rugger (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
ahhh i LOVE THIS STORY like you have nooooo idea! I hope you update sooner rather than later b/c I adore this story! I get so excited when I get an e-mail saying that I have mail!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot! Update will be coming by next Monday! Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: gabriella (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
i feel like bella is struggling more. she keeps forgetting that she should hate edward but keeps being mean. so far i think its all pretty realistic. theyve been seperated for 3 months they arent going to kiss and make up right away. you have me nervous saying this story is more controversial than others. what do you mean by that????? i just hope they find their way back (i think im going to be repeating that for each review) im curious about whats happening next especially with your warning. cant wait though
HEA!!! please ;-)
Author's Response: Haha thanks, i'm glad you like it. And I mean it's controversial based on peoples' reviews; some are Team Edward and others are Team Bella so there is a mix of who people think is in the right. Don't worry, you'll like where it's headed. I mentioned in the review below that next update will come Monday. I mean NEXT monday. Just so there is no confusion! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: asja (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
Absolutely genious! I love your original details, which are very rare in fan fiction, i.e. the bottle-spit thing on the plane. Nice.
This is my favorite chapter, keep up the good work and hurry up with the updates, this is becoming my favorite story :D
Author's Response: Aww thank you. That means a lot! Next chapter will be up by Monday!
Reviewer: livvi84 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
I hope there won't be extreme angst for many more chapters. I just want to slap them upside the head Emmett-style.
Author's Response: There won't be don't worry. This story is meant to be fun but next chapter is angsty. They WILL recover and it will get better and I'm sure you will like where it goes :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
these poor kids, they are putting themselves thru such torture...and how unnecessary as they both love one another DEEPLY
Author's Response: They do and it is sad but it must get bad before it gets better :) Thanks you for the review!
Reviewer: Twilightedaddict (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
Aw, that was kind of mean of Bella-- playing with poor Edward like that. I'm anxious to have them hash it out and for Bella to finally hear that Edward had done nothing wrong. I keep thinking that after all those years together, she'd at least listen-- I mean, if I caught my husband in a position like that, I really have a hard time thinking I wouldn't hear him out.
I look forward to the next chapters, even though they'll be hard.
Author's Response: Thank you! And yea next chapter is Edward's turn and I think everyone is going to feel a huge weight lifted off their shoulders when Edward finally gets his say haha. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: mcnavy (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
I don't know this is really sort of hard to read, don't know if I'm going to be able to continue
Author's Response: I do hope you stick with it. It will be angsty in the next chapter but afterwards it will lighten up and be more fun.
Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
I can't wait until all is out and Bella feels like shit. I am team Edward on this one!
Author's Response: Then you are probably going to really like the next chapter as long as you're cool with some angst :)
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
This is freaking awesome...great plot line...this one I haven't come across! The writing is very good also. I can't wait to see where it goes. I'm a little confused with the whole - taking 4 weeks off from work for a wedding - thing, but I'm just gonna go along with it :) Also, I think Bella's being a real be-otch about this whole thing. Yes, in her mind, he was the cause of the whole mess, but really - isn't she just as guilty? Now that I think about it, Bella's pretty OOC in this story...normally she's always taking things onto herself and making things her own fault. I guess it's just the bitterness making her act up! :D
Author's Response: Haha yea I didn't mention that they took four weeks off but they did because they are both in pretty high standing in their jobs and so they can...I'm going to make an author's note on that. Thanks for pointing it out!
Reviewer: youaremyvienna (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
Alice and Jasper are going to figure it out quick if our favorite stubborn couple doesn't try a little harder to fool everyone! My prediction is that Jasper or Esme figure it out first...if Jasper hasn't already. I cannot wait to meet your Emmett!
Author's Response: Haha I'm excited about writing Emmett too. He is actually introduced in the next chapter--briefly--but more of him to come! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: booty (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
I read your note and am a little sad that things have to get worse before they get better. I hope they will get better soon because it really breaks my heart that they aren't together.
Author's Response: I know me too, but it is unavoidable and I do hope you stick with my story.
Reviewer: violetrose (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
Gah i cant wait for your next post! this story is so good, & i love how bella & edward are. until next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm really glad you like it!
Reviewer: minniesammy (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
This one was very funny. Cannot wait to see what happens next. I hope something good happens between them soon!
Author's Response: All in time :) Next chapter is sort of sad though and then after it will be lightening up.
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
dogs are supposed to sleep on the floor and not the bed. Way to go Bella
Author's Response: Haha I love how some people are Team Edward and others are Team Bella. It's very fun. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2009 06:35 PM · On: What Just Happened
omg he is such a dog and so is jacob Bleh!!! Men are scum but I am very interested in reading more
Author's Response: Thank you I'm glad you are enjoying it so far :)
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