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Reviewer: laura_janneck (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 02:23 PM · On: All Fall Down
I jusr read the first four chapters now and I'm so sad that there aren't more up yet. But that mean I've something to look forward too.
This is an unusal but good storyline and it's very well written, a joy to read.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it :) Next chapter is going to be up in about a week!
Reviewer: bdgogal (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:38 PM · On: All Fall Down
awww. i was, like, crying. i really think alice is gonna figure it out. she is just that kind of person. and i dont think it is dark and angsty. its an emotional story that gonna need a little yeling. they wont come to a resolution unless they confess their true feelings.
Author's Response: Exactly :) Like I've been saying, it is all a process, but in the end it is for the best. Fun times coming up! Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:15 PM · On: All Fall Down
This...made me want to punch a baby.
Just saying.
Author's Response: Sorry :/ You'll like the lighter times coming up ;)
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 01:05 PM · On: All Fall Down
love it
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: marcy20 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:52 PM · On: All Fall Down
I think sometimes things need to get worse before they get better. I feel so sad for these two because they obviously still love each other. I feel bad for Edward because he didn't do anything and he must feel like crap after he realize Bella never trust him. As for Bella imagine walking in on your husband with and almost naked woman on his lap, with all her insecurities. Yes she never gave him the chance to explain but I understand both sides of the story. This angst is killing me girl, please make them go to therapy or something soon!
Author's Response: Haha don't worry things will be looking up. This conversation was the first step in the right direction. I'm glad so many people are seeing both sides of the story and not taking sides too much because they obviously both have some issues that need to be figured out. It takes time though so I hope everyone can be a little patien. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: gabriella (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:37 PM · On: All Fall Down
this was a fantastic chapter. all of your warnings were dead on; it was absolutely heartbreaking. i feel soooo bad for edward. he loves bella and she seems to not have not been so sure about their relationship. im glad you did this it had to be done. i think their conversation is the first step in moving forward. edward now knows how bella feels and the ball is in bellas court in some ways to decide what should happen next.
i cant help but think maybe alice is at least speculating that something is wrong. cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you. This conversation was definitely the first step and I'm glad you see it is a process. Things cannot just go back to the way they were just like that.
Reviewer: themoose-within (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:34 PM · On: All Fall Down
Love this story, I'm glad I found it. Edward is so brooding, and clearly "too nice" in the beginning, and it's about time he found his voice.
So now it's Bella's turn to grow up, and stop being such an insecure little bitch? Yeah?
Anyways, it's intriguing and I'm stoked for the fun and funny bits. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm excited about the fun times too! And I know Bella seems like a bitch, but there are reasons for the way she feels and next chapter shows us that :)
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 12:08 PM · On: All Fall Down
Nice. Glad that Edward got some balls and told off Bella who always seem to have negative self-esteem problems, and like to play the victim, giving into pity parties. The only other thing that I would have Edward admit to her was his love for her because he does love her.
And Edward was right, the thing with Tayna was bad but Bella rushed into the hands of the first man she found afterwards to get comfort, without waiting for an explanation or reason for what happened from Edward. What a hypocrite!!!
I hope that his family, when they find out about the divorce and the circumstances surrounding it, do not get down on Edward and blame him for the breakup. And if they do, I hope that he tell them exactly where to get off.
Update soon.
Author's Response: Haha thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I know Bella seems to be coming off as a bitch right now, but maybe next chapter will shed some light on why she feels the way she does. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:11 AM · On: All Fall Down
God why did Edward act like that? Why couldn't he man up and tell Bella the truth?
Bella you are an idiot! After 8 years you still feel like you aren't good enough? You need to grow up!
These two really need to tell the family because at least that group may be able to knock some sense into both of them!
Author's Response: I'm glad you at least see they are both in the wrong. There is lots of controversy and people choosing sides right now, but Bella and Edward are both to blame for this whole mess. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: elysium (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:09 AM · On: All Fall Down
Love the plot so far, especially the new moon bit near the end of the chapter! Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm glad you liked that line. For some reason the whole monologue Edward says when he is leaving Bella is one of my favorite parts of all the books so I was excited to incorporate it here.
