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Reviewer: Fe070886 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Just For Today
feewwww... not an angsty chapter! Loved it! But im going to love the next one even more.. at least i hopw that the talk is happening in the next one.. right?
Author's Response: The talk is happening when...the moment comes. Haha, the next couple of chapters are a light build up to the turning point--which as I said takes place in Chapter 15 :) Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: jazzvamp90 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Just For Today
Wow...amazing chapter! I really loved this one! I can't wait to see how the talk goes!
And Edward is right, 'The Event' is just a creepy name. lol
Author's Response: Haha, I thought I should add some humor to cancel out some of the angst. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you for reading :)
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:34 PM · On: What Just Happened
Wow, love it. Definitely.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! :)
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Just For Today
I really liked this chapter! i can't wait to see how The Event goes hopefully Bella uses an open mind during it because it seems Edward has already opened his.
Author's Response: Next chapter we get to see a little into Bella's head and there are a few revelations made on her part. I hope it doesn't disappoint. Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Just For Today
*snicker*
sdnez grabs her pom poms and cheers...
Give me a E,
Give me a V
give me a E,N,T
what does that spell?
EPOV:
no more ice cream for you... I'm cutting you off
SPOV:
*sticks tung out*
Oh, get on with "The Talk", I mean "The Event" already!
EPOV
*rolles eyes*
Author's Response: Haha, well that was extremely entertaining. Thanks for that! Next chapter was just submitted! I hope you like it!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Just For Today
great chapter! i cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: I just submitted it! Thanks for reading and I can't wait to hear your thoughts on Chapter 11!
Reviewer: maserati (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Just For Today
It was definitely nice seeing Edward and Bella have a few moments of just being together. I've been through "The Talk". Hope theirs turns out better than mine. Great writing. Thanks so much.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading!! The next chapter was just submitted! Hope you like it :)
Reviewer: crazy_ash (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Just For Today
wow! the story just keeps on getting better and better there are never dull moments! i love it especially seeing everything from edwards point of view hopefully the talk goes well because i really want bella and edward together again! keep the updates coming!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I'm glad you think it's good. Next chapter was just submitted so I hope you like that one as well!
Reviewer: TRACY6315 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Just For Today
The tension is slowly killing me!!!! Cannot wait for the moment of truth!!
Excellent chapter! thank for writting!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm glad you are liking the build up!!
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Just For Today
Poor boy, if they don’t have The Infamous Talk soon, he is going to have a stroke due to over thinking.
Author's Response: Haha, yes Edward is going insane. Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: Blue Indigo999 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Just For Today
Ohh man! Now I'm scared for the next chapter! I almost don't want to look! I just love their chemistry and the EPOV in this chapter. And about Taylor Lautner, I don't get the big fuzz about him.
Author's Response: Next chapter is actually lighter than this one. We're building up to the climax so I don't want to drown you all in angst. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Just For Today
It's true that this was a nice change from all the angst that had been going on. And as usual, I adore Jealousward (and Protectiveward from last chapter!)
Great work!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked the less angsty side to it. Next chapter was just submitted!!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Just For Today
Well are they finally going to talk? At least Edward finally realized that by just letting those women flirt with him was bad even if he didn't do anything with them. It still hurts a woman when her man gets flirted with and he acts like Edwards does unitentionally which in turn sends mixed signals to these woman that he might just be reseptive to their advances.
Bella really needs to get some confidence in herself and her relationship with Edward and realize that she is his "one". These two need this talk and they seem to be making alot of headway and Bella calling Edward her husband to James shows that she still sees Edward as hers and hopefully she will wake up!
Author's Response: Next chapter is definitely filled with some Bella revelations since we got a glimpse of Edward's in this one. I hope you like it!
Reviewer: Krismarie94 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Just For Today
I've decided... I'm not going to read this story until it's absolutely finished... I know I wont be able to handle the suspense.
Author's Response: :( I'm sorry, but hopefully you'll like the completed piece. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: flute_genevive (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Just For Today
I am completely in love with this, just so you know. I adored Edward's internal monologue about the name, and about Bela being insecure. I think he's starting to get it, finally.
Also, I'd like to add that I rolled my eyes dramatically when Jacob did his stripper shirt removal trick. That was so engineered to show off his abs, it was almost disgusting. You're not the only one still Team Edward. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it! Next chapter was just submitted! And I totally agree about the Jacob thing. That was really cliche.
Reviewer: booty (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Just For Today
Thanks for a lighter chapter and I am using that word very loosely because it still breaks my heart. Hopefully things are going to be out in the open next chapter!
Author's Response: Things are progressing--it may not be as quickly as everybody would like, but it's all building up. Thanks for reading!!
Reviewer: holdxme3xdownn (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Just For Today
loved this chapterr(:
keep updating!?
Author's Response: Thank you! Just submitted the next chapter!
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 05:09 PM · On: Just For Today
ok, enough with the "creating of tension", its time for the Event.
Author's Response: Haha, we need something to build up to :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: jessica-cullen (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
update today?! Happy Thanksgiving!
Author's Response: Thanks, you too! I know its belated :)
Reviewer: alyssamay (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
please hurry up and write this is my favorite fanfic!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :) Chapter 10 has already been sent in for validation!!
Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
That was amazing, again!
This just keeps getting better and better, i ADORE this so effin much!!
Cannot wait for things to collide :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like the progression!!!
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
NICE...
Author's Response: (: thank you so much
Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 03:14 AM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Edward to the rescue!!!! It is good to see them embracing some truth and openly admitting that they are not OK.... Finally some progress regardless of how minimal it was...that was still a big step.. for Edward to admit to how much he still cares about her.. and for Bella to just accept his comforting embrace... aaawwwhhh.. great chapter... update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you seel all of the little changes because they really are important when all added up. Chapter 10 has just been sent in for validation and should be up by tomorrow!!! Can't wait to hear your thoughts!!!
Reviewer: Edward Lives (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Excellent chapter as always. I LOVE this:
"Bella,” he called quietly. Are you alright?"
"No."
"Me either."
Finally. Some admissions of truth.
And I'm soooo happy with the ending of this chap...in eachother's arms, exactly where they should be. :)
Author's Response: I just love when my readers quote their favorite parts. Most of the time they are mine as well. I loved this part too and am happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading darling :)
Reviewer: rosita (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Home Is Where the Heart(break) Is
Good, very good. PLEASE, PLEASE update soon,,,
Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you. Chapter 10 has been sent in for validation already!!!
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