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Reviews For Lost Cause
Reviewer: alycaly (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2011 10:42 PM · On: Confrontations

Aaaah, I just read the whole story up to this point in one sitting, and I'm DYING that this chapter ended with a cliffhanger like this!!! :) I've fully enjoyed this story so far, and am so intrigued to know what the deal is with Bella's past. I'll definitely be watching my inbox for update emails! Thanks for sharing your writing talent! :)



Author's Response:

I hope you'll still be interested when the next update comes.  Sorry for being so bad at responding and updating.

 

Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: twilightcat95 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 07:47 AM · On: Confrontations

Please update sooonnnnn!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 07:59 PM · On: Confrontations

uh oh...gotta a feeling Edward is gonna lose it when he finds out Jacob and Bella have met...uh oh!



Author's Response:

Uh oh!  lol

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 12:35 PM · On: Confrontations

can't wait to find out what happens!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 08:54 PM · On: Confrontations

i love the fact that bella here hows us what is considered  having a backbone while expressing your feelings, without sounding whiny, yet rather intelligent and thoughtfull. bravo.

edward is stupid to the point that becomes almost painful-it makes me feel that everything bella serves him, serves him right.;)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review and your compliments.  I'm so grateful, even if I've been a failure at responding.

Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 11:49 AM · On: Confrontations

Yippee! Something is coming and I have a strong suspicion that it's going to be Totally_Jerks!Wolves :D

Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing!  :D

Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2011 01:37 PM · On: Confrontations

So, did the wolfs find out that Bella is living with the cullens?

I'm glad they talked, but come on! It was meen to interrupt their conversation at that point! UNG!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.  I think it's meaner that I've been such a failure at responding and updating. 

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2011 08:45 AM · On: Confrontations

Oh well....that makes a difference now doesn't it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Pikapuff (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2011 06:04 AM · On: Confrontations

Ooh!  Is it the wolves?  Exciting stuff! Can't wait to find out what the deal with Bella is!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  I'm grateful to everyone who does.  Even if I've been a failure at responding.

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2011 04:29 AM · On: Confrontations

hmm sounds like the wolves have just shown up.

I'm liking that Bella's trying to stand firm against Edward and not just accepting his (so far) lack lustre apology.

He needs to earn his way back :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing.  I am so grateful to you for responding to every chapter.  I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding... and writing.

Reviewer: Katrina117 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2011 12:22 AM · On: Confrontations

Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 10:11 PM · On: Confrontations

Mah, the Quileutes, probably or some such. For the Volturi it is maybe too early. E&B seems quite stupid and inarticulated, I hope they improve.

And thank you so much for the recap.



Author's Response:

At times, they are stupid. But anger and pride sometimes lend to such.

Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

Reviewer: amobutterfly25 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 10:07 PM · On: Confrontations

the puppys are there?! now it gets juicey buyah



Author's Response:

Now we know that they know that the Cullens know that...  ANYWAY.  Yes, the wolves are involved.

Reviewer: chocolatehurricane (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 09:20 PM · On: Confrontations

Oh, man! I was so hoping for Edward to confess his feelings this chapter!



Author's Response:

The confession will have to wait.  It will come, though.

 

Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 08:45 PM · On: Confrontations

Jake, huh?



Author's Response:

Not yet!  :D

 

Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 08:39 PM · On: Confrontations

glad to see you back!! 

oh, shit, Edward was so close to the 'moment' I've been waiting for.  Well actually it isn't the only moment I'm waiting for - like the moment I find out what the hell is Bella's story - but it is a moment that will keep me satisfied for a while! 

now who the hell is at the door?? 



Author's Response:

Hope you're still with me.  It's been a while. 

Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

We get a tiny bit of Bella's past... though it might not answer much.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 08:20 PM · On: Confrontations

Great chapter!

Well, it seems Edward has seen the light and isn't going to ignore Bella anymore....If only they could have finished their talk...

I wonder who is at the door....Jacob maybe?

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Definitely not ignoring.

I'm trying to follow the Twilight timeline as close to possible, so Jake isn't a wolf.

Hope you're still reading.

 

Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

Reviewer: Nova (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 07:55 PM · On: Confrontations

Nice chapter. I enjoy the fact that while you've made Bella much more dependent upon the Cullens, you've had her able to see what they treat her as. I can see why the idea of Alice's abilities would push Bella to think she's being played with. It's a cool concept. Plus her getting mad at Edward is nice to see. I hope you don't have her giving in too soon (though I don't want it to drag too much either... uuhggg... it'll be an interesting balancing act) to his advances. I don't hate you or the characters yet, but I guess there are more chapters? No, I don't see that happening. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

 

B will always give in to E.  It's inevitable.  He's her complete weakness.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 07:50 PM · On: Confrontations

excellant story



Author's Response:

Thanks again, dear.

I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

Reviewer: suziecat444 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 02:54 PM · On: Puzzle

very amazing but edward needs to get his panties out of a wad



Author's Response:

Yes, he's definitely got his knickers in a twist.  :D

 

Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

Reviewer: meldisil (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Puzzle

whoa, i just couldn`t stop reading. amazing story! can`t wait for the next chapter ;-)



Author's Response:

Hope you're still reading when I next update.

 

Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 05:12 AM · On: Puzzle

hmm I'm more interested in what the deal is with Charlie and Bella... there has to be some memory manipulation or something going on? :P

 



Author's Response:

Ooooh!  Memory manipulation.  Sounds interesting.

 

Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

 

Reviewer: chocolatehurricane (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Victoria

I just want you to know that I like it when Tanya isn't made out to be the bad guy. She really wasn't mean or anything in the books, so I appreciate it when her role stays a little bit more in character.



Author's Response:

You're right.  I don't like Tany being the bad guy.  Just because she is interested in an attractive guy, doesn't mean that she is a psychopath!  lol

 

Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Puzzle

Oh my gosh so many questions. Ireally want to know if Bella has a connection to Charlie and Rene. Can't wait to read thenext chapter.



Author's Response:

There definitely is a connection, even if they don't know it... yet.

 

Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 02:41 PM · On: Puzzle

excellant



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. I'm sorry I've been such a failure at responding.

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