Well, I see this going a number of ways:

·      Edward was not as “protective” as he could have been – and yes. the baby is his,

·      The baby is born (and it a different race).

·      Tonya looses the baby before full-term delivery (with more angst to follow),

·      Bella discovers she’s pregnant too,

·      It was a fake to begin with – no pregnancy – just poor judgment on Tonya’s part.

 

Love to read the freebee – please send it my way.

Canadian Mom

Author's Response:

Alright, Canadian Mom, can I have my computer back now? :) No fair for you to read ahead!! :)

All jokes aside, you're right. I won't tell you what part you're right about, but one of your theories is correct. 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :) 

Please please please do not let Tanya's baby be Edward's!!!! The only person who has the right to mother Edwward's child is Bella!!!!!!!!!! Plus I really hate it when crappy situations that only end up hurting the kid come into play! please update soon!

Author's Response:

Will do my best to update quickly. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :) 

GAH!!! You said angst..not the anti-christ...jeeeezzzz...lol. I had to close the window and go back to it later..lol. I really can't stand the Tanya character at all. I know you'll make it work out...but YIKES! I dunno if she's lying or what...if she doctored the birth control or if it just failed....

Author's Response:

Oh Trysh! Sorry it was so traumatizing for you! :) I hope you'll stick with me...it's going to get angsty... :) 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

perfect

Author's Response:

Thanks Becs! :) 

Wow, that was a wonderful chapter and I loved it.  I wonder if something that happens with Wilder or Alice is what they will be going back to.  Keep up the great writing and update soon.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  I will tell you this - Alice has nothing to do with the drama. :) 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

Great chapter.  I am glad to see them making progresds.  Quite a cliffy there at the end!

Author's Response:

Hold on...it's about to be a bumpy ride.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

I must start off with I think you did a great job on your first lemon. I hope that if/when I attempt one I can do as good as you.  I know some gave you a hard time for this chapter but I think it was great and needed.  It makes it more really when you have some ups and downs.  You have to have the good with the bad it can't all be angst and bad, otherwise we'd all need theraphy and lots of adult beverages, which as you know I can't have yet.

Ok, it made me so happy to see that Edward knows that Bella is still keeping things from him and that he's willing to let her reveal things on her terms.  I love him a little more for that.  I wish I could have read the scene were Emmett walked in on them on the living room couch.  I think that would be sooo funny. 

I'm glad Edward also see that something is up with Alice and that he revealed how she has a hard time with change.  While I think that could be a part of it, I still feel that there is something more to it too.  I'll wait for you to let me know if I'm right or wrong.

As to the cliffy at the end.  It leads me to think you are planning to bring the angst back full blast in the next chapter.  I be sure to have my tissues ready and hopefully we'll have a baby by then so I won't have to hide the emotions at work. 

That's how bad you and Brown own me, I read the updates as soon as I see them, sneaking them in at work.  Oh, well, I love it and you guys.  Thanks for this chapter and I look forward to the next.

Author's Response:

Ang, thanks so much for your lovely review!! :) I love all your thoughts. I'll see if I can do an outtake of Em walking in on B&E just for you. :) 

You're right about the angst being back next chapter. It probably won't be posted until after you have the baby (which should be any moment now I hope!!) So I won't have to worry about sending you into premature labor. LOL. 

Thanks for being such a wonderful support - I appreciate all your kind words and pick me ups!!! :) You're the best!!! 

Just had to stop reading long enough to review this chapter. OMG! Totally cracked me up. LOVED it! This story is amazing. Ok, on to the next chapter... :)

Aww they said I love you. How cute!

Author's Response:

They did!! :) It kind of wrote itself...and I'm glad it happened that way. :) I'm glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

WOOOOOO!!!!!! Lemony goodness, and boy was it good :)

Bella finally let down her guards and allowed Edward to love her. He's a good man - it must have been hard to restrain himself and not allow himself to show her physically what he wanted to share & enjoy with her.

Author's Response:

YAY! I'm so glad you liked it Becks!! I was sooo worried about it! LOL. 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing as always. I can't tell you how much it means to me!! :) 

Delicious chapter!  I loved every word.

Author's Response:

Whoot! :) I'm so glad you liked it.  

Thank you so much for your continued reading and reviewing. I really, really appreciate it! :) 

I JUST came across this story and I LOVE it! Yes it was nice reading a non-angst chapter for these two! But i hope bella starts talking to edward soon..cant wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you found it and you love it!! *huge smile*

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! I appreciate it! :) 

amazing i was just thinking about this story and here it is ,i'm so glad that they have gotten closer to each other in everyway ,but i'm a bit worried about what their going home to

Author's Response:

Isn't it funny how that works? I had the same thing happen to me last week - thought of a story and there was the update! :) 

I'd tell you not to worry, but it's not a good thing. I will tell you this - I do believe in happy endings. I hope that helps.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!