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Reviewer: farawaymomo (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Ok seriously I want that family! Who wouldn't?They're amazing. Jen has the saddest stories... she deserves some good stuff now.
Author's Response: they are wonderful aren't they!? goodness... where's the hidden skeletons?
and yes.. Jen deserves some happy...Yay for Rob being there for her! I think happy times will be in her future!
thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
I'm so excited that you're going to do RPOV! I've loved the snippets you've provided so far, and I'll be especially anxious to see the early days together and his POV when they're separated.
This chapter was so sweet, and Cedward's speech in the maze was adorable. Thanks, Steph!
Author's Response: thanks my dear!
yes the RPOV will be a parallel story to this... chapter for chapter for the most part (except where we already see RPOV here)
I may even throw in a Nick POV while Rob is in LA...hmmmmm.
so glad you liked this chapter, oh how i love CEDWARD... hehe.
thank you my dear!
more soon!
steph
Reviewer: blondieja (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Loved the tree farm!!!! It was great, Steph. I can only wait patiently for the next one. I love how you write Rob and Jen. It seems real. Some authors you read make you want to think, "no way" but I think you really capture their emotions.
Thanks for sharing....heres to some one-on-one time!!!!YAY!!!!!
-Jen
Author's Response: Thanks so much Jen!
i can only hope that how I portray ROBJEN comes across as genuine... so it means so much to me when you say it does..SO THANK YOU!
the next one may be up by end of the weekend? maybe?
and yes.. some more one on one time (snickers) is on its way!
thanks!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Love the tree hunting adventure!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
wouldn't that be awesome with his family!
we used to do it as kids (it wasn't nearly as sexy tho...no rob around...sigh)
and this tree farm actually exists in Surrey! very exciting!
thanks for the review and rating!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Loved it! I just love how to write his family. They are just too much fun.
And the sexin in the cold outdoors was hot!
You and Beautiful Distraction totally rock for getting this out so quick.
Author's Response: Beautiful Distraction is the best beta ever! she totally rocks!
I owe all my fast turnarounds to her...
so glad you like the family.. I heart them so...
and mmmm cold outdoor sexing.. can't wait for these 2 in a warmer climate... maybe a boat... or a beach... wow....
thanks for the review and rating my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: jarielynn (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Awesome chapter!! Loved the Harry Potter reference and Rob's answering "You know I did, Jen." OMG! This chapter was so great because I lughed my ass offf and we had some sadness- Jen's bro and wondering why her.. Plus warm fuzzy times with family.. Just wonderful..
2 fave parts- 1)Robs crack showing... ahahahah... and Jen's teasing... very cute- again LMAO 2)Rob in a beanie, jen on his lap, Rob's hand in her pants... GAH!! What a picture... sigh... (Making me shiver even thinking about it now..mmmm)
Author's Response: LOL! thanks my dearest!
sigh,, i have been dying to make a snarky HP reference! glad you liked it! and his response... he can defiinitely keep up with Jen!
Yeah... Jen has had a sucky life, but she has become the lovely girl she is by having it... And the Patti clan has welcomed her in so well, maybe she will actually be able to have something she never had before...
Rob in a beanie... jen on his lap... yeah... that would be nice... *faraway look begins*
thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Aw, love ya bb! Just great!
Author's Response: heehee... I would have gone there Laura! but pine trees are itchy and scratchy.... heeheeheee
Love you more!
thanks for the review!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: KalifDee (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Damn the cold! Up against a tree would have been FANTABULOUS!! lol. Too bad it wasn't Arbor Day they were celebrating!!
Love it as usual..duh!
For your RPOV are you doing the whole thing? I was just hoping for a few chaps!
Author's Response: hehe! yeah up against the tree was hoped for.. but it was like 40 degrees out there! I don't want Rob getting frost bite....coughcough
heehee..I was saving them till they got someplace warm....
Yes... I intended on the RPOV's to be just outtakes of particular chapters at first.. but it has blossomed into a parallel story... Complete chapters... the first 11 are currently written... phew...that only leaves... what? 40 more? omg... i need more coffee...
but yes it will be a full story... we may even get a Nick POV thrown in there...maybe....
Thanks my dear!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
There were too many out-loud guffaws in this one to capture them all, but I dearly loved the trip to the Tree Farm.
The plumber line was so funny I'm still chuckling just thinking about it. And the question about the wand - did she sign up for the straight-man part, because, really, Jen! But all of the double, triple, and quadruple entendres were excellent. I love how Liz and Victoria get under his skin. He's SUCH a classic little brother.
