I didn't get to read the original story so I'm in the dark as to what is going on but I must say that I am very curious and can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Don't worry, with the original story, you didn't miss anything. :)

I'll try to have the next chapter up as soon as possible.

Thanks for reading, reviewing and the stars!!

-starts to drool- me need more this is amazing i cant wait for the next chapter i just read the story withing the hr is soooooooo goood, love the wierd plot ^,..,^ and the action hehehe, good luck in other stories that you might be writing and ill be waiting for more >:D

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Thanks for reading, reviewing and the stars!!!

I am SO VERY HAPPY to see you back to this story. You must have been working hard and also been very busy in RL.

I am so happy to see another chapter for this story. It is one of my Top 3 favorite stories and I wondered  where you disappeared off to. I thought you ran away to some deserted island just to escape the crazines! :O)

I love this tale and I want to follow all the way along with you til the end of the line! I am hoping your life calms down a bit  for you to catch a breath and that you can post another chapter very soon.

Thank you so much for posting in the midst of your crazy busy life. I know how that gets! You gave a us a gift of the chapter, even though your life  has been busy. I appreciate it very much!

Excellent chapter and great work . Excellent writing and plotline still keeps me hooked and wanting more, more, more! I can't help iyt, I just love the story that much! :O)

Disney Vampire

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! You brought a smile to my face with your wonderful review. :)

I didn't run away! (Although that deserted island does sound good right now ;) ) RL just kept me busy. :(

I'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as I can. Things are still kind of busy right now, but hopefully the next chapter will be done and off to my beta soon.

I'm glad you love it and I hope you continue to enjoy it!

Thank you for reading, reviewing and for the stars!!!

Oh gawd, the Cullens really need to tell her whatever is happening. I have a feeling if they don't Bella is just going to end up dead....

Author's Response:

Things will be revealed soon.

Thanks for reading, reviewing and the stars!

Good Story. Poor Bella, I am wondering it the Cullens are afraid for themselves or Bella? I'm going with the latter, they would never be that selfish. Was that Edward in her last dream? If so, its good to knowe he's protecting her. If I was her, I would be emotionally exhausted as well. Waking up like that thinking you were dead or dieing would be a shock to the system. -Sighs- Lets just hope they can help her.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

The Cullens are concerned mainly for Bella.

Was it Edward? I have no idea. ;)

Thanks for reading, reviewing and for the stars!

you are definitely keeping me guessing with this story... every time I think I established a probable theory, you write something that makes me reconsider my theory...

well done =)

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Things will come together soon, so you won't have to guess for long. :)

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

its getting realyl interesting now. she passes out they are fine when she wakes up they are sick. there has to be a happy mdeium somewhere.

Author's Response:

Things are going to get more mysterious...but a small silver lining will appear in a future chapter. It may not last long, but it will be there.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I am just waiting for that alert to be in my inbox, so I can click on it and  there will be a new chapter for ths great story. I can't wait to read what is coming. I am so looking forward to the next chapters and am longing to know what the heck is happening to Bella.

So, Heres to working on a great chapter and I am thinking of you, as you toil over the next chapter and I look so forward to reading your words that will take us, as readers a chapter closer to the truth of the mystery!

DV

Author's Response:

The next chapter is with my beta. As soon as I get it back, I'll update! :-)

Thank you for reading, reviewing and the stars!!

So, so good...More! More! More!  Now! Now! Now! :o)

I am so looking forward to the next chapter and all those that follow. You have me really hooked. Like a trained puppy, I check my email first for an update to this story. it is so mysreious and good. woof...where is my update? :o(  I hope real soon   a new chapter will bring you back  to Twilighted and them another and another and...

Just my mind trying to figure this story out:  It sounds like to me, that Bella has some sort of amnesia and that these things that take place in her dreams are memories, not just random dreams. Past Life? I don't about that. I think it is is this life that she went through, all that she did in the Twilight series and sometime after the last book,  somehow the Volturi  have wiped her memory clean. It seems thiough she has memories that are just trying to break through. I don't know  if this is even part of the plot. I am just trying to put the puzzle pieces of the story together.

