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Reviewer: burnkitty (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Figment of my imagination

wow. this was beautiful! I loved the way you put across Edwards pain though his thoughts and the way he pictured Bella being right there. I loved the bit at the end too.

Such a wonderfully written story, I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! It took a lot of emotion to write it!

Reviewer: Lizababy (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Figment of my imagination

Bittersweet.  Very touching =)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Figment of my imagination

That was beautiful! BUT... now you have me wondering what Edward did next? Wouldn't he want to go back and check on Bella? To see if she was safe? To satisfy his curiosity and see if she had moved on, like he wanted? Isn't it wrong to plant that seed and not water it?? *evil grin* Really, it was a great one shot, if you want to leave it at that. BUT if you wanted to add to it? I would greatly appreciate it. :)

*hugs*

Joan



Author's Response:

Lol. I'll think about it. I'm trying right now to transfer my stories, though. I have a lot more coming! Thanks!

*hugs*

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Figment of my imagination

poor edward



Author's Response:

I know. :( Thank you for reviewing!

Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 02:52 AM · On: Figment of my imagination

Sad :(, tearful.

Good!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Figment of my imagination

This is so poignant.  I don't say "sad," really, because he asked for it.  Just poignant.  I am guessing Edward didn't know how much it would hurt to be so effective. To be believed.

I'm wondering how long he'd been away from her when this takes place?

And I find it interesting that he would do all of these things if he could see her again...except the one thing he knew she wanted probably above all the others.



Author's Response:

Lol. I wanted to show his pain because I find it loving. It shows how much he cares, and how much he is sacrificing. Thank for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Figment of my imagination

aww that so sad.. i really like it thought



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!!!

Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Figment of my imagination

That was really sweet and heartbreaking!



Author's Response:

You never get to see Edward's vulnerable side. I wanted to reveal it!

Reviewer: DesiCullen (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Figment of my imagination

Intense.

That is about the only word I can think of rate now.

This is actually only one of a handful of one shots that I've read but I'm glad I did. I don't think one shots get enough props or reviews and that makes me sad. This is truly good work and I hope more people will read it.

 



Author's Response:

I know! Thank you so much!!!!

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