I wonder what the girls have in store for her, but more importantly, I wonder what business it is that the boys have to attend to that requires the girls to distract her. And the line about everyone putting down their balls! Hah! Hmmm... I'm just a curious sort. I am also very intrigued by the "Isle of Why" teaser. That's just delightful. I need you to erase the stuff I have from there now and replace it with a better vision of the New Year.
Thanks for the update, Steph. Fabulous as always. And, although it goes without saying, I guess our boy's pretty insatiable, huh? Too much! I love it.
Author's Response: LOL! yay! for loud guffawing! i gotta try to balance the angst filled sexing with a little humor... glad you liked it!
oh yes.. the plumber joke.. i bet he has a very nice plumbers crack... just saying....
I had to go there with the wand... just.had.to. LOL!
AHHHH... yes.. why would the girls need to take her out and leave the boys alone? hmmmm. something must be going on....
oh...Isle of Wight...it's in the distance...but it HAS been written.... I have an answer to the famous Isle of wight... yes i do...
sigh..yeah.. you'd think that 23 year old would tucker out.... really....
i'm not complaining.... i just would think...hehehe
thanks my dearest!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: CanadianCullen (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 30- O Christmas Tree
Hooray! 2 lemons where they could get caught by the fam at any time (naughty naughty!)...
"The list"...
Nutcrackers... (too funny!)
Rob with his 'wand' in the maze...
Another Dr. Who and Mr. Tennant reference...
Big smiles on my face at the end of this Chapter Steph!
Your updates still make my day!
*MWAH*!!!
Terri
Author's Response: HAHA! Thanks so much Terri!
I had a lot of fun (and coffee) for this one.... and I am really happy that Jen is starting to come into her own with the family...
Rob and his wand... i had to go there... i think now that she is feeling comfortable and they are really getting to know one another... we are going to start seeing real interactions.. joking... talking... even annoying little things... (like does Rob snore, or drool when he sleeps? hmmmm)
thanks my dear! glad you liked it! more again soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Binky1 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
I just spent 2 days reading this story and I LOVED it!! Very well written. I sympathized with the gut wrenching feelings that Jen went thru when she thought that Robert was "acting" and I teared up when they finally spoke on the telephone. The New York shopping trip was every woman's dream (well this woman anyways)... We stayed at the Hotel Roger Williams just this past December as well - how bizarre!?!?!??!!! I can't wait for the next chapter to see how Rob reacts to the guitar and how he handles the Nick situation....Keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: WELCOME AND THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!
Goodness, I am always so impressed to hear of wonderful readers like you that do a marathon of this story! simply AMAAZING! so thank you!
and the roger williams?! that is weird! LOL!
Let's see... next chapter is inthe queue, althoung you may need to wait for a bit for the guitar and more Nick..but they are coming... I'm a bit of a wordy girl...so the next few chpaters will be still pre-christmas...but it just means we get more ROBJEN time with the PATTI CLAN! yea!
thank you so much for finding my story !
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: pkmarita (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
cant wait for the next update!!!! excellent chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks my dear!
the next chapter should be up by the weekend! yea!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: ButterflyBullets (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 24-New York,New York
Tuxedo pants (I KNOW those pics ;) ) and Little Patty had me rolling! LOVE LOVE LOVE this story - pure brilliance
Author's Response: Hi And WELCOME!
thank you so much for the read and rate! I love seeing new faces!
I am so glad you are enjoying this story!
oh those Tuxedo pants... that poor poor boy! hehehe
ANd Little Patty! glad you liked it!
Thank you so much for taking the time to review! It means a lot to me!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
Another wonderful chapter:) As always of course! I'm so glad that they finally told him what was going on. He needed to know..but Wow..an angry Rob. I have to say..I found it really sexy:)
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Thanks hun! yes..they finally have it out in the open! phew....
and *cough cough* yeah...angry Rob.... there is something nice about seeing him let loose
next chapter soon!
MWAH
steph
Reviewer: mizz_music (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2010 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
Hey Girl, sorry it's taken so long to review, my laptop died on me just go it back.
Wow....that was such a rollercoaster, but fantastically written, can't wait for the next one!
LOVE YOUR WORK!! :D
Author's Response: thanks my dear! sorry about your laptop! glad you got it back!
next one will be up around friday I hope!
Christmas tree shopping!
weeee!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
So the mystery of the spike in reads in spite of the Twi server failures is solved... you are a goddess for rec'ing my little appetizer and I can't thank you enough. I'll just keep blushing while I write my little review, because this chapter was absolutely brilliant, and I may be alone in agreeing with you: personal is personal and business is business. So we'll start with ficNick.
