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Reviewer: eyeonrob (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2011 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 84- Freedom

HURRAY! Rob and Jen are finally out as a couple, heading to Orcas, and Steph is updating again! I've missed you and this wonderful story! I spent my entire summer off reading other long neglected incredible fanfics but now that I'm back to work at school, it's nice to have your story to return to. It gives me just enough to feed my fanfic addiction without taking up too much of my time that is needed for work. As for dear Sam Bradley, I got to see him play here in Atlanta back in June. He is AWESOME! Love his music and it's so good to see him and Rob hanging out together just doing the guy thing. Wonder if they have another road trip planned? LOL! Take care,bb, and WELCOME BACK!

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2011 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 9-Excursions

"I think you should get at least two, 12-packs," a velvet voice purred behind my ear.   I just spit ozarka all over my laptop. Shit. Glad it was a small sip.

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2011 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 4-Escape

Oh shit.

I love sailing. Sold our G-cat years ago. Every time hubs and I sailed together it was almost DIVORCE Court.  But then he always admitted later that I was the better sailor.

Reviewer: Bevey99 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 1-Hostage Situation

Just starting this.  It's been in my queue for 'awhile'.  But after reading what you have done w/ Roadtrip 2010, that pushed me on over here.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 70- Not as Easy as You Might Think

Oh. My. God!  Even your A/N is hilarious!  The trailer rocking and Poor Mack!? You have GOT to see "Up in Smoke" with Cheech and Chong if you haven't seen it already. There's a side-spliting, tear-jerking, pee your pants scene with a rocking delivery truck. Even if you hate the rest, that scene alone is worth the rental fee.  Check it out.

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 1-Hostage Situation

Would it surprise you if I admit to being an odd Twilight Fanpire? I'm a 58 yr old great-grandmother who definitely has OCD (Obsessive Cullen Disorder) and proud of it. Like Jen, I got into Twilight while I was in a "dark place" in my life. I went to see "New Moon". I hadn't seen "Twilight" yet or read the books. I don't deal well with suspense, seriously, so when the ending has Edward asking Bella to marry him, I was shocked to hear people around me, including some guy sitting a row ahead of me, gasp at the same time Bella did. I left the theater and immediately went to the Target store and bought all 4 books and took them home. I read all for books in less than 72 hrs. I didn't sleep or eat much. I even took the books to the bathroom! When I told me daughter that I was going to go get the Twilight video, she told me I already had it and brought it to me. I watched it twice that day and knew then I was hooked. I've got 2 copies of "New Moon" and a copy of "Eclipse." I've since collected 3 sets of the books: the hardbound with the original covers, a set of paperbacks in the original covers, and 3 of the 4 paperbacks with Edward, Bella and Jacob on the covers. I'm eagerly waiting for the 4th. I tracked down the company that did the contacts for the Saga and now own a prescription set of Cullen and a set of Volturi contacts that I proudly wear at work. I've gotten some very strange looks from people, especially from bank tellers, fast food drive-ups, grocery checkers, etc. I love it. I have many more collectibles and now people are finding things and then bring them to me as jokes. Fine by me.  : )  The thing that I'm most proud of and took a very long time and a lot of help from others to find and buy, is a special 2008 silver Volvo C30 T5 used in a very popular vampire movie. I've been taking it to the various film sites to have it photographed at each one since the sites are so close to my home in Vancouver WA. Jackson Rathbone and his band, 100 Monkeys is playing in town 8/21/11 and I've got my ticket. It's my hope to take the car and try to persuade "Jasper" to autograph the car along with as many of the cast as I can get. It's a small venue, so my hopes are high to say the least, but I'm old enough to not get too high.

So, your Jen may be Pattinson's Number One Fan, but I'd like to claim being his Oldest Number One Fan. If you'd like to see pix of the car, send me your email and I send you some. DJ   DJAmethyst@aol.com

Reviewer: BetsmeCullen (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 19-The Last Day

Do you have a copy of Fifty Shades of Grey by E.L. James? The next time I have a bit of $$ I'm going to order the paperback. My InBox is overloaded. I can't read many of them right now, b/c I'm reviewing this story.

Why do I havel such a feeling of doom about their impending seperation? I really wish Jen would go with Rob to LA. Would she be in the same area or places that she'd been with Mike? I think the city is large enough to avoid those tender memories. And he would be there, although in small quantities of time, to help her. She does have a lot of self doubt. And I'm sure Nick would use any opportunity to undermine their relationship.

Review more tomorrow.

Reviewer: Jools82375 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 84- Freedom

OMG  brain freeze,,or throat freeze???  ROTFLMAO!!!!  I love that they finally came out!  I am anxious for more on this as well as for Amishward!  your writing has kept me as spellbound as the first time I read the Twilight series,  before the first movie came out!  You have a beautiful gift for writing!  Sooo glad I happened across you!

