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Reviewer: SCWillson (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 05:05 PM · On: Epilogue: This Tale, of the Spider and the Fly

Good story.

Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2012 06:46 AM · On: Epilogue: This Tale, of the Spider and the Fly

I know that this has been out there for a while, but I just found it and was up most of the night reading it :-)    I couldn't put it down!  

Reviewer: kayariley (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 07:53 AM · On: Epilogue: This Tale, of the Spider and the Fly

i really enjoyed this story, but had hoped to find out what ulyimately happenee to demetri. did he find a home with the cullens? did he become a vegetarian? did he settle down with a mate of his own? did he like to play hide and seek with the family? with bella's shield, alice's visions, jasper's empathic gift, edward's telepathy and demetri's tracking gift, that would be awesome!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2011 04:37 PM · On: Epilogue: This Tale, of the Spider and the Fly

I have enjoyed the premise of this story from the very beginning. The idea that Edward was on a special task force for the Volturi checking out claims of vampire laws being broken. He'd read the mind of the suspect after they were located.  If their thoughts betrayed them, they were destroyed if not they were left alone.  New having Phil being a vampire with gift of bringing soul mates together.  Brought Esme and Carlisle together twice and now Edward and Bella.  Bella was being reviewed to be a human with knowledge of vampires.  Edward couldn't read her mind.  She was his singer as well.  Bella didn't only draw Edward through bloodlust, but also magnetic connection leading to plain lust as well.  Feelings of love at first sight for both of them.  He couldn't kill her.  He wanted both her blood, her body, and her forever.  With the help of Jacob he was able to have help overtaking Felix and leaving with Bella to head home to Washington.  It was a moving train heading for a crash course towards disaster.  Knowing the Volturi would eventually come after them for not following their orders to return to Volterra and bring Bella back with them.  Edward wants Bella for himself. Bella seeing Charlie again.  Having Charlie and all the Cullens at the wedding of Edward and Bella.  A little disappointed it was just a civil ceremony at the court house, but it worked.  At least family was there.  I liked the way Bella's powers were enhanced by her projecting her shield around others.   That was really cool.  Knew by the time they were married that Edward and Bella wouldn't be left alone by Volturi.   They were coming after them and threatening the entire Cullen family as well.  So when James and Victoria arrived was just the start.  It was pretty exciting.  I can't say I blamed Edward for wanting to attack and destroy James.  His idea of tearing Bella apart was very nice either.  I'm sure Emmett had fun tearing him and Victoria into pieces.  Having Edward and Bella flying to Italy to face the Volturi alone.  Being met at the airport and forcefullly led to the throne room in Volterra.  Edward hearing the thoughts of Aro and Caius knowing his destruction is based on the oracles prophesies of Edward taking over their power and not his behavior over Paris and Bella.  It has nothing to do with breaking laws or following orders, but fear of the brothers losing their control over the vampires.  Destroying him on the premise of one while secretly doing it to protect themselves and maintain their role of authority.  I loved it when Aro tried to listen to Edward's thoughts and Bella's shield blocked him from everything.  The two of them together are more powerful than Aro.  Stopping Jane's power was great just seeing her getting angrier and angrier.  Also stopping Alec as well.  Edward speaking out loud about not wanting to take away their control, didn't want their power or ruling at all.  He just wants tolive with his wife and family in peace.  The majority of Guard and vampires in court only thought Edward was in front of the trio in regards to disobeying orders and fiasco in Paris.  Nothing about the possibility of Edward becoming the supreme power over all the vampires and defeating the three brothers.  Power struggle to destroy Edward to maintain their control is so lame and not honorable at all.  Punishment not for betraying the laws or rules but because they are threatened of losing their control or power.  Loved the end in their own wilderness home totally homey and content.

Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 07:26 PM · On: Epilogue: This Tale, of the Spider and the Fly

you are an extreamly talented writer and I have enjoyed this story immensley. 

Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 18: Fiercely Held Her Fast

ooooooooooooo how inventive did Edward get? ;)

Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 17: Come Hither

uh oh, they have to face Charlie ;)

Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 12: Upon Your Bed

that was hot and steamy great lemon!

Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 11: Subtle Web

yessssssssssssssss!

Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 10: Dismal Den

yeah Edward's feeding on animals again!

Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 8: How Brilliant Are Your Eyes

noooooooooooo!  Why, now that they were starting to be happy but it always happens like that.

Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 7: Soaring Up So High

Daddy Carlisle is amazing and so nice and compassionate.