Jen is so right that it needs to be Rob's decision. Even when it is his decision there is going to be speculation (if he sacks him) that it was her decision, but they both need to be able to say that it was all him. That being said, if I were his advisor on this one, I'd tell him he shouldn't fire him. And not just because there's still so many opportunities to cause him pain and suffering. I don't love the whole shopping spree thing because I think of ficNick's money as Rob's money at the end of the day, so while I get it and she needed the stuff, I don't get a lot of pleasure out of that (although I'm glad she and Liz did). Real Nick is good at what he does and ficNick seemed to be as well. The manager work, that is. Now he can fire him as a friend, and for a while ficNick will have to be in a timeout as far as decision-making for Rob's personal life as a result, but he seems to have been a very good business manager. There's got to be a blowout; ficNick has to explain himself, and he needs to see that if he were ever truly a friend he would NEVER have done anything like what he did, but then the lines need to be redrawn and Nick needs to be his manager, and JUST his manager. At least for a while until Rob can figure out whether or not it will be possible to trust his decision-making. He still has Stephanie, and he'll have Jen as a sounding board. He should also hire a "Suzie" for his personal crap since ficNick shouldn't get to do that any more. Then he'll have a buffer between him and ficNick.
At least, that's what I think. I can't wait to see what you do with it!
Um, the boxing? Yeah, thanks. That was just... thanks.
The paps at the gate were quite a bummer. They need to figure out when she's walking out with him, and then just do it. But he should give ficNick and Stephanie a heads up so they are prepared. That part of his life has to just suck royally. Poor Jen needs to be ready for that. But now that she's feeling more beautiful and loved, she's getting there. Better in London than LA is all I can say. I really can't begin to imagine how crappy it must be to have hordes of people follow you everywhere. Wait, what am I saying - of course I do - I'm a Verizon customer. But my guys don't have cameras or ask me questions.
Finding the tree is going to be fun... but I'm looking forward to London date nights! Yeah! And now I'm all caught up so I can go sit in the corner and tap my foot like everyone else! Off to the blog!
Fabulous, Steph! Love it!
*Mwah!*
Author's Response: Aww. i am happy to do it sweets! i love you story!
So fic nick... I agree on all your points... there is a lot to be dealt with on Nick's/Rob's/even Jen's part.Things will come to a head after the new year.
and yes.. he definitely needs a "suzie" he really does in RL too... sigh... where are my business cards again?
heehee... boxing...yeah... you're very welcome....smirk
The paps are unavoidable sadly,even in London... They need to figure something out it is true... and Jen is growing.. will she be ready? She really needs to be soon...
The tree is next.. and oh yeah.. should be fun! More family time to pit these two lovers against! hehehe!
thank you my dear! you are the bestest!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 28- An Evening at the Pattinson's
Of course, you know I'm not capable of just one word. Hell, four words was almost impossible and that was because you had killed me dead. So if I can muster four words when I'm dead, then imagine what I can/will do when I've had to reread and rereview because of Twi techfail?
This was so much fun! I love the banter with his family, the way his mother manages to "mother" him while still letting him be an adult, and the way the rest of his family just sort of falls in line around it. I love how much his father appreciates her love of cars. I think when Rob gets to know her a little better, he's going to be surprised at how much of a fit she really is with his universe. Except, of course, for the surreal part of his universe, which is lurking but happily kept at bay for this chapter.
So nice that he still has some measure of privacy in London. I think that will lead to him letting his guard down a little, which will also give her a chance to get to know him. It's so much fun watching their romance blossom!
And tomorrow morning we get Lizzy back! Lizzy seems to me to be the perfect combination of her parents in personality, but with some idea of what the craziness can be like. She strikes me as fiercely protective because she knows how quiekly it can come and go. Like her brother, she had to learn to be wise beyond her years quiekly. I really believe her experience is part of how he's come to grips with all of this as well as he has lately. As we've discussed, when other influences in his life were dominant, I thought he was headed down a bad path. It just looked like his family and friends came in and redirected him.
Finally, I'd love to know what Clare is saying to him when she comes downstairs. I hope it's in RPOV because that had to have been an interesting conversation. I'm also still curious as to how much he told his dad about their little strategy, since the one hour of the telly mark seemed to be a cue for Mr. P.
Okay, off to the Next! I love this and I'm almost current *does a little dance in the corner* so I can go visit the blog soon! And cry! I'm looking forward to being a sad panda. See what you've done to me??? I needed to embrace the angst to finish 37/38, so thanks!
Author's Response: SQUEE! you are almost there! YIPPEE!
yea i think he is going to realize just how well the family loves her. Like she is a good fit with him, so shall she be with the PATTI CLAN.