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 11:03 AM · On: All Fall Down
Yeah this was a hard chapter to read FOR SURE. So bella finally let's edward come clean...and bella is VERY insecure...and edward lashes out...
can't wait to see how you redeem these two.
'the course of true love never did run smooth' william shakespeare.
marriage takes work, patience, trust, love and loyalty....if you lose one of these things...you're doomed to fail.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm happy that you see this is all a process and they can't just kiss and make up right away. It just isn't realisitc.
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Awkward Arrangements & Tainted Homecomings
Wow I know Bella saw something really bad with Edward but she really needs to grow up and listen to Edward and Edward you need to tell Bela that you don't want a divorce!
Just discovered this story today and will be adding it to my favorites!
Good concept and very good story. My only request is that it not get dragged out for 40 chapters or at least give us some lemons between Bella and Edward before they make up!
Author's Response: Don't worry, it isn't going to be dragged on. But it is a process. Making up right away is just not realistic so I hope you are all going to be patient with them! Thanks for the review and happy to be on your favorites!
Reviewer: rikera (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:38 AM · On: All Fall Down
So I don't know if I'm the only one on Edward's side but I'm really not digging Bella right now. Not saying that Edward didn't do anything wrong because he should of done something about Tanya knowing how uncomfortable Bella was. With that said Bella basically just made a mockery of their entire relationship. Saying that she wasn't good enough for him and was just waiting for him to go be with someone else. Why would he stay with her for years if he didn't want to be with her? I can understand insecurities, everyone has them but Bella takes it too far.
Author's Response: You're definitely not the only one on Edward's side but you are surpsingly one of the few. I expected more back lash toward Bella for jumping to conclusions, but it seems to be quite the opposite. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:15 AM · On: All Fall Down
it hurts but i really like this story; its vert interesting!
i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you I'm glad you like it!
Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:14 AM · On: All Fall Down
Wow! Amazing chapter. Marriage is hard. I look forward to more. Great writing.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 10:11 AM · On: All Fall Down
God i love his sooo much!
Im glad that this chapter was how it is, the story needed it!
I am in LOVE with this, hope to see another update very soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you see this chapter was definitely needed.
Reviewer: xNOMx (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:55 AM · On: All Fall Down
I love this! Cant wait for them to see sense!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yea these two have a little ways to go before they can pull their heads out off their asses :)
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:53 AM · On: All Fall Down
I want them to get back together .I am so sad for them.
Author's Response: I know, but it's a process. It just isn't plausible for them to suddenly kiss and make up. It's going to take a few baby steps :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: asja (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:53 AM · On: All Fall Down
Great job once again. I don't mind the angst, it's a necessary part of the story and it makes everything better in the end.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you understand that angst is definitely necessary at times. :) Update coming by next Sunday!
Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:50 AM · On: All Fall Down
Wow.. That was just amazing. What a great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:21 AM · On: All Fall Down
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Tookie83 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:03 AM · On: All Fall Down
i love this story
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Author's Response: Aw thank you!
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:02 AM · On: All Fall Down
awwww that made me want to cry!
Author's Response: :( I'm sorry. Next chapter will be a lighter mood!
Reviewer: Twilightedaddict (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:46 AM · On: All Fall Down
Yeah that sucks. Has he even had the chance to tell Bella what actually happened?
That was hard to read--Edward being so emotionless and cold, telling her she'd get what she "wanted." I hope that Bella stops being so stubborn soon--that she gives Edward a chance and apologizes for what she did. maybe a move from Bella will soften Edward again.
Very sad.
Author's Response: I know that chapter was very hard for me to write because it was really sad. But Edward is sick of Bella's accusations and he just doesn't want to deal with all these emotions anymore. Don't worry, things will start to look up soon ;)
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:38 AM · On: What Just Happened
Look, Assward... when your WIFE tells you that she's not comfortable with someone who is CHASING YOU like a bitch in heat... that's a sign to get rid of the OTHER woman.
If Assward had shown a little fucking loyalty and fired the slut instead of laughing Bella's concerns off, he wouldn't be in this position, would he?
Author's Response: It's very interesting how diverse some of your guys response are. Some are Team Edward and others are Team Bella. Remember though that they both have issues that need to be worked on together. Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoyed it!
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