Your donations help keep this site running,
thank you very much for the support!
Reviews For After All
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Firsts

I was so happy to get the update notice tonight and then so puzzled that I had somehow missed their date.  I missed seeing this chapter update!  So I started back on chapter one and read forward.  It's so nice to read these, so far, 13 chapters back to back.  It's such a nice story!

I loved the bowling date.  Who knew it could be so sexy?  I definitely took notes!  I love the way they tease one another.  Now to the Tanya story!



Author's Response:

First, can I just tell you how much I'm in love with the fact that you liked the story enough to go back and read it all again? THANK YOU!!! 

I'm so glad you enjoyed their date; I had a lot of fun writing their teasing - I hope I can keep it up between them. :)

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

lol



Author's Response:

:) 

Reviewer: allycat38654 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

that was sooooo funny



Author's Response:

Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing it! :)

Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

well that was embarrassing especially after the night they shared ,looking forwsrd to bellas confession



Author's Response:

I know, I kinda put Bella through the ringer in that one.  I'll have to think up equally good for Edward and some decent revenge for Emmett! 

Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: joy_1 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

I still hate the arrogant ass and now I want them both to pay.

Reviewer: Nrbl (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

Loved the honesty of this chapter....

Really enjoyed the wake up scene  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much - I'm so glad you liked it!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing - I can't tell you how much I appreciate it!

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

Why must you torture poor Bella!?!? Awesome chappie, btw.



Author's Response:

She's so easy to torture!! I will hopefully come up with some decent revenge on Edward and Emmett...let me think on that! 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: emma08 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

Omg, that was hilarious.  Awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you liked it! 

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

Loved the new chapter!  That was toooo mfing funny that Bella chose teh wrong bed... and Emmett acted like the manwhore he pretends to be.  I'm glad Edward finally fessed everything up to Bella... now it's time for Bella to do the same.



Author's Response:

Thanks, M!! I had a ton of fun writing the end of that chapter - I think Emmett is my new favorite Cullen! :) 

Thanks as always for your continued support...I really appreciate it!! 

Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

Thank goodness that's never happened to me....But if it had I would've gotten even!!



Author's Response:

I think Bella will at some point too - she still has to collect on that bet she won over Edward on their date!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :)

Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

you know, the end of this chapter had me in stitches! a very very simular situation happened to me in high school, only they weren't bothers, they were roomates. and i had a hangover when i woke up which made it worse. but like bella, i now laugh about it!

great story! love it!

g

Author's Response:

Oh G! I'm glad you're able to laugh about it - how funny! 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :) 

Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

Loved this. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: jinlor2 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

LOL, the bedroom incidents was so funny..love it.

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

Too freakin' hilarious!  I loved the whole falling off the bed and then ending up in the wrong brother's bed thing.  My DH gave me such a WTH look as I sat at the computer and laughed out loud.



Author's Response:

LMAO!!! I'm so glad you thought it was funny!! Thanks for making my night - this was great validation for me. :) I love the fact that I actually made someone laugh out loud! :) 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing - I appreciate you and your support!

Reviewer: lmb (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

Great chapter!  I loved all Bella's internal dialogue and how honest Edward was laying it all out there.  Good luck on your exams but don't leave us hanging too long.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I will try to update when I can - I have a little over 1000 words written now, so at least I won't have to start from scratch. I'll try to update as soon as I can! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Jenny Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Reunions

I'm glad Jake is happy in a relationship and not going to be vyying for her affection (that sounds stupid. lol).  Anyway, I'm glad he's not going to be a rival for Edward.  lol



Author's Response:

Jake will definitely not rival Edward for Bella in this story.  I think Chapter 14 makes Bella's feelings clear and the very idea! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Jenny Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Goodbye

Oh, sad start!

Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Firsts

Wicked good first date. And that kiss! I think I saw stars on that one. Oh so good. I love nervous they both are and how they went back and forth trying to one-up the other with some sexual tension. I love teasing fun like that. Good job. 



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you loved the date and their first kiss.  They'll have fun times like that a lot - it's my favorite thing to write.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Firsts

Loved their first date, especially the teasing about the names! :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks Elise!!! I really appreciate your reading and reviews!!! :) 

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2010 06:58 AM · On: Firsts

The first date was wonderful. I hope Bella doesn't pull away from him after he tells her about Tanya. Loved the chapter and it was worth the wait!



Author's Response:

Thanks!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  Bella's reaction to the revelations about Tanya will come in the next chapter! :) 

Reviewer: Nrbl (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 09:43 PM · On: Firsts

Love the date!!  how cool is bowling for a first date??  better than dinner and a movie any day :)

Loved the kissing, was just hoping for a bit more lip lock...  

I know i would have gone back to his place had he asked :)))))



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the bowling idea!! I definitely wanted to do something different than the "typical" first date. 

More lip locks to come in the next couple of chapters.  

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :) 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 07:20 PM · On: Firsts

I love Edward's horny thoughts!



Author's Response:

LOL!!! Is it sad to admit I loved writing them? :) 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!! 

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Firsts

Loved this chapter!!



Author's Response:

YAY!! I'm glad you did!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 05:49 PM · On: Firsts

wow, super super good!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!!! 

Reviewer: allycat38654 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Firsts

The kiss was really hot and tender. I loved that it wasnt rushed. Awesome. I want to read more soon. Please?



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!!! That was what I was going for the with the kiss - I'm glad it came across that way. :) 

Working on Chapter 14 now (in between responding to reviews!)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

Submit a Review




Share/Save/Bookmark


© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.