Whatever the mystery is, it is excitng and so much fun to try to figure out AND worth waiting for!

Well done once again!

Your biggest cheerleader and fan! :o) (But you already know that!)

Disney Vampire

 

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it!

I can't tell you much, but I can tell you that this story doesn't follow the books by much. There may be a few a little details that go with the saga, but the overall story, is all its own. :-)

The next chapter is being edited and worked on. I hope to have it posted soon.

Thank you for reading, reviewing and the stars!!!

I loved the mystery of this story before, but now you've turned it up a notch. LOVE IT :)

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're still loving it!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Major excitement!  I haven't read a fanfic this good and FRESH and original in a long time!  And it's well-written, which I love.  And even though the story plot is so different, you still manage to keep it in twiiight-character.  Which believe me, is a major accomplishment and feels so good.

You're very good.  =D

 

Also, good job taking your time with the plot development.  Most authors would've outright said the past-life theory (which I'm going to guess is true, shhhh.;) but oh well) in, like, the first chapter.  But you actually worked it in and I couldn't even be sure if I suspected it correctly until a little bit more now.

 

Anyway, sorry, I'm ranting.

 

So, basically, I'm telling you how awesome a story this is in the hopes that it will get your creative-writer juices going (yep, I'm selfish) and you will be happy, and then you'll have more chapters up fast!  Please hurry, I can't wait!!!  I'm totally addicted ALREADY.

 

Hurry!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you like it!

Thank you for the compliment, as well! You made me blush! :-)

Chapter six is being edited and should be posted soon.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

great update. can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thank you! Chapter six is being edited and should be up soon.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Lovin' this story! Keep up the great work!

You do that voodoo that you do so well! :o)

That means you are the queen of the mystery on Twilighted! You got the formula for writing mystery in your cells. Great imagination, wonderful plotline, and great timing, watching the mystery come to life little by little, a slow moving mystery is always the best revealing a little more each chapter  by each chapter, And the finale of a story like this is the pay off for reading such great writing on the way..

The reader is always chewing on each chapter and the information it holds to see if they can figure out the whole thing, and you  just keep feeding us little tidbits, one at a time to add another dimension to the mystery. And we just feast on them and eat it up.  What a yummy story! :o)

We THINK we want the mystery solved so the headaches from trying to figure it out will go away, (hehehe) and we THINK we want the:  And they lived happily ever after". rightnow,  BUT we don't.

We want to savor every chapter of the things that are taking form and try to figure it out.  We are looking towards that big AH HA! moment when you give it to us and to see if our own theories  about the story were right! 

The Ah Ha! moment is the prize of reading a great mystery story like this, even when the story seems to be moving slowly, (it really is not, it is just building more suspense) BUT that is the beauty and the tastiness of a well-written mystery! The plot just unfolds like a flower at dawn in the new sunshine. I am one of your biggerst fans and I will rec this story EVERYWHERE, at all fan fiction sites! 

In a nutshell, I guess what I am trying to say is that you write an excellent mystery! It makes us want the ending AND want to read and savor all those clues and things that happen along the way in the story until we finally get to that final AH HA! moment when the story becomes clear for us. What a joy to read and enjoy each chapter, so we get to enjoy the prize at the end...Woo Hoo! 

You get 10 stars  out of 10 for this story!!!!

YOU ROCK! :o)

Well done!

Disney Vampire

Author's Response:

Thank you for your wonderful review!! It brought a smile to my face.

I am SO happy that you are enjoying this story. I hope you continue to enjoy it as it goes on.

Thank you for the amazing compliments as well! You have me blushing!

I know 'thank you' isn't big enough for this awesome review, but it's all I can think of...Thank you. I'm flattered by your words. I hope this story lives up to its expectations.

Thank you SO much for reading, reviewing and the stars!!!!