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Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 14-The Morning After

LOL Wow, that was embarressing for her, but he apparently liked it... so dance away, Jen! LOL

I always think of LoveGame & Robert Pattinson in the same sentence.  Whenever I hear it on the radio, I bust out laughing.  Good times! :P



Author's Response:

that song shall forever be the official RPattz theme song... even when he is old and pudgy and bald... just saying...i can't not giggle when i hear it... 

yes, i think he liked it, that's for sure!

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 13- Say It, Out Loud

Aww, that was beautiful :)  Teeheeeheee...  awww, they said they love each other :)

And Elvis' guitar AND Rob playing it AND singing?  Almost died there.  Just saying. HELLO! LOL

 



Author's Response:

heehee..well thank you..thank you verra much! LOL!

i'll respond to all your other reviews, but I couldn't help answering this one before trotting off to bed!

ahh singing... and playing... the love... they are completely taken with one another, yeah?

so glad you liked it!

thanks for all your reviews! I am really behind on them this week, but will be catching up!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 12- Help Me

Aww, man!  That Lizzy is one smart chickie :P


I am hoping he sings to her.. that is all :)  And if he doesn't, he should :D



Author's Response:

soo good he has such a loving sis, yeah?

hoping he sings to her, eh? hhehee...

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 11- Hearts

Oh, mannnnn!! :(( Poor kids! :((  Man, the ending sucked as in it was painful to read and 'watch' them go through that--- like I know they're going to go through that and it's totally obvious they have to that talk.  They totally have to talk about the elephant in the room.

 

I like your story!!  As you can tell :)



Author's Response:

thanks so much hun!

yeah... they both have major issues that they need to deal with. but they care for one another, and if they express what they are feeling, maybe things will fall into place, right? right?

sigh... young love...

thanks my dear! so glad you are enjoying it!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: twmomma (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 52-Leaving On a Jet Plane

I just started reading your story a few days ago and I LOVE it.  Your wonderful.  Thank you.  



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear!

so glad you are enjoying it! 

thank you for reading and reviewing!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 10-Realizations

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I love how you started this chapter…  sneaky, sneaky!  That was great!



Author's Response:

thanks hun! 

heeehee.. you liked that, eh? well you'll be entertained to know there is a companion story of NTE, all in Rob's POV. i am nuts i know. but a chapter by chapter account from Rob's POV! 

it's called On the Threshold: Robert's View. and now that you are past the surprise... it is safe to read...

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 56-Reality Crashing

Steph --

 

You did the right thing, for the story and for the characters.  You made it realistic, and that's consistent with everything else you've done.  I know this is an emotional topic -- I went through fertility problems and a miscarriage myself before having my two beautiful daughters -- and I can remember the emotional trauma like it was yesterday.  I know there are others out there that, as you said, want Jen to have what they could not.  But you need to be true to your characters and your story.

 

Thanks for the work and the emotional effort you put in on this.

 

-- Deb



Author's Response:

thanks so much Deb.

I am so glad to have your support. It is this exact reason i choose to write it this way. there are those that don't have the fairy tale ending, who have had to struggle. I hope I can illustrate that some with Jen. yes, of course she deserves to have kids of her own. she has gone thru so much. and maybe she will one day, as you did. but not without life getting in the way. Life isn't always pretty. it's messy, it hurts, it challenges... that's what i hope to convey.

thank you so much for supporting me. it means so much to me. It truly motivates me. thank you.

more soon. always!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 9-Excursions

Wowzas, the whole workout room thing was hot! :)  And when he turned on her and put her against the window?  HELLO! LOL  I'd do yoga all the time if Rob's what I got in return LOL  Just saying! ROFLMAO

The whole part where he sees himself on the magazines-- ugh, that just made me feel terrible for him in real life.  I really do feel bad for him! :(  That totally sucks!  But, you did a good job of showing his emotion on that and her finding out how really feels about it all.  Poor guy!

Awww, the ending was super sweet and I can't wait to see how it all develops!  Great chapter! :)

 

 



Author's Response:

LOL! HELLOO! yeah. i seem to like them against walls...or windows... against things.. yep...

i;d be a yoga master if it meant having rob!

The magazine part is something i feel strongly about. how must he feel with all the scrutiny, his life laid out in front of him in print, and 99% wrong... it has to be tough. that thought is what started this story, if you can believe that. 

thanks so much my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: hisbella (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

This was such an unbelievable chapter to read.  Heart wrenching.  I'm glad Jerkwad (AKA Nick) had the sense to call Mom P.  I think it will do Jen a lot of good to have ClarePatz there to help her.  Thank you for your hardwork on this chapter.  I had tears in my eyes reading it, so I can just imagine what you went through to write it.  I can't wait to read Rob's take!  I will wait patiently for them to be reunited.  Big hugs to you cuz I think you need it!



