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Reviewer: Koekedeke (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
I was so confused to see you have started all over again. I love this story. Glad to see you keep working on it.
Author's Response: Yes, I decided a re-write was in order. I hope you stick with me! :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: hautefoodie (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2011 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
I can't remember how the old first chapter went, but I liked this one! The introduction of the dreams was great...it created lots of questions for the story. I can't wait to see how things unfold in the other revised chapters!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I hope you like the future chapters as well!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good start!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Thanks for reading, reviewing and the stars!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 5
Hmmm it would seem that the Cullen's know more than they let on, will more be revealed soon...Ohh I can't wait to find out. I shudder to think how much more Bella will be bruised up if she falls asleep. Hmm can Edward see what she goes thru while she sleeps...poor guy must be losing it when that happens...
Author's Response: The Cullens do know more than what they let on. Exactly how much they know will be revealed in a future chapter.
Thanks so much for reading, reviewing and the stars!!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 4
OMG...poor Bella, talk about a very scary experience. It is a bit confusing but I am beyond curious now...riveted actually...
Author's Response:
It was a scary experience, but Bella's tough. She'll get through it. =)
Unfortunately, the confusion won't be cleared up until chapter 13...I hope you will stick with me until then!
Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and the stars!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 3
Wow this was one mindbender of a chapter...I can't help but be curious as to what is up with Bella...kind of reminds me of the stigmata story...
I mean she has the burn of the hand on her ankle...whoa...creepy
Author's Response: Don't worry, everything will be explained soon. And yes, it is very creepy.
Thanks for reading, reviewing and the stars!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 2
Awww...I feel for Bella. It must be terrifying to have such dreams...shudder. I have to wonder like Bella...why would the Cullen's just now be talking to Bella?
Author's Response: Cullens are strange people aren't they? Stick with me and you'll find out why the Cullens are just now talking to her. =)
Thanks for reading, reviewing and the stars!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow what a way to begin...
Author's Response: Thank you!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: u2shay (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 5
:) And Edward actually asks her out on a date! I love it!
Shay
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for reading, reviewing and the stars!
Reviewer: u2shay (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 4
and the plot thickens...
I'm feeling really bad for Bella right now. I have a sneaking suspicion about what is going on, but I'll keep it to myself for now. LOL
Shay
Author's Response: No, tell me what you're thinking! I would love to hear your theories. =)
Thanks for reading, reviewing and the stars!
Reviewer: u2shay (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 3
Nice cliffhanger...
Somehow, I'm very glad that the next chapter is already up! :)
Shay
Author's Response: Thank you! It's not often that I get compliments for cliffhangers...but then again the next chapter is already up. ;)
Thank you for reading, reviewing and the stars!!
Reviewer: u2shay (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 2
:) It makes me wonder exactly what the menacing force is in Bella's dreams.
Shay
Author's Response: I wish I could tell you, but if I did, it would give too much away. But don't worry, it will be revealed.
Thanks for reading, reviewing and the stars!!!
Reviewer: u2shay (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 1
Very interesting! I'm looking forward to more.
Shay
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm looking forward to seeing what you have to say. =)
Shay, thanks so much for reading, reviewing and the stars!
Reviewer: animelonely (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 3
soooo confused...but also intrigued(that is probably spelled wrong...)
Author's Response: Don't worry. Everything will be answered very soon. =)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 5
Great Chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 4
Freaky Dreams!
Author's Response: Yes, they are pretty strange, aren't they?
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 3
Nice Chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 2
Poor Bella!
Author's Response: Yes, she doesn't have the nest luck right now. =(
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great Beginning!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kate1991 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 5
come ooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn. what takes soooo long to update...
Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue for validation. :)
Reviewer: ducksandruns (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 5
Very captivating plot so far. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: The next chapter is the queue and should be up soon!
Thanks for reading, reviewing and rating!
Reviewer: sprazinko (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 5
Sounds good so far cant wait to see what happens with her dreams
Author's Response: Thank you! There's more to come, so stay tuned!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 5
Your story is so original. I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are enjoying it!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
that nasty shadow is really scary!
Author's Response: Yes, it is and I'm afraid it will only get worse.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 5
I don't know what's going on but I have a feeling the Cullens know something is up with Bella. She seems human but maybe not - she healed pretty quickly but after all those were dream induces injuries?
Whatever is happening, the Cullens seem to care about her especially Edward. I'm glad he asked her out and I'm looking forward to their date.
Author's Response: You're right, the Cullens-especially Edward- do care about Bella very much. Whether they know what is going on or not....Well, you'll just have to wait and see. ;)
I'm glad you are looking forward to their date...It's a date that neither one of them will forget.
I'll update as soon as I get the chapter back from my beta. =)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
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