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Reviewer: heyjude08 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

Oh, so sad....I feel so badly for Jen....and "our" Rob. I hope she tells him. As a mom, this was a really hard chapter to read.....I don't know what I would do if it was me.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

PS. Yep, my name indicates a love of the Beatles...esp my main man, Paul. He'll always be my #1 Brit ;)

Author's Response:
ah! Paul and John... John for his poetic soul. Paul cos he is just so darn cute! even now!

ok..back to the chapter.... As a mom it was a really hard chapter to write. but i knew that having a mum with Jen, would help. Jen needs to come to terms with her motherhood issues, both in being a mother and in understanding her mother more.

thanks so much my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: hey333777 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

AAAHHHHHH I am at my wits end, I just need to know this story will continue and i am not reading someting like a year old. i feel terrible i dont know when the last chapter was written. is there anyway to know this is going to continue?????? I am totally taken in by this story I need and crave more. please tell me it will continue. you can e mail me that would be great hey333777@yahoo.com plz plz plz.

Author's Response:
i have sent you an email. not to worry- lots more to go.

if you check below the name of the story, you will see a listing for when it was last updated, as well as when it was submitted.. that helps to see how long the author has taken to update.

i update every week, or there abouts. crazy, i know...

thanks so much! so glad you are enjoying the story!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: lep (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

I know it's going to be a bumpy ride, but I'm so glad that Clare is there. Thanks as always for writing...

Author's Response:
thanks so much for understanding. Clare will be a big help for these two kids.

thanks so much for reading!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Ryanne 187 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

Although Ive been harsh, because of my inability to understand where others come from, I wanted to wave the white flag and say Im sorry. Since youre not talking to me anymore, Ill do this here.

When I was recovering from Jasons final attack, they put me in a CT. hospital named Silver Hills. Its a beautiful, peaceful place for people who are very sick, or just in alot of pain. It was probably the nicest place they ever put me in the long string of institutions Ive had the pleasure of being in. Ive enclosed a link to the site and perhaps this is a place Jen could be in.

This is a small state where people can dissappear (youd be shocked at how many celebs live within driving distance from me). I happen to live in one of this states ghettos, but if youre looking for a hole in the wall, Connecticuts a good choice.

Steph, listen, I never meant to cause such trouble. But its deeply ingrained in me to lash out. Anger management issues. Please write me back, and check out this site.

http://www.silverhillhospital.org/

With Respect,

+>Ryanne<+

Author's Response:
thanks so much Ryanne. I know we have already spoken, but i wanted to put it up here as well so everyone understood.

I know how much Jen means to you, and I will endeavor to keep her on a positive path to recovery. She deserves that , she deserves some happy in her life. She'll find the help she needs. I'll check out the link. i am glad you were able to find something good in your life for the little time you were there.

I know you didn't want to cause trouble, but I admire you for caring so much for a character that is close to my heart.

i will try my best to make sure she has what she deserves in life. love and happiness and a family that cares about her, and a man that work hard to deserve her.

thanks hun.

peace and MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: TwilightKidd (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

Omg, it was a very emotional chapter but so beautiful :'(

Whens the next chapter up?

Author's Response:
thank you so much! so happy to see you enjoyed it!

next chapter will be up any day. usually a week apart.

thanks!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Miss Sasha Fierce (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

I sooooooooo wish Rob and Jen where together in real life. They're better together than him with Kristen.

BTW, do you think Rob & Kristen are together? I hope to god there not. They don't seem right for each other. If Jen and Rob where together in reality I would be a fully fleged supporter of the two :)

Can't wait for the next update <3

Author's Response:
As long as rob is happy, that's all i care about. Its a rare kind of love that Rob and Jen have found. I would love for him to find that with someone one day. he deserves it. maybe he has, we just don't know.

it makes my heart warm when you say you'd be a supporter... you and theatregirl have it right. it's his happiness that is important not really what they look like together or how many movies it could sell...

I have my opinions on Rob and Kristen... but i keep them to myself so as to keep in storms from brewing. i will say i have a new respect for her as a human being after starting this story- purely on the fact that what they go thru is crazy and must be a lot of pressure for young people to take.

but after that... my lips are sealed... smile...

thanks so much my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Hawkeye (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

Again, this is beautifully done.

I suffered several miscarriages before my husband and I adopted our FABULOUS daughter. You've done a great job at capturing what I remember to be a very confusing and guilt ridden time. It's a crazy twisted mess and the relationship between what it means to be a woman and a lover gets very tangled in with the concept of motherhood. Everything in life becomes suspect and you can easily lose your way if you don't have a strong spirit.

I'm reading with great interest and a couple of tears!!!! I have to say I find it amazing that you do serious plot and hot lemons equally well.

Author's Response:
thank you so much. when I decided to go this route (so early on i can't even remember anymore) i truly wanted to make sure it rang true for those that have had to deal with this. i hope i can continue to hold true to that. it's such a difficult topic, and so often glossed over or overlooked. so I am so happy to hear it has read well for those that have experienced this. my heart goes out to you. it really is a hard time to try and deal with the mental overload of what it means to be a woman, a mother, and a lover and friend. it is so much to deal with.

she is strong. but even the strong get lost. it is important to have the support of the loved ones... so Rob and the family will be instrumental.

thank you so much. your review means so much to me!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: sabry_dragonlady (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 7-Questions

i never knew that fic! is so sad... everyone talks about it but i just dont know it! my "the officc" is master of the universe lol. and im loving your fic a lot :)

Author's Response:
thanks so much for reading!

