Reviewer: loveofhenry (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
home is in Edwards arms, now they just need to get their hearts back on track
Author's Response: I know I loved that. Bella and Edward belong together...haha says the author who seems to be tearing them apart, right? Glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: envy (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
At this point I really just want everyone to find out that Bella & Edward are separated before the wedding happens. ya know. Just so they won't be put in those awkward positions.
Author's Response: Yea, their situations just gets stickier and stickier! Thanks for reading :)
Reviewer: angela2805 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
I agree with the authors note...GET ON WITH IT! LOL...no really I love this story and its made me cry several times actually. Very good writing of the emotional stuff I just want it to work out!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you are liking the emotions. They are obviously what make this story what it is. Next chapter is not angsty so I hope you enjoy the break!!
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Rose needs to step back or she might get punched.
Author's Response: Haha I think deep deep down...you love her! :) I know I do. She is representing for all of us. Saying what we all wish we could say. Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
i know the angst is necessary that is part of the reason to keep reading and it keeps the excitement up, but omg how much do I love Edward right now.
Author's Response: Haha I know...when Edward gets all upset and protective it so so sexyyy :) Glad you are liking it! Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Love it
Author's Response: :) thank you
Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Great chapter. And sometimes getting from point A to point B isn't always a straight line. So I personally don't mind the detours and side streets on the journey. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying the ride with me--bumpy as it may be!!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Please sir.
I want some more.
...I just got all Oliver Twist on your butt! PLEASE let them realize they love each other and are being beyond stupid. UGH!
Author's Response: Haha that made my night. Thanks for reading :) Chapter 10 has been sent in for validation!!
Reviewer: Kalimando (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
I'm kind of glad that you're not telling us whether or not this story will have a HEA. There's nothing to look forward to or anticipate if we already know the ending, though I am hoping they can resolve their differences.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you appreciate the need for some mystery!! Thank you for reviewing :)
Reviewer: booty (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Again!? You are truly trying to rip everyone's heart out aren't you? I must say that you are lucky that I now can just go watch New Moon and be happy again after reading this! LOL!
Author's Response: Haha I know it is difficult, but thanks for sticking with me. And, really? 'New Moon' put me in physical pain from all the Edward leaving...and then getting attacked by the Volturi. I didn't think it would be so hard to watch because it didn't pain me too much to read. Anyways...thanks for reading my story!!! :)
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
I loved this so much!
Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
Reviewer: NenaTH (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
looved the chapter and cant wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Reviewer: Twilightedaddict (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
yeah I hardly see how more angst is necessary. It's been angst since the beginning, and it's only getting more painful.
And I agree with Emmett- its damn time they sat down and talked honestly w/ e/o like effing adults. Enough! Neither of them wants this divorce, so it's ridiculous that they don't just freaking speak up!
Author's Response: I know it's hard, but thanks for sticking to it. I think Rosalie and Emmett serve as all of us--saying what we all want so desperately to say.
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
great chapter as always! i am being as patient as possible cause i know that its gonna be worth it, so, i trust you!
i loved that edward saving her resulted in things being brought forward out in the open. even though its not a resolution, i think its something!
great work! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! They are making progression--they are just tiny tiny steps at a time :)
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Oh what a super chapter! I really really loved it! There would be no story without the angst, so....
Looking forward to what comes next with these two!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you see the angst is necessary! Chapter 10 posted hopefully tomorrow :)
Reviewer: rubytuesday (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
need. more
Author's Response: Chapter 10 already sent in for validation :)
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Yes, I'm really enjoying this story and watch anxiously every Monday to read your latest update. I'm sorry I didn't take the time to review the last chapter, to tell you the truth, I was too disturbed by their hurt to form an intelligent opinion. This was a very sweet and satisfying chapter, we can see a glimpse of a light at the end of the tunnel of angst.
Author's Response: Aw thank you! And no worries. I appreciate your reviews no matter what. I'm glad you liked the chapter!!!
Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Yes, there was angst. But there was progression. God, I hope there is a HEA. What a sad reason for a great love to die, though I'm sure it happens in RL for lesser reasons. Great chapter, thanks.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm glad you see the reality of the story as that is one of the main factors in my writing it.
