Reviewer: Debbie1870 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2013 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 14: Is That Possible?
Now Bella and the family with Charlie's help will have to hide the child from Death. Who is running things in Italy?
Reviewer: schoolgirlkmb (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2011 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 8: Heart to Heart
i'd preder it was Renee
Reviewer: mousekitty (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 14: Is That Possible?
I enjoyed the story. But I think you could have done a lot more with the last chapter, where Bella tells Edward that she is pregnant.
Reviewer: shailienieves (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 14: Is That Possible?
awww!!! you ended it too quick!!!
Reviewer: Fadewind (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 14: Is That Possible?
Nce twist overall. The ending was a little abrupt, but hey it leaves you room for a future story or the good 'ol imagination. Either way - I liked it. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 14: Is That Possible?
oooh that could cause a few problems!
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 12:Decision
Informative chapter. I enjoyed that perspecitve, it was unexpected.
Reviewer: rc301258 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 11:...maybe...
I want to see Bella's life with them.
Author's Response: Color me impressed. Two votes with one sentance. (Please note that there really is no sarcasm there) I have not really decided whether or not this Bella would be a good match with a life with the Cullens and I really appreciate that you are voicing an opinion on it.
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 10: Another Sighting
Oh - an extremely short chapter. I may have to begin thinking of you as a tease, but I can't find it within me to care. This story is one of my favorites and I will gladly accept whatever little scraps you offer up. I can't believe you don't have more reviews. I will have to start pimping this story.
Author's Response: I'll try for longer next update. Reviews are really appreciated, though few and far between these days. I'm glad that you enjoy it.
Reviewer: Jaenelle Masen (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 10: Another Sighting
oh let them reconcile...i am sure Emmett would be peeing in his pants in anticipation by now if he actually could pee..
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 8: Heart to Heart
Awesome, of course. I love this story.
Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 8: Heart to Heart
to be honest... I was expecting Renee also..LOL
Nice little surprise ;)
Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 7: Nuisance
Yay! Bella's got her memory back, the Cullens are on the trail, and we shall soon discover which of Bella's parents is a Reaper. I'm guessing Charlie, because Bella was living with Renee, because Charlie's always going on "fishing trips," and I don't know, well just because ...
Hmmm ....
Enjoying your story.
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 6: Messenger of Death
that was awesome! im thinking that im not the only one that has wanted to do that to the vultori at one point or another...
update soon!!!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 6: Messenger of Death
poor edward, he wouldn't understand what she is now! I lvoe the way Aro was killed though!
Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 6: Messenger of Death
Very interesting ... I like Bella's abilities here and your story really draws me in. I don't see how Edward will reconnect with Bella when her memory is gone and someone needs to be dying for her to (briefly) appear, but hopefully love will find a way.
Reviewer: Diana_in_Houston (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 6: Messenger of Death
Very interesting ... I like Bella's abilities here and your story really draws me in. I don't see how Edward will reconnect with Bella when her memory is gone and someone needs to be dying for her to (briefly) appear, but hopefully love will find a way.
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 5: Passage of Time
nice
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 5: Passage of Time
OOOH!! -raises hand- i know which parent is the renegade reaper! its Renee!! ^.^
update soon!!!!!!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 4: Panic
nice
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 4: Panic
I'm surprised by Jasper's reaction, but I am enjoying this. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 4: Panic
O.O oh god..... confused...
update soon!!!
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 3: Didn't See That Coming
woah... confused. but its a good story so far. update soon!!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 3: Didn't See That Coming
That was one short week. I bet Edward is freaking out right about now.
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 3: Didn't See That Coming
Wow, this story is weird, but I like it!
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