I know, I am very sad that "The Office" got pulled just shortly after posting this story. LOL! MotU would totally be the office of this season...

thank you so much, i am glad you are enjoying!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

Wow those are some updates

Author's Response:
thanks hun... whew...

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: bonhuercreux (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

I need more! I find myself basically gagging for the next chapter. You are such a brilliant writer. I have fallen in love with the way that you have created Rob and Jen. They're such a beautiful couple. I really enjoy the way that you have made the Pattinson's so traditionally English as well. I'm an English person and I find the way that you have developed these characters, so refreshing. They are not the stuffy type of characters you can sometimes come across. They are all incredibly believable. I am looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response:
thank you so much! to know that RobJen mean so much to my readers just makes me smile and want to keep writing forever... of course the carpal tunnel has other thoughts! LOL!

thank you for your compliment on the Pattinson's. it may sound odd to say i love them dearly, even though i don't know them. But I can only hope they are some glimmer of how i write them. and i am glad i can make them seem realistic for you! Coming from an English person, that means so much to me!

thank you so much for reading and supporting this little (not so little) story.

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: cassie634 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

Wow, poor Jen. So sad. She's had so many bad things happen to her. I love that Rob's mum rushed to her side. I hope the docs can find a way for her to have a baby. Maybe surgery to remove scar tissue and repair the damage? I am anxioius to read how she tells Rob she was pregnant with his baby. I'm sure that is going to be hard to read. I hope Jen realizes she's worth the love from Rob and his family.

Great research BTW. Really realistic and believable on the medical stuff!

Author's Response:
thanks my dear. so glad you liked the medical stuff. lots of research to make it all work out...

jen... there is always hope for their future to have kids. we'll see. there are procedures. it's just a matter of seeing if it will work or not, right?

Yes, the conversation will be rough... and once she is back with Rob, hopefully that will make her realize how important she is to him.

thanks so much my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: twmomma (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 55-Goodbye,Muirnin

OMG I am bawling! So sad, but happy. Awww, Im a sap too!!! Loved it!

Author's Response:
{{HUGS}} so glad you liked it!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:54 AM · On: Chapter 14-The Morning After

LOL Wow, that was embarressing for her, but he apparently liked it... so dance away, Jen! LOL

I always think of LoveGame & Robert Pattinson in the same sentence. Whenever I hear it on the radio, I bust out laughing. Good times! :P

Author's Response:
that song shall forever be the official RPattz theme song... even when he is old and pudgy and bald... just saying...i can't not giggle when i hear it...

yes, i think he liked it, that's for sure!

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 13- Say It, Out Loud

Aww, that was beautiful :) Teeheeeheee... awww, they said they love each other :)

And Elvis' guitar AND Rob playing it AND singing? Almost died there. Just saying. HELLO! LOL

Author's Response:
heehee..well thank you..thank you verra much! LOL!

i'll respond to all your other reviews, but I couldn't help answering this one before trotting off to bed!

ahh singing... and playing... the love... they are completely taken with one another, yeah?

so glad you liked it!

thanks for all your reviews! I am really behind on them this week, but will be catching up!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 12- Help Me

Aww, man! That Lizzy is one smart chickie :P

I am hoping he sings to her.. that is all :) And if he doesn't, he should :D

Author's Response:
soo good he has such a loving sis, yeah?

hoping he sings to her, eh? hhehee...

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 11- Hearts

Oh, mannnnn!! :(( Poor kids! :(( Man, the ending sucked as in it was painful to read and 'watch' them go through that--- like I know they're going to go through that and it's totally obvious they have to that talk. They totally have to talk about the elephant in the room.

I like your story!! As you can tell :)

Author's Response:
thanks so much hun!

yeah... they both have major issues that they need to deal with. but they care for one another, and if they express what they are feeling, maybe things will fall into place, right? right?

sigh... young love...

thanks my dear! so glad you are enjoying it!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: twmomma (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 11:34 PM · On: Chapter 52-Leaving On a Jet Plane

I just started reading your story a few days ago and I LOVE it. Your wonderful. Thank you.

Author's Response:
thanks so much my dear!

so glad you are enjoying it!

thank you for reading and reviewing!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 10-Realizations

I love how you started this chapter… sneaky, sneaky! That was great!

Author's Response:
thanks hun!

heeehee.. you liked that, eh? well you'll be entertained to know there is a companion story of NTE, all in Rob's POV. i am nuts i know. but a chapter by chapter account from Rob's POV!

it's called On the Threshold: Robert's View. and now that you are past the surprise... it is safe to read...