They will finally be able to relax in London, and maybe even get out on the town.
yea for Lizzy! yes. with Lizzy back all sorts of fun can ensue.She is such a strong force in both their lives. It will be interesting to see how she keeps the fun going...
Oh yes.. there will be an RPOV on the Clare debate... gosh i have so much to write for ROB! GAH!
Mr. P is very observant....hehehe... it's the Pattinson way I think... you'll see.
Yea! you'll ahve to tell me how you liked the blog... yes.. there will be some tears... i am sorry!
Yea! for 37/38! i can't wait!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: twizzlers (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
Okay I fianlly made it to the last update * doing the rocky dance * OMG Angry rob he does things to me! wow Love jen and rob and i'm so hooked right now!
Summer
Author's Response: LOL! i am singing with you! WOW! that must have been some marathon! I am simply awed by anyone who can sit and read this story from the beginning!
So happy you are liking it and WELCOME to the NTE madness!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
Intense chapter in all kinds of ways--great.
Author's Response: Thanks Laura!
glad you enjoyed it!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 28- An Evening at the Pattinson's
Laughed out loud at the realization that they were playing loud music in the kitchen downstairs. That would be a hilarious outtake! Great!
Author's Response: LOL! glad you liked it!
i had not intended an outtake, but maybe I will! as soon as this baby wraps up!
thanks so much for the read and review! I really appreciate it!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
Fantastic chapter! I thought the garage scene was amazing. And the Patti clan does not stop cracking me up. I think you painted them as a great bunch of people. I love them all!
Bethany
Author's Response: Thanks my dear! so glad you liked the garage! hehehe
I simply adore the Patti clan... oh there is so much more of them to come! i heart them so!
thanks for the review and rating my dearest!
more soon!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
LOL! Yes, Nick DOES deserve a little torture! I'd love to torture his ass. Wow, garage sex, holy shit, that was hot and angry.....*smirk*.
I love how the patty clan is accepting Jen. So great. Love it!
Great story! Can't get enough.
Hugs, Louise
Author's Response: heheehe...
oh he'll be a little tortured not to worry. maybe that punching bag will come in handy!
glad you liked garage time...hheehee
Thanks so much my dear!
more soon!
mwah!
steph
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 29-Time for the Talk
Gah! Angry Rob and naughty garage sex just does something to me. I'll save that discussion for a later date. Lol.
I agree with Jen. Though I'd love to see Nick fired, it may not be the wisest move for Rob's career. It's definitely something he should think about. He can still be tortured without being fired. ;)
You already know how much I love the Pattinsons, but I have to say it again. I love the Pattinsons. Gah! I just wanna hug them. Hehehe.
And then you had to go and leave that evil cliffy. Because I'm now wondering what hiding places he knows about, too, and what WILL happen in those hiding places. *THUD*
Mwah!
Author's Response: LMAO! glad you enjoyed it!
glad you see Jen's side about Nick... i know it is not necessarily the popular one.. but he can definitely be tortured in the mean time...
hahaha...evil cliffy... I just couldn't bring my myself to throw a 25k chapter at my beta.... this is an important day... i really needed the extra chapter for outdoor fun after all! I wonder if Rob has an aversion to tall shrubbery after GOF? hehehe
thanks for the review and rating my dearest! it means so much!
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: sadie_nikol (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 27-Finally
This chapter was so freakin' HOTTT it isn't even funny! I loved it! Gr8 job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and rating!
sigh.. finally together again! and so glad you liked the hot!
thanks my dear!
more to come! pun intended....
MWAH!
steph
Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 27-Finally
Now it's definitely lemon time! This was great! Their emotions were almost overwhelming, but not unexpected. He needs to know what she was told so he can understand, but she also needs to know what he felt and thought. I know... I, Ms. Antiangst, am saying we have to wallow in the angst! What have you done to me???
But the best part was his insistence on having her in his room when he knew they'd be sleeping in the guest room. Still such a young man! And considering the MoftU chapter for yesterday (since I'm still catching up on NTE, they collided in my world if not the real one), it is even more amusing!
She's starting to think about the future in a way that shows she's moving on. So good to see. She still has some healing to do, but she is making good progress. I wish she'd gotten to see the Claudia pics, though!
Love the story, Steph! Great job!
Author's Response: Yea! for tender and frantic and overwhelming welcome home lemons!
yeah they need to talk, to share.. to cry.. to love...
and his bedroom.. yes i just now finally got caught up with the mentioned fic... we can now talk about it! i had to chuckle...
she's getting herself in a better place.. she's becoming a stronger, more confident woman.
and the claudia pics could still make an entrance! heehee!
thank you my dear twin sister!
mWAH!
steph
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