Reviewer: gabriella (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
i do love the angst- but i hope it ends happily! edwards reaction is classic and shows bella that he still cares and possibly loves her. i cant wait to see what happens in ch. 15 i hope everything blows up for the best.
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you are liking it, even with the angst. Next chapter is actually not angsty at all so I hope you like it!!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
And I thought the last chapter was filled with with hope. Pshaw. It was nothing compared to this one. I read this last night and my heart is still fluttering!
I wondered how things would go at Charlies house. Charlie was so happy to see everyone. But I think the thing that made my heart happiest was that he didn't seem to suspect anything and being a police that comes second nature. This leads me to believe that Bella's heart is changing and she is falling in love with Edward all over again.
We are seeing more and more little changes as their dynamic shifts chapter to chapter. In this chapter the walk down memory lane with the prom picture was so sweet. Prom was a milestone for them in that it changed each of their lives forever. I sighed. When it came time to go to bed and he lifted the covers and she felt the weight on the mattress she smiled. So did I.
Rosalie provided quite the comic relief for what chapter would not be complete without a meddlesome friend? For a minute I thought their cover would be blown when Bella snapped back but alas you kept that from happening. Nice save, btw.
As the chapter continues we find ourselves in Port Angeles. Naturally no trip would be complete without a visit to the bookstore. I figured Edward would come looking for her, he would tell she already has 12 copies of Wuthering Heights and after a passionate discussion about the characters he would convuince her to let him pay for the new copy and they would be on their way to meet the others.
I did not expect a short cut to the club or the men in the alley. Luckily for Bella, Edward was close enough to quickly don his shining armor. Girlie girl that I am I may have squeed just a bit as he rode in on his great white steed prepared to do battle for the damsel in distress. The scuffle aside, Edward's reaction afterward told all of us everything we needed to know about his undying love for Bella. Perhaps she sees this too.
Maybe there is hope afterall.......
Sandra
Author's Response: Aw, Sandra, your reviews truly are amazing. Honestly it means a lot that a reader sits and writes such a detailed review, so thank you. I am really glad you are enjoying the story and feel all the emotions of the characters. I, myself, love me some night in shining armor Edward. Glad you also liked the trip to Forks because I thought that was important. Little changes are definitely occuring with these two. Next chapter is a change from the angst--much lighter so I hope you enjoy it. I already sent it in to be validated. Can't wait to hear your thoughts!!
Reviewer: Flo83 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
this story is so good even with the angst ;)
keep up with the good work. I can't wait until these two finally start getting better!
Author's Response: Thanks! I love that people are liking the angst--hard as it may be to read at times. Next chapter is much lighter, as I have said to many other people already. Hope you like it :)
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Next chapter already sent in for validation :)
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Wow, can't these two just talk it out! Yell it out? Anything?
Driving me crazy but boy is it a good crazy!
Author's Response: Haha thank you so much!! I know it is frustrating, but the progression must be this way otherwise it wouldn't be realistic and the story would be over too fast!! Who would want that? Thanks for reading!!!!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 04:45 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Awesome chapter!! The angst is so delicious! You just want to hug both Edward and Bella, seeing them hurt so much. I loved that scene behind the bookstore and Edward saving Bella. Then to have him so upset that he had to go around the building to compose himself. I'm glad Bella went after him. Wonderful. I would rather read your story than pick up my book that I'm halfway through and finish it. Keep up the pace. It's perfect!
*hugs*
Joan
Author's Response: Oh thank you so much!! That truly means a lot! I'm really glad you liked the chapter and are enjoying the angst. Sometimes I just can't help myself and I love when Edward gets upset. It makes him so...sexy. Weird as that may sound. Thanks for reading!! Next chapter sent in for validation!! Can't wait to hear your thoughts!!! :)
Reviewer: ange28 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Love this chapter. The trip back to Forks was good. I liked that Bella spent some quality time with Charlie. :) I am so glad Edward was there to save Bella. It made such a great ending. I was so happy when he told her he cared about her. Then they just held each other. Just perfect. :) Can't wait to read more. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are liking all of the different emotions! The next chapter will be much lighter so I hope you enjoy it just as much!! :)
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