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Reviewer: mikeandlisa1995 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2013 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 2
It appears lines are missing from chapter 2.
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Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know!
Reviewer: SavyGrace (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 12:46 AM · On: Chapter 8
HI! Hope all is well! I just wanted to say that I really miss this story and hope you will update whenever you can and maybe that is soon? :) I've read this story since you posted it (I used to be storms on here but I changed my account), anyways I still love this story and still think about it. I really hope that this story isn't abandoned because it's too good along with your writing. But if it is I'm sure it's for a good reason. Again, I hope everything is well!
Author's Response: Hi! I'm terribly sorry for the delay! Life hasn't been very kind lately, but it looks like things might clear up soon.(Hopefully, anyway!)
Currently, I'm having this entire story re-beta'd because my previous beta had to step down and my new betas wanted to start from the beginning. My betas and I are working to get as many chapters completed so the updates can come quickly. I hope to have the re-worked chapters up very soon. I promise that I won't ever abandon this story. :-)
Thank you so much for your continued support, even though this story hasn't been updated in a while. It really means a lot to me. :-)
Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2012 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 8
I still look for chapters from this great story to be posted. All the time I come over to check on my favorites list to see if it has been updated. Don't give up on it, please don't give up writing it. You need to continue to write this story. It is begging to be written and finshed and the mystery wants to come out and culminate in an ending fit for this tale.
There are plenty of us readers that want to see what happens and where this is going. This is a great, very well written mystery and only you can take us on the ride to the end. You have piqued our interest and now, WE NEED MORE!
Please come back and write more chapters! VERY SOON! I want to see more of this story. I am addicted to it and miss the chapters being posted taking us into the mystery and hoping to find out what is going on..
Please, please, please, come back and write more chapters and finish this great story. You are writing such a phenomenal story here and don't stop. YOU MUST continue. WE NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS. You have taken us this far and have us hanging by a thread to follow the rest of it. Please come to our rescue and tell us more ands why and what and who and where, and when! YOU can tell I am not past getting on my knees and begging for more of this story. PLeeeeeease come back. Pleeeeease?
MORE OF THIS WELL WRITTEN, GREAT MYSTERIOUS STORY PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!
It really is a terrific story and well written mystery that only you can finish. I will be watching for more chapters. I hope you come back with chapters and a finish eventually. This is my wish for this story and you.
Thank you for what you have written so far. Please don't leave us hanging by this thread and let us share more of the story and see what happens and why.
Your fan,
Disney Vampire
Author's Response: I am so sorry for the long wait. A lot of things have happened since my last update that were out of my control...One of them being that my beta had to step down due to RL issues and I spent quite a while looking for someone else to beta this story. Finally, I was to directed to PTB and I've been sending my chapters to them.
PTB has a policy of sending the chapters from chapter 1, so I've been doing that, trying to catch up to where I am on Twilighted. This is kind of a slow process, since RL takes up a large chunk of time, but it is getting done. I promise I will continue to write and post this story. I will never give up. I promise.
Thank you for your continued support for this story, even though it has been a long time since an update.
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 8
I am LOVING this story! You HAVE to finish this!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you love it!
Don't worry, I am going to finish this story. A lot has happened since my last update that has made it slightly difficult to update, but I PROMISE I will complete this!
Thank you for reading, reviewing and for the stars! (Not to mention sticking with me. Thank you!)
Reviewer: CatWhit (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2011 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
Very interesting indeed! I look forward to reading more :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: bella1 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 8
Reviewer: momof2monkeys (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 8
Thank you for the chapter! I look forward to each chapter, I am really enjoying the rewrite of this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!!
I'm working on the next chapter and I hope to have it up soon.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 8
I am so glad to see another chapter for this great story! YAY! I was hoping for one soon. I have been waiting to see where you ae going with the story. What a great mystery tale!
GREAT chapter and great story! MORE! MORE! MORE! SOON! PLEASE?
Awesome story and awesome writing! You are great! Your story is great! :O)
YOU ROCK!
Disney Vampire
Author's Response: Thank you for the awesome review and amazing star rating!
I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and I hope you continue to enjoy!
I'm working on the next chapter and I hope to update soon!
Thank you for reading, reviewing and the stars!!
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 8
Is there much importance in the ring? Can it keep the bad things away? (Though, if that were true, why doesn't she wear it all the time?) Or did he just put it on her again because he misses seeing it on her, in some sort of agony that she doesn't remember him, them?
Was she a vamp before, but did something turn her into a human again? Or is she a special human with said healing powers? Though I think she was a vamp, because my mind seems to tell me there was a 'sacrifice' she made - her immortal life with Edward, and her memories of all of them. Question is: why?
The story title is 'Prophecy'. Something seen by Alice? Although she doesn't have the power to take someone's memory, and immortality - if that latter was taken. What for? What/Who are they saving? Mankind? The Cullens from the Volturi? James and Victoria could be more special...
Yeah, I like the possibilities of the fic. I really hope you're fully happy with this version (as mentioned before, it's much more fluent, clear - though unclear-ish where it needs to be) and that you'll find happiness in writing it to completion. :-D
Hope to see you soon!
