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Reviews For North Star Rising
Reviewer: maceywoo (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 12:04 PM · On: 1: Communication

I love this story and am looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks.  I've got it about half done, but school is killing me!  Sorry it's taking so long!

Reviewer: ikinz (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 05:53 PM · On: 10: El Huerto de la Niebla

great story!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2008 10:58 AM · On: 10: El Huerto de la Niebla

I am sure you will do fine.  I enjoyed this chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you...I'm hoping I'll do OK, but trying for tasteful is walking a very thin line!

Reviewer: lyinglamb (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 09:40 PM · On: 10: El Huerto de la Niebla

Wow, I love the south of Spain...can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: I do too!  Just got the word I'm going there for 6 months in January!  Hope to write better from there!  Thank for reading!

Reviewer: lyinglamb (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 09:36 PM · On: 8: Inevitable

Jacob just can't get a break!  Love the tension in this one.

Author's Response: I know!  Poor Jacob!  But he still plays a part, I promise!  Thanks for continuing to read!

Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: October 19, 2008 07:03 PM · On: 2: Final Decision

Absolutely awesome chapter. That is a conversation Edward would have had with Bella. So beautifuly worded.

Author's Response: Thanks.  I kept waiting for it to happen in the books, but I think she just implied that it already had...oh well!

Reviewer: Kas_Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 02:38 PM · On: 10: El Huerto de la Niebla

Well, you're doing great so far! Looking forward to the rest!

Author's Response: Thanks!  Dispite my current misgivings, I'm pretty sure that the next one will be out by the weekend!

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 02:26 PM · On: 10: El Huerto de la Niebla


Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: wickedlovely (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 10:41 AM · On: 1: Communication

This story is fantastic. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Thank you.  I'm a little nervous about the next chapter though.  It should be out this weekend.

Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 01:10 PM · On: 8: Inevitable

Can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder if Bella is hurt?

Author's Response:

You'll find out sometime tomorrow!  Thank you for reading...

Reviewer: Bluebloods359 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2008 05:46 PM · On: 8: Inevitable

Oooh, I like the name of the next chapter, I've always found mist to be so eerie but pretty at the same time.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  The next chapter will probably be up tomorrow.  Hope you aren't too disappointed by the irony in that title though!

Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 04:48 PM · On: 7: In-laws

I love this story!

I can't wait to read more.  I hope that you are able to update it soon.

Thanks for such a great story.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.  Trying to take advantage of the weekend and update it a couple of times!

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 03:54 PM · On: 7: In-laws

That was great

Reviewer: roxanne (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 02:31 PM · On: 5: Eternity

Lol! I love how you had Emmett as the pastor..OMLK I was laughing soo far your doing really good.

Author's Response: Ha Ha!  I thought he'd be great.  I'd want him presiding over my wedding any day!  Thank you!

Reviewer: wickedlovely (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2008 02:19 PM · On: 7: In-laws

I'm loving this story. Can't wait to find out what happens.

Author's Response:

Next chapter is in the works tonight.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: PaisleyCrighton (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 08:56 AM · On: 6: Blessing

While it is similar to BD - I am really looking forward to the next chapters. You have captured the characters extremely well. Please update soon!

Author's Response: chapter swerves off a bit more, I promise!

Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 06:01 PM · On: 6: Blessing

This story is truly amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing...I love the feedback!

Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 04:34 PM · On: 5: Eternity

thru ch 5.

Author's Response: ummm...thanks for reading.

Reviewer: lyinglamb (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 11:39 AM · On: 5: Eternity

I'm so copying those vows for my wedding!  NOOOO! Not Bon Jovi!  Couldn't you have made it something, not so Bon Jovi-ish?

Author's Response: I was looking for different bands with similar lines, but I couldn't find any!  That why I added "embarrassed" in the description.  Besides, I thought it was kind of funny!  But thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lyinglamb (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 11:35 AM · On: 3: Bridesmaids

Ha!  Count Draculas!  Precious!

Author's Response: Hee, hee!  It's my favorite!

Reviewer: lyinglamb (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2008 11:33 AM · On: 2: Final Decision

Oh wow!  I can't believe how beautiful this is.  I was right there listening to their talk and worrying about it all withBella.  This is one of the best characterizations that I've read.  I'm reading it all!

Author's Response: Thanks.  I hope to have the next chapter up soon.  Might make my other story a priority first though.  Sorry.

Reviewer: wickedlovely (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 04:39 PM · On: 5: Eternity

I loved all the quotes Edward used in his vows. Bon Jovi!! Ahahaha!!! xD

Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 08:44 AM · On: 5: Eternity

I absolutely loved reading this chapter. The quotations were wonderful and throwing in the line from Bon Jovi was priceless. Just the right amount of humor in a sweet chapter. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you.  I'm taking the weekend to map it ut.  Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon!

Reviewer: wickedlovely (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 10:45 AM · On: 3: Bridesmaids

"I smiled and silently hoped that it was also what happened with Count Draculas."

Hahaha!! I love that line. And I love this fanfic. You've got Bella and Edward down perfectly! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much.  That was my favorite line too!  I'm working on the wedding now, and (I must admit) smiling every moment!

Reviewer: Kelsey-Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2008 09:21 AM · On: 3: Bridesmaids

I love it!!! Please post more soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading.  More on the way, I promise...

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