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: twibrarian88 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 56-Reality Crashing

Steph --

You did the right thing, for the story and for the characters. You made it realistic, and that's consistent with everything else you've done. I know this is an emotional topic -- I went through fertility problems and a miscarriage myself before having my two beautiful daughters -- and I can remember the emotional trauma like it was yesterday. I know there are others out there that, as you said, want Jen to have what they could not. But you need to be true to your characters and your story.

Thanks for the work and the emotional effort you put in on this.

-- Deb

Author's Response:
thanks so much Deb.

I am so glad to have your support. It is this exact reason i choose to write it this way. there are those that don't have the fairy tale ending, who have had to struggle. I hope I can illustrate that some with Jen. yes, of course she deserves to have kids of her own. she has gone thru so much. and maybe she will one day, as you did. but not without life getting in the way. Life isn't always pretty. it's messy, it hurts, it challenges... that's what i hope to convey.

thank you so much for supporting me. it means so much to me. It truly motivates me. thank you.

more soon. always!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 9-Excursions

Wowzas, the whole workout room thing was hot! :) And when he turned on her and put her against the window? HELLO! LOL I'd do yoga all the time if Rob's what I got in return LOL Just saying! ROFLMAO

The whole part where he sees himself on the magazines-- ugh, that just made me feel terrible for him in real life. I really do feel bad for him! :( That totally sucks! But, you did a good job of showing his emotion on that and her finding out how really feels about it all. Poor guy!

Awww, the ending was super sweet and I can't wait to see how it all develops! Great chapter! :)

Author's Response:
LOL! HELLOO! yeah. i seem to like them against walls...or windows... against things.. yep...

i;d be a yoga master if it meant having rob!

The magazine part is something i feel strongly about. how must he feel with all the scrutiny, his life laid out in front of him in print, and 99% wrong... it has to be tough. that thought is what started this story, if you can believe that.

thanks so much my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: hisbella (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

This was such an unbelievable chapter to read. Heart wrenching. I'm glad Jerkwad (AKA Nick) had the sense to call Mom P. I think it will do Jen a lot of good to have ClarePatz there to help her. Thank you for your hardwork on this chapter. I had tears in my eyes reading it, so I can just imagine what you went through to write it. I can't wait to read Rob's take! I will wait patiently for them to be reunited. Big hugs to you cuz I think you need it!

Author's Response:
thank you so much my dear. Nick is trying to make amends. Bringing Clare in was a very smart move. Clare can provide the motherly attention Jen needs. this was difficult to write, especially knowing the hopes that you all had for her... i am so glad it is finally posted.. a giant weight has been lifted...

thank you so much for all your support and love for this story . it means so much to me to see the love here for these two. simply astounding and keeps me going! so big hugs back!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

Steph! Awww, so much pain for her. But she can't think that she isn't good enough for Rob. I think that is the drugs and the downward spiral contributing to that thinking. He loves her so and doesn't care about all that. She needs to get home to Rob so he can reassure her how much he loves her. I'm glad Clare is there for her, she's such a good person!

Hugs,

Louise

Author's Response:
thanks Louise.

it is definitely the spiral and the drugs. she really needs him there, but her fears are compounded by her hormones and after effects.Clare is a big help, but she needs to heal with Rob over much of this.

thanks so much my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: Writing4Roses (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 8- Answers

Wow, ooooo weee! :) That was hot! :) Me likey LOL

She's so lucky he took it the best way possible to her benefit and didn't get mad and try to leave or something. Cause.. of course, that would have sucked! :P

I love all her mental banter LOL

And I love that he was secretly talking to her friend, I would have died LOL And then he sent a picture? I agree, that was rather ballsy of him, but I could totally see him doing something like that-- not thinking it through. Typical Rob, gotta love him! :)

Great chapter! :D

Author's Response:
heeheee. you liked it?

it is a good thing Rob took the fan thing well. otherwise this would have read like Misery...heehee

i am glad you like her mental banter... i love writing it! such a dork! hahaha

I can totally see him doing something ridiculous like sending off pics to Jens friend... that goof!

thanks my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 57-Mum is here

My heart really breaks for Jen. You can see how her mind and heart are really warring with each other. She' feels she doesn't deserve a family, but relishes her relationship with Rob's. I hope.... I hope they get her the help she needs in the UK, and that she doesn't push Rob away... I think this is where your characterization of Rob could really shine.... I'm always on the edge of my seat. Glad Nick is eating a very large humble pie... possibly some crow too.... LOL!

Author's Response:
thanks so much tracy!

she is going thru so much. she wants a family do much. but her doubts really hurt her confidence that she can have that. It will take much needed therapy and love of Rob and his family to get her thru.

oh Nick... he's trying, isn't he? maybe he'll be out of the doghouse soon... maybe.

thanks so much my dear!

MWAH!

steph

Reviewer: heyjude08 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 32-Girls Day Out

Hmmm....I'm not too happy with you! I stayed up until 3am reading chapters 1-32 when I should have been studying (or sleeping!). I'm completely sucked in. Great story!

Author's Response:
heyjude!

oh how I love your name! thanks so much for reading and taking an interest! *blushes* sorry i made you not study or sleep... lol.

if your name is at all an indicator... i'll be interested in your thoughts on some later chapters... grins...

thanks so much for reading and reviewing! glad you like it!

MWAH!

steph

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