Spikey
Author's Response: I love your theories! I wish I could answer your questions, I really do, but if I answer one then that will reveal the entire story...And I don't want to do that!
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far and I hope you continue to enjoy it. =)
Yes, I am happy with the way this version is going...I can only hope that you and everyone else who reads likes it as well.
I'm working on the next chapter and I hope to have it completed and sent to my beta very soon!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 8
Nice update. Bella's curiosity always places her where she is not wanted, at that moment. Update soon.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it!
Yes....Bella's curiousity gets her into some sticky situations. =)
I'm working on the next chapter and hope to have completed and sent to my beta soon!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 7
Eep, I somehow didn't see the update of this chapter. Anyway, that's been straightened by the update after that. Heh.
Hmm, Bella googled for mental powers and found something similar to hers? A pity that it didn't say more about the girl, as in what happened with her, did one of her sustained injuries somehow kill her? E.g. her dreaming about getting strangled...if you break that part, it could be done with you?
Gonna read the next one.
Spikey
Author's Response: That's the funny thing about websites....they never give you enough information when you really need it. ;)
I hope you enjoy the next chapter!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 8
Great update! It was interesting seeing this Bella have some sense of self-preservation, and sad to see Edward's reaction. I hope she gets answers soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
Bella...she's on overload right now and seeing what she saw is kind of putting her on overload. But don't worry, she'll get answers with the next chapter! ....And Edward. We'll get to him at a later chapter. =)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: guardedwithanangel (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 7
Please update! I'm addicted! <3
Author's Response: I'll be updating soon. =)
Thanks for reading and revieiwng!
Reviewer: guardedwithanangel (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2011 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 7
Please update! I'm addicted! <3
Author's Response: I'll be updating soon. =)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 7
i hope she figures it out soon! or they tell her !
Author's Response: Don't worry, things will be revealed soon enough. ;)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: momof2monkeys (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 7
So excited to finally have an update, can't wait for the next. Was Bella and Edward married or engaged and these attacks take her from him? Is the Volturi part of this?
Author's Response: I'll be updating very soon, so you won't have to wait long. ;)
I wish I could answer your questions, but I tend to give too much away when I speak (or in this case, type.). =) All I can say is that things will be revealed soon.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 7
Thank you for posting a new chapter for this great story! I am so happy you are back and posting again! This story is too good to be forgotten. It MUST be written.
I love it and the fact that you are really writing the story in the best way possible, in your way and telling the story well. I love what you are writing!
Thank you again for posting a new chapter and I hope we get more new chapters VERY SOON! Don't make us wait too long fro the goodness that is this story! We will have to get on our knees and beg for more! Not a pretty sight...a whole buch of fanfic readers on their knees and begging for more,.. :P
Thank you for the new chapter! It is really very good! :O)
Disney Vampire
Author's Response: Sorry for the wait. I won't make you wait much longer for the next chapter!
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far and I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Thanks for reading, reviewing and the stars!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 7
I don't know what the repercussions of Bella finding out the truth may be, but I do know that keeping it secret from her could lead to some unwelcome consequences themselves. I mean, they're lucky she doesn't think she's insane from all this, or be so freaked out she tries to hurt herself. Or tell the wrong person, like her parents.
Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: You're right....they are lucky she's not going insane.
They would tell her what's happening, but they can't. At least not yet.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: timi55 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 7
this whole frekin thing frustraites me
( pardon my bad spelling )
Author's Response: I know it's confusing, but things will start to clear up soon. It's just going to take a few chapters to get there.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 5
I admit I don't remember all the details of the original, but I do get the feeling it's quite different in some spots. It feels tighter, more cohesive, and you're giving more hints of a previous life I think? Poor Edward, this must be killing him to have had to wait for her if that's the case. And now to have her so close yet not know the truth, well. He's an idiot though for saying what he did about the rings. Of course it makes sense to him but he has no clue how she would take it. I hope Alice popped him on the head for being clueless.
Author's Response: Yes, this version is cleaned up quite a bit.
Edward doesn't think before he acts....you'll see an example of this in a later chapter. ;)
I wish I could say more, but if I did, I'm afraid I would give too much away. So for now I'm keeping my lips sealed. :)
Thank you for reading and taking the time to review!
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2011 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 7
So happy to see an update! I missed this story.
Author's Response: I'm glad to see you're still with me! Thank you!
The next update will be a lot quicker than the last. =)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: timi55 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2011 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 6
i am sooooooo confused
Author's Response: Things will clear up soon. I promise.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: ParkerJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2011 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter! Can't wait to find out what caused them all to be on the ground holding their heads.
Author's Response: Thank you!
That mystery won't be revealed until later on...but it's not too far in the future!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: sweetblood19 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oh dear lord, what is she? and are the vampires who are creeping on her the romanians? or the volturi?
Author's Response: I can't tell you much, but I can tell you that it's neither the Romanians or the Volturi.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2011 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
Very unusual story! I like it. :) Wish there were more chapters... (hint, hint)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!
RL is slightly busy right now, but I'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as I can. :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
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