I don't think Bella's "dream" was that at all. I fully believe in spirits and angels! I think her mother was there for her when Bella was ready and not before. I can't believe we're at the end of the story :( It's an amazing journey and one I will read over and over :)

Author's Response:

Aww, Trysh, thank you so much!! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. I wrote the "dream" so it could be interpreted either way, but I agree in the fact that it was a "visit" from her mom.  After hearing about how my uncle visited my grandma after his death - I'm a true believer in angels and visits from the other side. 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! :) 

i loved Come Undone,i don't usually read oneshots but i stumbled upon it and just really enjoyed it ,im so glad to see an update i knew that alice was going to meet jasper by the way she was acting it just had to be and it was ...yay.i liked to believe that renee came to bella via her dream so i'm with  going with real although reading that part made me go through a few tissues i'll put that down to the cold that i have (no i'm a sook)

i'm with you til the end

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed Come Undone! :) 

I've been trying to work in the Alice/Jasper meeting forever...I'm so happy you liked it!! :) 

Is it bad that I'm happy you cried during the dream? Makes me feel not so alone since I cried writing it. It was one of my favorite parts of the chapter. :) 

Thanks for sticking with me - I really appreciate it!!! 

I was glad to see an update as yours is one of the few stories I still follow in this fandom! I was hanging to see the Alice/Jasper meeting and you certainly delivered! Thanks for taking the time to come back to this and update :)

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you so much for sticking with me. I'm so sorry it took me so long to get it out to you!! :) 

I'm really glad you liked the Alice/Jasper meeting - I'd been trying to work those Eclipse lines in forever!! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! 

What an awesome chapter - when I am reading not much makes me cry but this chapter was so beautiful, the dream that Bella had where Renee came back to her - I loved it. Looking forward to the next chapter :0)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Hi.

Please don't apologies.  R.L. is very important.  and if ppl don't understand then to bad..  I hope you did great on your theise..  Wow..    are you done know?  

The chapter was amazing.  I cried all with Bella.  It is so true what you said in the chapter..  You can't change the past it was susposed happen.  If they did not died in the accident they would have died from somthing else.  I always believe when your time is up it is up.. 

Have a great weekend.  and thank you for updating.  Better late then never.    Bye  your loyal fan :)Leona

Author's Response:

Yup, all done with my degree and school - for now. I may go back again someday, but at this point, I'm all finished! :) 

I'm so glad you liked the chapter. :)  I too believe when it's your time to go, it's your time to go.  That was what I was trying to get across here so I'm so thankful you picked up on it. :) 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!!  I appreciate it!

ahhh..so glad he asked!..can't wait for next update..:)

Author's Response:

Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it!! :)

I loved this to the max. I laughted sooo hard..

                                      Em had been pushing his luck all weekend with his antics and lack of natural grace, but the final straw for Alice came when she found him in the dressing area in front of the three-way mirror. He had a lacy blue bra on over his massive shoulders, and dozens of scarves draped over his neck and was singing along to Britney's "Oops, I Did it Again."

Once Alice stopped laughing, she ordered Rose to take him home. He wasn't allowed back until there were at least one thousand hits for the YouTube video she was going to post of his performance.

 

 

Author's Response:

LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed it!! Thanks!! 

THIS CHAPTHER WAS HILLARIOUS AT THE END I COMPLETLY LOVED IT

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yay! New chapter! This was full of all the right fluff and angst!~ they're so cute together >.< but I wonder how the move in will work since Edward's not home all the time. And does this mean Alice will be alone all the time now? D:

Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response:

THanks so much!! I tend to like roller coaster chapters for some reason - just wait till the next one!! 

Think about it this way - maybe Alice won't be alone all the time if she happens to run into Jazz somehow?! :) 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

I still haven't ruled out pregancy.  I think the period was that little fake period when the egg attaches or something.   There has to be a reason you dangaling the appointment over our heads.  I figure it's that or either more bad news for the poor kid, like she can't have kids. 

Author's Response:

Hey, first, thanks so much for reviewing every chapter - that's awesome and I really appreciate it!! :) 

Sooo...rule out the pregnancy. The period was a real period. I'm not planing a bait and switch with that one. The truth? I had been, which was why there were so many "clues," but ultimately the pregnancy didn't sit right with me for this moment in Bella's life - it wouldn't have been a happy pregnancy and she's got so many other things to deal with. :/  So no baby for Edward and Bella. 

Thank you again for reading and reviewing!! :) 

 

Yea!  Jasper is here for our sad little pixie.  I know I may be reaching, but with the reoccurance of Bella's aching hips, the headaches and fatigue, could she in fact be pregnant; or could the headache be a result of the lack of sleep and the hip being aggrivated by the weather?  I guess I'll have to wait and see. 

And a song dedicated to Tanya.  Ding dong the wicked witch is dead. 

She is definately not on the up and up.  So whose baby is it?  Perhaps the desperate winch poked holes in his condoms.  Maybe she's tired of working her ass off, felt Edward slipping away, and thought she'd secure that trust fund?  Manipulative winch.

Is this James Wilder? 

After my mom died I would have dreams where it seemed like she was real, and I was always trying to save her from something.  Whenever I woke it shook me to the core.  After time, I trained my mind to know it was a dream when I was dreaming about her.  I usually woke myself up before it got to far, or I would rationalized with myself in my dream why the dream wasn't real. 

Still curious about the whole Alice thing.  I want to know why she won't seek help?  She obviously needs it.  Alice should tell someone.  If not Edward, Carlisle. 

Author's Response:

Yup, Mr. Wilder is James, but he won't be an issue. He's just a minor pain in the rear for Bella.  Nothing to worry about though. The Alice thing comes out in a few chapters. :) She spills her guts to Bella. 

Bella won't seek help because she's a stubborn, stubborn person.  She comes around though. :) Hang in there with me. 

I'm sorry to hear about your mom.  It's so difficult to lose someone and while it's sometimes comforting to see them in our dreams, waking up knowing they're not there is so very hard. I'm glad you found a way to deal with it. 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!