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Reviewer: angmclure (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 12:58 PM · On: Bombshell
Omg, Wow, what do I say. I did not see that coming. I must say I'm glad I'm not a hormonal mess anymore or you would have reduced me to a bubbling snotty mess. I must say concidering the mess his in now with Tanya, plus after the talk they had, I wonder if they didn't forget about the condom on purpose or unconscionly try to make something happen because of the threat of Tanya's baby. Bella now realizes she would love to have Edward's baby and maybe he's feeling the same way now. Not that I think they're anywhere near ready for a baby, but people do stupid things when bad things happen. As to if Tanya's lieing, I'm not sure, I need more info to go on, so I'm going to hold out judgement till more info is out.
I'm glad Bella chose to stay and comfort Edward and that Alice understood. I can't wait for Alice's reaction to this twist seeing the way she reacted on the phone without the info, I think things could get ugly, real ugly. I also have a feeling that Tanya isn't going to quietly sit back like she said. So I do see more angst and trouble a head, and as much as I want to know what you have planned, I think I'm going to try, really try to wait patiently for the chapters. I make no promise that I can be patient because I'm addicted to this as you must know, but I'll try. Thanks girlie for the chapter. You did great.
Author's Response: Ang, I held off just until you had BBgirl so I wouldn't put you into pre-term labor! :)
I think we'll see in Chapter 19 whether the shower sex was deliberately left unprotected or not. I'll give you a hint - at least one half of this couple knew exactly what they were doing and didn't care. Stupid move on their part, but what's done is done...
I hope you'll like Alice's reaction - I'm actually writing it now. Thank you for waiting patiently - I think it'll be worth the wait, but maybe I'm just biased. :) LOL.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing - I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Lots of love to you! - Scorp
Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Bombshell
Oh God! My heart is in my throat. I can't even tell you how much I despise Tanya, and now to have this twist. I am praying that Edward is not the father of the baby, or even that there is no baby.
I love this story though. It always keeps me guessing. I can never predict what is coming next.
I can't wait for the next update. I also pray the angst isn't too long.
CM
Author's Response: There's definitely a baby. Jury's still out on whether or not it's Edward's. I'm in the middle of Chapter 19 and Alice is positive it's not. I'd usually never bet against Alice, but I think this one could go either way.
I'm glad I can keep you guessing. I'll try not to drag the angst out too long... :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Unexpected
yay more E and B time
Author's Response: Yeah, from here on out it's pretty much all B&E time. LOL. It took them a few chapters to get there, but they finally did! :)
Thanks so much for reading - and reviewing every chapter!! :)
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 09:53 AM · On: Confusion and Hope
he does have it bad! damn edward! lol
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Seattle
hmmm interesting :)
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Highs and Lows
eww tanya that skank lol
Author's Response: LOL...just you wait! :)
I'm so glad you're enjoying things so far!! :)
Reviewer: Alex81 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Bombshell
Wonderful Chapter! I can understand where Bella is coming from, but also Edward... I can't even begin to imagine how hard hating the mother of your child would/could be...
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!!
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Agony
holy crap.
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Goodbye
thank you so much.
Reviewer: sidewaysgrace (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 08:10 AM · On: Bombshell
I really want to be upset after this chapter, but you've been wonderful to us so far, and I trust where you're going with the story, so I won't.
However, that doesn't mean that I didn't have a mini freak-out that sent my poor dog running from the room. You'd think she'd be used to it by now.
Anyway, I really love what you've done with the characters and storyline so far, especially with how you've displayed the flaws in their relationship. Yes, they love each other, but that's not all you need to make a relationship work.
Definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Don't keep us waiting too long! =)
Author's Response: Thank you for not being upset and trusting in me. It'll be okay, no matter what, I promise! :)
I do hope your dog is okay! LOL. Poor thing. Although, if I had one, mine would probably react the same way when I freak out over the fanfics I'm reading!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! I really appreciate it! :)
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Broken
awww i feel so bad for her :(
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 07:17 AM · On: Reunions
im really liking this story :) cant wait to see how it unfolds
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :)
Reviewer: BellaLovesEdward729 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Goodbye
im just getting into this and it looks really promising :)
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 06:53 AM · On: Bombshell
I didn't see that coming! Great plot twist.
