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Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:42 AM · On: First Sight
Wow, what a cliffie. Glad the next chapter is already up.
Author's Response: :) I am happy that you are pleased that there's another chapter.
Reviewer: mandilm14 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Encounter
Enjoyed it so far.
Author's Response: I'm glad. Thanks for responding. I hope you like it as it progresses.
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Confirmation and Communication
bells is already in love with ed and they haven't even spoken yet!
wtm
Author's Response: She doesn't think she is. But that's going to be explained later.
Reviewer: Polyxena (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Research
APOV is good... maybe Carlie as well because he's the one with most medical knowledge.
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the response! I'm not sure if you are saying you liked my APOV or you would like one. I have posted on and I am working on another. There will be quite a few from her.
I will be doing others as well. I have a Tanya and a Rosalie in the works. I hadn't thought about Carlisle. There would probably need to be a lot of research done for that. But his POV might fit in later in the story.
Thanks again!
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Research
O.O uh oh. hope Rosalie's not too mad....
update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks again for the response. I also wanted to thank you because you gave me an idea for an extra! You will hear Rosalie's voice on the matter.
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: October 22, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Surprises
its alright i reread it and i get it now!!!!! soz im really thick sometimes! =)
wtm
Author's Response: Thanks for responding. I'm glad it makes sense now. I'm trying not to be too confusing about most things.
Reviewer: uinen (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 04:03 AM · On: Research
i really like your story and i'm already waiting for the updates. I think the different point of view would be good, but maybe in separate thing, like an outtakes. i feel like this is purely bella's story. you could write others in the outtakes running alongside. can't wait to read it.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I am so happy that people like this story. I actually have posted an APOV. Lost Cause will remain from Bella's POV. But, I will be posting other character's views in other stories. I am keeping as part of a series.
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Research
So far I'm really enjoying this. I still have no idea what Bella is. She obviously isn't human. Hmm...the truth about the Cullens comes out next, the only question is will Bella run from them or learn to accept it as it is?
Author's Response: Thanks for thereview. I can't comment on whether or not she is human, but that should be more apparent as time progresses. The next chapter should be up pretty soon.
Reviewer: bb1028 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Research
Really like this so far, and I'm definitely interested in seeing how this goes :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The story will span a fairly long amount of time, but I'll try to keep it from moving too slowly.
Reviewer: bluemaybits (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Research
Lovely chapter! I'm glad Bella is putting everything together!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. You can thank my betas for this portion of the story arc. I had it going slightly differently before they saw the story and whipped me into shape.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 07:21 PM · On: First Sight
how old is Bella in this?
Author's Response: Thanks for response. She is 30. I took the age from the end of New Moon.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Research
great story and writting
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I hope you continue to like it as time progresses.
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Encounter
Very interesting...makes me want to read more. I like the thought of an older Bella. Hmmm...Carlisle says she looks young for her age. I'm sensing a mystery here.
Author's Response: I am glad you are interested. I hope to keep that up as the story progresses.
Thank you for taking the time to review. I appreciate everyone's reviews. It helps keep my interest in the story as well. :)
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Surprises
Amazing chapter. Although i am wondering exactly what Bella saw in the mirror....
update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you. She saw exactly what she looked like when she was seventeen. Since SM doesn't go too in depth with a description, neither does Bella. But she looks just like she would have in Twilight. She appears only a few months younger now than in Twilight (as she came to Forks in Jan, not Nov), but that's negligible. There will be a very brief description in the next chapter.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Surprises
love the story
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy the rest.
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Surprises
very confused am i supposed to be?
wtm
Author's Response: what's confusing you. Send me a message and I'll try to explain what I can. There are certain things that you are not supposed to know, just yet. But, you shouldn't be too confused.
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Encounter
shes not really 30 is she?
wtm
Author's Response: She is 30. Her birthdate is 100% accurate.
I took the age from the end of New Moon. You know, where Edward says that the Volturi probably wouldn't come looking for her until she was 30.
Reviewer: naeo99 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Surprises
Awesome story so far. Look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I hope I don't disappoint as the story prgresses.
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 08:07 PM · On: First Sight
oh god. what happened/ is happening to Bella??? Cliffies are evil!!
update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I try not to have too many cliffies. I don't like them either, but sometimes I cannot help myself. I hope you enjoyed the next chapter.
My APOV extra should be up soon.
Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:43 AM · On: First Sight
This is so intriguing! Clearly, she's not physically 30. She must have some memory of what she's supposed to look like.
So many questions. I look forward to how it all unfolds.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. The next chapter will confirm/deny your assumption. But, for a lot of questions, the answers will unfold slowly. Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Reviewer: Azure the Dragonlady (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 11:52 PM · On: First Sight
Intriguing start to the story! Well done! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you. It is really great to receive posiive reviews. I didn't expect to be writing this for anyone but myself. I still am amazed that people have marked it as a favorite. I hope you like the next chapter.
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Encounter
Okay, so...Chapter 2! Even though I've read it before, I was still caught up in the tension and the confusion both inside Bella and within the situation. And a bit sympathetic...if she thinks she's 30, and she's hot for Edward...whew...
And of course, you ratcheted up the tension a lot at the end of the chapter there...so you have another chapter coming, right? I don't care if I get it through PTB or here, I just want it soon!
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope the next chapter doesn't disappoint. Yes, she is very confused right now. And, it will probably get worse as time goes on.
I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Reviewer: Folklorn (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Encounter
I have to tell you this is the first fic in a LONG time that has caught my interest. You write beautifully and I'm amazed this is your first piece outside of school. I love the detail you've put into this story. most of the time I run across promising plots but the author seems to rush things or sidestep the fleshing out of the characters and environment so they can jump into the meat. Thank you for painting a solid foundation. It's nice to see a Bella that picks up on the subtle signs that the Cullen's aren't "normal" unlike the more commonplace Bella who seems to miss just about everything in front of her face. This is the sort of thing that keeps me coming back. I can't wait to read more of your work! Thank you for writing. ;)
Author's Response:
First, I would like to thank you for taking the time to write a review. Reviews like yours help keep the direction and tone of a story from falling to the wayside.
Second, I am utterly flabbergasted that you enjoyed it so thoroughly. I am astonished that anyone is even likes my writing. I have never been particularly proficient at creative writing, so this is a complete boon for me.
Third, I am now terrified of disappointing everyone who has expressed interest. I am frightened this will become a complete failure after so many have expressed that they enjoyed it, but I am going to do my best to prevent that from happening. I had planned to post a chapter a week; that might not be possible as I want substance over timeliness. It’s not worth posting a chapter if I’m not proud to do so.
I cannot express how gob smacked I am that people found this story appealing, let alone have marked it as a favorite. I just love that people have read it.
Thank you so much for your kind words. They really mean the world to me. I never realized how important a review was until I posted this first chapter. I had been having problems with the chapter I am currently working on, but your review has spurred me to “get my butt in gear” and revisit it. It is really rewarding to receive such a meticulous appraisal.
Thank you, again.
Reviewer: speedelee (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Encounter
Good start. 1974? Is she mistaken? Perhaps a remarkably clumsy vampire or other mythical creature? Very intriguing start. Can't wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. You'll see what comes next. But, I warn you some things will not be revealed for quite some time. I hope that I don't disappoint as time goes on!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Encounter
interesting....hope you update soon
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I hope that I don't disappoint as time goes on!
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