Reviewer: romeosjuliet14 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 07:20 PM · On: Prologue: The Spider Before The Fly

awww that last line was soooo sweet

Reviewer: TiramiSue (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 02:07 PM · On: Epilogue: This Tale, of the Spider and the Fly

Oh wow!!!,

That was sooo good! Thankfully, everthing turned out how it was supposed to be!!! Honestl, when you said in your a/n two chapters ago that was only more chappy to go plus epi, I was really worried for a moment! There was a possibility for everything to end bad! Especially if the story ended shortly after! THANK THE FANFIC GODS THAT DIDN'T HAPPEN!!!!!=)

I really enjoyed every moment of this story! It was beautiful, really! Thanks so much for sharing it with us!!

-Sue

Reviewer: TiramiSue (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 23: Little Corner Sly

Ahhhhhhhh!!! Nooooo!!!!! Oh Jeeeeez!!! SUSPENSE!! SUSPENSE!!!!!  Really loving the family vibe here!!!

Sorry, need to continue reading! GAH! =)

Reviewer: TiramiSue (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 17: Come Hither

Awwww....well, that was just sweet as honey!^^ I loved the family reunion and how they are secretly planning their wedding! Also, I'm really glad that Bella gets to see Charlie at least one more time before that and her change!!!

Can#t wit to see the wedding happening!^^ Also, I'm curious to see when Aro and his minions will show up at the Cullen mansion and if James is one of them...ungh...I#m dreading it! ^^

This story is so really good! Thanks!

 

Reviewer: TiramiSue (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 15: Dine Upon The Fly

*gasp* WHAT?!?!?! OMG! really?!?!?! Awww,dang!!! They just escaped Felix-thanks to Jacob- and now there's a papercut?! You are evil!!! Oh boy....!!! GAH!

I really like that Demetri, Edward and Jacob (and Felix) are friends and not only obey whatever Aro tells them blindly! Even if they can only do so much!

I love how Bella and Edward interact! They are so sweet together! I still can't believe how well Edward seems to be coping with everything!!! Oh well, the end of this chapter may change that,though..lol!!! =) I can't wait for the big family reunion with the Cullens!(I just have blind faith and assume that Edward will not kill her/change her in that plane....^^)

I feel kinda bad for reviewing so little, but seriously, I just can't seem to stop reading!!! It's just too damn good! Alright...I can't bear to wait any longer- I NEED to continue reading!!!=)

-Sue

Reviewer: TiramiSue (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 8: How Brilliant Are Your Eyes

OMG! OMG! OMG!!! This is sooo bad!!! Aro will know that she knows about Vamps and will have her killed! No matter if Edward turns her in on his free will or not!!! SHIT!!!! How did she knew anyway?! About Phil being a Vamp? About the difference between golden and red eyes?!?! GAH! Need to read more...like, now!!! =)

Reviewer: TiramiSue (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 7: Soaring Up So High

Oh boy....! Time is running out for Edward and Bella! Ungh- stupid Aro and his interfering ways!!! I really don't think he'll be too happy about the result of this assignment....

I really love how confused but at the same time accepting Edward seems too be about everything- even if he needs some time to adjust! I expected him to put on more of a fight, so I'm glad he doesn't! =) I also loved the way Carlisle explained the mate/singer/soulmate thing! That was really good! Even though I can't really imagine how that would happen, I wonder if they'll ever find out that their paths (almost) crossed several times before; and if Carlisle would somehow recognize her..?! But then again, Carlisle met her twice before but he didn't acknowledge any kind of resemblence....or did he?! Will he?! GAH! Anyway, that's something I would love to see happen, but I totally see that not happening! =) lol

This is really, really good! Can't wait to read more!!!!

-Sue

Reviewer: Ara Rayne (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 03:01 PM · On: Epilogue: This Tale, of the Spider and the Fly

Finally got around to checking this out and loved it... thanks for sharing... :)

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 04:06 PM · On: Epilogue: This Tale, of the Spider and the Fly

Wow this was a such a cute story and i very much enjoyed reading it. I loved it very much. I love how edward found bella, how she was changed, and the outcome with the volturi.
You are an amazing author. Your pretty brilliant if i do say so myself because i know for sure i could never right a story like you did. : ) I very much look forward to reading more from you. I'm putting you on my favorites if i haven't already and then i'm going to go and read the outtakes for this story! lol
So until next time
mbellaandedwardm

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2011 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 21: Take A Lesson

I absolutly love what you did with bella's power it's so cool lol
well until next time

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 17: Come Hither

Question why can Edward go so long with out feeding i mean it seems to be more than a few weeks have gone by?
Until Next Time

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2011 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 8: How Brilliant Are Your Eyes

fucking shit this bad this is really bad
but god do i love this story

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2011 01:56 PM · On: Prologue: The Spider Before The Fly

Hello I know i'm reading this really late, but this story sounds very interesting. I look forward to reading the rest. This chapter really pulled me in, lol.
well until next time

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