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Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Bombshell
oh no!!! what is going to happen? I hope Bella becomes pregnant too! AND I hope Tanya is lying about Edward being the father of her child.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! :) The outtake should be in your mailbox - I hope you enjoy! :) All will be revealed in time...
Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 05:07 AM · On: Bombshell
Oh my freaking God.
Shit. Fan. Hit.
And I'm LOVING it!! Wow, is it Edward's? What's up with Alice? Can they make it through? Can you just write the whole shebang to put me out of my misery? Eeeek!! Loved it loved it loved it. Poor Bella, like she doesn't have enough to deal with. Sigh. Keep em coming!
Author's Response: LOL! I loved your review!! I'll try to update as soon as possible to put you out of your misery. I'm really so glad you're enjoying it!! :)
Reviewer: Soccer1023 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Bombshell
OMG! I loved this chapter -- it's been a while since I've read the beginning -- I'm trying to piece together the previous relationship with E/T. I may have to reread, ugh. But I love this story so much -- I will do it. Loved this story for the get-go!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're loving enough to go back and re-read some parts. :) Check out chapter 5 to see our first glance of Tanya, then chapter 10 and the outtake just after Chapter 10 to see where things with E/T stand. They didn't end on a pretty note. I hope the outtake I'm sending will help answer some questions as well.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :)
Reviewer: Tinkerbell Blake (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 02:55 AM · On: Bombshell
Hi well I can safley say that I didn't see that coming. Even if it his baby I would hope that they could work through it. I look forward to seeing how they cope and also finding out what has been wrong with Alice.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! :) E&B have a tough road ahead, but I hope you'll keep the faith in our favorite couple. Alice's problem will take a back seat to all of this drama, but all will come out in time. :) Thanks again!!
Reviewer: wazzoes (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Bombshell
thanks for the update
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 11:48 PM · On: Bombshell
i can't believe that someone of tanya's intelligence would let something like this happen ,in this day and age this could of been prevented she's a doctor for goodness sake i just hope that this goes in edwards favour and i seriously hope that the kid's not his, and im really proud of bella for staying put and not running from him even though i could understand her needing space
Author's Response: Yeah, something seems kind of fishy with that whole thing, doesn't it? Or was it just really a stupid, stupid mistake on her part? I wonder how you'll feel after reading the outtake about our pal Tanya? :)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :)
Reviewer: Tweaker (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 09:51 PM · On: Bombshell
OH SNAP! I was not expecting that. I really, really hope Tanya is lying. Otherwise, I don't know. I don't think I could stay with a man who was having a baby with another woman. Hopefully Bella is a better person than I am!
Author's Response: I hope Tanya is lying too, as it'll make life so much easier on E&B. But with Tanya, you never know. Just when you think you've got her pegged...
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 09:47 PM · On: Bombshell
WOW! I'll be waiting to see the outcome of this clusterfuck of Edward's lol
Author's Response: Yeah, E's got himself in quite the mess right now. Should be interesting to see how he handles everything... :)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Bombshell
I can't believe that Tanya is pregnant with Edward's baby...I agree with Edward. It's a little fishy.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Yup, something is definitely rotten in this whole thing, but is it just rotten luck or something more?
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: jennchris821 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 07:33 PM · On: Bombshell
Wow, I was thinking she might do something like this when they broke up but I thought it would be fake, I'm kinda freaking out. Can't wait to see what comes up.
Author's Response: I'll tell you this much - Tanya is definitely pregnant. I toyed with the idea of her faking it, but it's way too easy for her to be found out. It's more fun this way...whatever will happen!? :)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: fairytaleland (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Bombshell
I really hope it is not Edward's baby. They have a rough road ahead.
Author's Response: They do have a very rough road ahead. I hope you'll stick with me through it.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! :)
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