Author's Response:

thank you so much my dear. Nick is trying to make amends. Bringing Clare in was a very smart move. Clare can provide the motherly attention Jen needs. this was difficult to write, especially knowing the hopes that you all had for her... i am so glad it is finally posted.. a giant weight has been lifted... 

thank you so much for all your support and love for this story . it means so much to me to see the love here for these two. simply astounding and keeps me going! so big hugs back!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

Steph! Awww, so much pain for her. But she can't think that she isn't good enough for Rob. I think that is the drugs and the downward spiral contributing to that thinking. He loves her so and doesn't care about all that. She needs to get home to Rob so he can reassure her how much he loves her. I'm glad Clare is there for her, she's such a good person!

Hugs,

Louise



Author's Response:

thanks Louise. 

it is definitely the spiral and the drugs. she really needs him there, but her fears are compounded by her hormones and after effects.Clare is a big help, but she needs to heal with Rob over much of this.

thanks so much my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 8- Answers

Wow, ooooo weee! :)  That was hot! :)  Me likey LOL

 

She's so lucky he took it the best way possible to her benefit and didn't get mad and try to leave or something.  Cause.. of course, that would have sucked! :P

I love all her mental banter LOL

And I love that he was secretly talking to her friend, I would have died LOL And then he sent a picture?  I agree, that was rather ballsy of him, but I could totally see him doing something like that-- not thinking it through.  Typical Rob, gotta love him! :)

Great chapter! :D

 

 



Author's Response:

heeheee. you liked it?

it is a good thing Rob took the fan thing well. otherwise this would have read like Misery...heehee

i am glad you like her mental banter... i love writing it! such a dork! hahaha

I can totally see him doing something ridiculous like sending off pics to Jens friend... that goof!

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

My heart really breaks for Jen. You can see how her mind and heart are really warring with each other. She' feels she doesn't deserve a family, but relishes her relationship with Rob's. I hope.... I hope they get her the help she needs in the UK, and that she doesn't push Rob away... I think this is where your characterization of Rob could really shine.... I'm always on the edge of my seat. Glad Nick is eating a very large humble pie... possibly some crow too.... LOL! 



Author's Response:

thanks so much tracy!

she is going thru so much. she wants a family do much. but her doubts really hurt her confidence that she can have that. It will take much needed therapy and love of Rob and his family to get her thru. 

oh Nick... he's trying, isn't he? maybe he'll be out of the doghouse soon... maybe.

thanks so much my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: heyjude08 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out

Hmmm....I'm not too happy with you!  I stayed up until 3am reading chapters 1-32 when I should have been studying (or sleeping!). I'm completely sucked in.  Great story!



Author's Response:

heyjude!

oh how I love your name! thanks so much for reading and taking an interest! *blushes* sorry i made you not study or sleep... lol.

if your name is at all an indicator... i'll be interested in your thoughts on some later chapters... grins...

thanks so much for reading and reviewing! glad you like it!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 7-Questions

LOL  I love that you've worked in "The Office" in here-- tby789 is awesome, I love that story sooo much.  That was one of the first of many addictive TwiFic stories for me LOL

And when she sees he's wearing the beloved Stoli & is staring @ it -- he catches her-- that was great.  I loved when she was taking it off him & being all nice & delicate with it-- I totally would have been, too!!  That's a fragile collector's item frmo The Rob LMAO LOL  But, when he let her wear it?  Oh, man... just wow.. LOL  What an out-of-body experience that would have been LOL

When they played their music together, that was really sweet :)

And, so funny that after all the trouble she went to de-Rob her computer "The Office" is what busted her & he knew about it--- even funnier :P

As you can tell, I'm loving your story right now and on my way to read more! :D  Lots of parts make me go "aww" and the rest just make me laugh (like her getting busted & his response to her taking the Stoli shirt off of him LOL).  Great story! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks hun!

the office was my second fan fic i read. loved it... so of course Jen had to be a fan of it... when this story first posted, it was near the end of the Office posting... sad sigh it is no longer available...

the Stoli... sigh... really. it is the holy grail of Roblore... he better still have it or i will have words with him.... 

glad you liked the music moment, its one of my fave moments.

*blushes* i am so happy to know you are "awwing" and busting a gut... gives me a warm feeling! thankyou!

see you on the next review!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: its simply me n you (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

So glad that Jen has Clare with her.  (At least Nick did something right for them).

 

 



Author's Response:

haha. Nick is coming around, yeah?

Jen needs Clare. she needs that motherly influence to see her thru till she gets home to Rob.

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: m244robp (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

Oh my dear, you seriously had me crying in during the second half of this chapter.  The last part of the conversation between Rob and Jen was so emotional.

Jen, remember, he said, whatever it is, just come home.

I am glad Clare is there with her.  This will help ensure a true healing and recovery for her, not an opportunity to run away, like she did the first time. 

Wonderful job, dearest!

ILY!