Reviewer: BetsmeCullen (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 18- Time to Face the Music

I get a sense of forboding from Nick's reaction to Jen. I don't really think he's on Rob's side. He may believe he is but his actions are gonna reveal how he truely feels. I can just feel the heartfail to come.

Wish I liked beer more. To me it has no taste. The popular beer down here is Budweiser. Supposedly made with Louisiana rice. My dad was a rice farmer. I still don't care for beer.

On to the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: BetsmeCullen (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 17-What You Want

It's about time. I know they're distracted for the past week. I was so afraid they were going to ignore those issues for the rest of his time off. Jen has lots of deep seated grief/issues with her past life. Will she finally deal with these? I really hope so. She can't build a long term, permanent relationship with Rob until she does.

On to the next chapter.

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 55-Goodbye,Muirnin

Hey! Don't hate the Mac!  Pardon the little bit of Bella there. I've got one, too. Actually, five in fact.

Oh, about Forest Lawn, Google the lyrics to John Denver's song "Forest Lawn". I think you'll like it. :)  DJ aka "Hey Nurse", RN

Reviewer: DJamethyst (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2011 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 52-Leaving On a Jet Plane

I understand the chapters have been written, but being an obstetrical nurse I wonder. You have not written, yet, just why Jen cannot have children. Was it from scarring from the accident or did she require a hysterectomy as a result of the injuries? If she still had her uterus and ovaries, even one, there have been occasions where conception occurred and some that went to term. Dum...da..dum-dum...

Also, Rob and his family told Jen there were options, like adoption. If Jen still had at least one ovary, they could still have a biological child together with a surrogate. She could use fertility drugs, have several eggs harvested and frozen for future pregnancies and Rob could provide the sperm. Of course, absolute secrecy would be needed to protect the fetus as being Robert Pattinson's from being subjected to potential abduction from the surrogate or others. The surrogate would have to be kept in the dark as to who the parents actually are, even afterwards if Rob and Jen had yet to be "outed." Or,...maybe Victoria would be willing to carry Rob's child. Wouldn't be the first time a family member did such a thing. Lizzy wouldn't be appropriate because of her career and appearances. Hmm....

I sure hope Jen keeps the Orcas property since Rob told her he really wanted to return there. It could be a sanctuary for them. They could still rent the place out when they weren't there like she was before, maybe to other celebs as an exclusive resort? Did you know that Orcas has an airport? It does. Perhaps, Rob and Jen could use that home and commute from the island along the west coast. Rob could probably afford a private jet and hire a pilot or even a smaller plane and learn to fly. What do you think? Jen could still keep her shop and hire someone to run it. Maybe the Johnson's since they were such kind people to Jen?

Well, like you said, the chapters have been written. It's just my ramblings about what could be. One more thing, just how close are you to theatregirl in RL? Online only or drinking buddies, lol?  Thanks for your time. I hope you reply to my questions/ideas. DJ aka "Hey Nurse," RN.



Author's Response:

OOOH! ok first, WELCOME! *waves madly*

I love when the questions get technical! 

Ok, Yes, I have written a lot of this in future chapters, but I will give you some of the info here as you have asked:

The accident left her scarred, with Ashermann's syndrome. The accident cost her one ovary, so she still has one left. Her uterus is intact (they had to do some repairing of it after the accident, and had she been in the hands of other doctors, probably would have had a hysterectomy. But the doctor who cared for her didn't want her to not have that option if there was any chance of saving for future...

She can DEFINITELY surrogate... (I love that you mention Victoria!) And there is most definitely adoption. 

Orcas does indeed have an airport! (there is a man who offers rides on his bi plane- a fun experience to be had if you can handle it!) and a very small private jet can land, or the small cessna's its true! *grins* Jen will definitely keep the Orcas property, but will sell the condo... as far as the shop, you are very wise to think of the Johnsons! 

Theatregirl and I are very close. She was one of my grad students. She and I remain very close and meet up whenever she is in town, and email a lot. She is the reason I started to read Twilight, and FanFic. (it's all her fault!) and she convinced me to write. :)

thanks so much for reading my dear! I look forward to more questions! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: BetsmeCullen (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 16- Consequences

Laughed hard when Bella thought she'd been dreaming! So funny.

Loved every bit of this sexy chapter. I was so proud they weren't going at it like chimps.

Now I'm thinking of Twilighted as being a Dom.

Got to take a break, now. Going to work in the AM.

 

Reviewer: BetsmeCullen (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 15- Game Time

Gonna have to go take care of some self lovin' in a minute. So hott. Think I'll have to bring some Rug Rob with me.

I've never seen 9 1/2 weeks. Have to look it up.

Looking forward to seeing what Rob will make her do.  On to the next chapter.

Reviewer: BetsmeCullen (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 14-The Morning After

I absolutely love their inner dialogues! They are so funny most of the time. I've been meaning to write that since the beginning. And the visual of her kitchen dance is just priceless. I can admit to doing that too. Now, I just need to figure out how to load the right music on my iPod. My husband put his music on it - Country (not too bad) and Cajun. Just not my cuppa tea. I'm proud they were able to make it through breakfast without molesting one another.

On to the next chapter.

Reviewer: BetsmeCullen (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 13- Say It, Out Loud

This was ground breaking, new territory for them. I'm hoping that Jen will actually get into the baggage that  she's carrying. This doesn't bode well. Great lemon. Gonna have to go take care of things. Hubs is on call this week-end. so I'm by myself for a while. I'll be primed by the time he gets home. Or maybe asleep.

On to the next chapter.

Reviewer: BetsmeCullen (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2011 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 12- Help Me

He only has an idea of her feelings. I'm hoping she'll let down the walls she's built up. The anguish of her past will seriously hamper any prospect of a relationship she could ever hope to have with him. She could do with some counseling.

I love Liz. You've written her in such a wonderfully big sister way. Claudia, indeed. So funny.

On to the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: BetsmeCullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 11- Hearts

Oh, my heart breaks for Jen. She's not dealt with her feelings in so long and now she's got an awakening that'll overwhelm her, if she doesn't get through them.

That breakfast bar sex romp was so hot and reminded me of "Last Tango In Forks" by AwesomeSauce76. They used butter, also.

On to the next one.

Reviewer: BetsmeCullen (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 10-Realizations

You sly minx, giving us EPOV at the top. I was a little disoriented @ the last line of the first section, until I got it! LOL

After reading TS for the umpteenth time, I discovered FFN. First one was Wide Awake. Hope she gets to publish it. Some of the fics I've read hold my attention much more than the original.

Her concerns are valid. How to fit into a different situation, environment and  culture will be nearly impossible. It would break a lesser person. Hope she is up to the challenge.

Reviewer: nebfan51 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 84- Freedom

I thank you for sharing your "fantasy".  I am enjoying it.  It is  gentle, hardrocking, erotic and love filled.

Reviewer: BetsmeCullen (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 9-Excursions

Of course, my first addiction was ST:TNG. It was a toss-up between Stewart and Frakes. I love them both equally. My husband even found JonathanPorn for me. I was appalled. I didn't know about Photoshop back then!

I felt like Jen took the words right out of my head revealing the fandom's feelings about him.

I'm partial to wines. One especially from the house of Salassi. Yep, my husband is a winemaker when he's not busy teaching paramedic students. He's working on Muscadine, White Grape and Red Grape wines at the moment.



Author's Response:

sigh.. sadly I can't drink wine. 

I'm allergic. Suffer from horrible headaches when I drink it. :(

But beer... I can drink beer. :D

OOH! i bet your hubs wines are fantastic tho! 

oh yes... TNG was a fave of mine. Love love love Stewart and Frakes. you can find me watching the reruns when i can! lol

thanks hun! 

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: BetsmeCullen (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 8- Answers

My computer is all better now. Hubs is a miracle worker.

It's unimaginable the kind of life Mr. Pattinson and Company lead. To be able to relax a little and not worry about being discovered must feel like he can be relatively normal. Hope he doesn't regret taking the risk of the picture. I'm glad to see they're taking sexual precautions.

Reviewer: pirate51 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 84- Freedom

I love Jen's reaction to Rob's Edward makeup  I think that would have gotten an ewwww out of me too.  I hate those creepy contacts they have worn the last couple of movies.  Twilight contacts were much better.  

Great time with Sam.  I love that he is truly trying to protect his friend.  I can't wait til Orcas.  Gonna be all kinds of fun!

DuRob.  I can't wait til Bel Ami.  The trailer had me a mess....sigh.

Reviewer: AmayaBlack (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 84- Freedom

I had laughed so much trough all her Edward and Bella related questions. Nikki tried to be a bitch but just looked ridiculous. Finally they are out!!! Things will be getting interesting soon, I bet Summit is furious, good for them. I was good to see some sense in some of the comments in the web pages.

Reviewer: Jools82375 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 52-Leaving On a Jet Plane

Been to waitin to here for several chapters now if Jen is pregnant despite her "inability".  I cant stop reading this!



Author's Response:

thanks so much hun! so glad you are enjoying! 

we'll see what's up with Jen.... I'm not telling....

thanks again! 

MWAH!

steph

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