M



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dearest!

she has so much to work thru, Rob and Clare will be instrumental. She definitely can't run. not anymore. 

and Rob... just wanting her home. sigh...

i made you cry... i am sorry... but i am glad you liked it!

you know i love you! and you know i will be bawling when your last chapter posts... 

thanks so much for all your support. it means so much to me!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: desiredcullen (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

I love it. Gosh the emotions you got us to feel and go through, just...wow. You have this amazing talent and Im so beyond glad you're sharing this with us. Thank you so much. And feel proud of yourself. Another well done chapter...more than well done. Blazingingly well done. Is that a word? Who cares. You're the writter here not me. Lol. Congradulations and just again, oh my god, you're amazing. AMAZING.

Please update soon, Im so desperate for Robs reaction and cant wait to read his POV when the time comes through his story. :)

AMAZING!!!

Meagan



Author's Response:

thanks my dear! heehee. i answered the other one... 

mwah!

steph

Reviewer: desiredcullen (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

I love it. Gosh the emotions you got us to feel and go through, just...wow. You have this amazing talent and Im so beyond glad you're sharing this with us. Thank you so much. And feel proud of yourself. Another well done chapter...more than well done. Blazingingly well done. Is that a word? Who cares. You're the writter here not me. Lol. Congradulations and just again, oh my god, you're amazing. AMAZING.

Please update soon, Im so desperate for Robs reaction and cant wait to read his POV when the time comes through his story. :)

AMAZING!!!

Meagan



Author's Response:

thanks so much Meagan! your words really bring me to tears ( i deserve that, i have been so cruel to you all!) so glad the emotions read so strongly. that means so much to me. to be able to feel what they do,thank you!

I'll tell you, i am terrified to write this in OTT. i will get thru it... glad i have a ways to go before i do... but it will be rough. 

thanks so much for all your kind words. it makes me forge ahead!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: myszjada (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

simply amazing



Author's Response:

thank you so much!

more soon!

MWAH!

STEPH

Reviewer: louisianaartsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

The emotions are spot on. What Jen is thinking to herself that she is just an "empty shell"... the fact that the thought of her not deserving the right to be a mother... jeez... not being good enough because "he deserves better"... that is exactly the emotions that are involved. Can I tell you how many times I thought about ending it with my husband after our ordeal just because I knew I couldn't be what he needed me to be?!? The guilt and the pain is so heavy. I am an incomplete woman. And the fact that he would NEVER give in... and never got angry for me even thinking it... always there and supportive. (Hint- Rob for later chappys) I love Clare! So glad she is there to help. Thanks for updating so quickly! 



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear.she is faltering, she may be strong, but even the strong suffer when they are at rock bottom. you doubt everything. 

And the support is so important. I am glad you had your husband for that. oh yes... Rob will be a support. how could i write him otherwise...hahaha. 

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 4-Escape

Nice!!! :)



Author's Response:

thanks so much! so happy to see you are still enjoying !

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: LiRock (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

And yet another amazing chapter!

Jen really needs Clare. She needs that unconditional love a mother gives. And she needs to learn to forgive herself.

I'm so glad she has a family now.  She needs to finally heal from the past and have a support system around her to help her do that. She needs to go home!

Thank you again.



Author's Response:

thanks so much hun!

she definitely needs Clare, a mother and an image that Jen can grasp onto. that you can love like a mother without having carried the baby...

she has to forgive herself of so many things that were not her doing...therapy will help.

family is everything. and you are right. she needs to be home.

thanks so much!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 2-Introductions

I like your story so far :)

And I don't know if anyone's happened to mention but Nick is his manager not his agent (Stephanie).  Just thought I'd bring that up.

That's really besides the point though... great story so far and can't wait to read more :)

 



Author's Response:

Hi my dear!

so glad you are enjoying so far... yes. you caught me on the very early writing portion of this story, i really should go back and change that. we will see much more of Manager Nick later... 

now the ocd girl in me is rushing off.... LOL! 

thanks so much for the review!

looking forward to more!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

I had a nice and very long review written and somehow it got erased! Here goes.

I am so looking forward to Jen going back home to Rob. He needs to know what happened and even though he'll be heartbroken to know that they lost a baby, hopefully they will have the promise and hope of being able to have another try when all is well again. How he reacts to this tragedy is something I'm really looking forward to reading. No doubt he'll be heartbroken, not just by what happened but that he wasn't there for her when she needed him the most. Hopefully Claire will be able to help him deal witht that pain. Thanks for another great chapter, it brought tears. Just get her home to him, toute sweet! Thanks dear, and big Hugs!!



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear. i hate when the reviews fall to the ether! 

i an looking forward to them being together again as well. they can only deal with this together, no matter what Jen thinks is right for him, it is important that they are together to deal with it. 

i think you will like his reaction... i'll leave it at that.

Clare will be such a wonderful support for both of them. 

thanks so much my dear. for all your support, it means so much!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: mom23xx (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

such a powerful chapter...terrific and emotional.  I look forward to them reuniting. 



Author's Response:

thank you so much my dear.

so glad you liked it!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

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