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Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

Oh shit at the end! That wasn't cool lol. Poor Bella :(



Author's Response:

LOL! I like to throw little surprises in there. :) 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing - as always! :) 

Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 11:04 AM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

I knew Tanya had an agenda.  I wonder how many more guys she's got lined up as her baby's father?  How is she going to get out of this one?  Edward could still be the father and I hope he insists on a DNA test.

I am so glad that Bella finally told Edward about the accident.  She really needs help that no one can give her but a qualified therapist.  She doesn't have to do this on her own.   Telling Edward is a good step in the right direction.  I hope she doesn't continue to punish herself in this way because she can't do this on her own without ferreting out that she just might be holding on to punishing herself for what happened.  I can't see her admitting that without someone's help.



Author's Response:

So you don't think Tanya was just scared and made a mistake? :) Yeah, neither do I!!

There's a bit more to reveal about Bella's accident, but I agree, by telling Edward, she made a step in the right direction. :) She's going to get some help - eventually.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing - as always!! :) 

Reviewer: kergan468 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:54 AM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

loved the cliffy.  anxiously waiting on pins and needles for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! And thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:12 AM · On: Goodbye

O CRAP!!!  I hope that she lied to Edward and that the baby is really Alistair's!  That she had an affair with Alistair!!  PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE!!! LOL!!!



Author's Response:

We'll just have to wait and see... :) 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: flagrad (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

HA!  I knew the hussy was lieing about the baby being Edwards!!!  She got knocked up by the other Dr.!!!  Lets see what she has to say about it all.  If she told Mathews, and he took off out of town (probably to think) and Tanya got freaked out she wouldn't have a baby daddy then she tryed to go after Edward.  This is my guess... Or maybe she wanted Edward more than Dr. Mathews?  Humm we shall see!

I sure hope Bella quits being stubborn and gets some professional help in order to get on with her life and truly be happy....

Great Chapter, can't wait for the next update!! :)



Author's Response:

Your guess might not be too far off - see, I've already said too much! :) 

Bella's working on getting there - I promise!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: mksims1 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 08:37 AM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

When I read this last night I didn't get to review because I was on my phone internet. What I have to say to you is why the big cliffy. I hope that you are not playing with us with the possibility that someone other than Edward is the father of Tanya's baby. I did like how you written the things that Edward is noticing about Bella pstd. I want them to deal with that straight on. Thanks



Author's Response:

The big cliffy is because I'm addicted. I can't help it. I have a beta that feeds this addiction and together we decided to end it where we did. :) I promise the big reveal is coming up in the beginning of the next chapter. Bella - and Edward - will deal with her PTSD together. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

Curious what is wrong with Alice.  She's definitely not herself lately. Edward finally talking to Bella and seeing just how far broken.  Mentally she's a wreck.  She has attempted to hide her problems by burying them.  Edward hadn't really been seeing her until Esme mentioned Bella's distress.  Edward finding out that it was Bella who was driving the night of the accident.  5 miles from home, she pushed herself too far and fell asleep at the wheel.  That's a lot of guilt to live with inside.  Edward's suggestion of Bella speaking with a counselor didn't go very well at all.  Even though she does have the name of a counselor in Seattlel wonder if she'll finally call.  Thinking she can handle everything she had experienced alone hasn't been working.  She is still as devastated as she was after the accident.  Once she learned the damage and loss caused by the accident.  Edward already has decided her fear of driving is legitimate.  Bella's afraid she'll have another accident and kill someone else.  Her selfless personality is concerned not so much with her, but what she might cause by driving.  What she has inside her is internal guilt, loss, fear, etc...  It's all bottled up inside.  So much it's overwhelming for her to determine which piece should be dealt with first.  Especially in her case if the pieces aren't dealt with in a certain order Bella could be even worse.  Remove one piece wrong and all the pieces will crash.  Good news about Tanya.  Either Alistar or Edward is the father.  I'm still betting it's not Edward's.  Tanya was playing both men.  It might even be a third man involved who won't step up and do what's right.  So to save her she claims that the other sex partners are the father.  Two fathers are not possible.  Which means Tanya wasn't faithful.  When Bella learns that Tanya has told another man he is the father also might help with some of her stresses, doubts, and fears of losing Edward.  Looking forward to the conversation between Edward and Tanya.



Author's Response:

We'll find out what's going on with Alice in Chapter 22 (I'm writing it now!) Everything about Bella's accident hasn't been revealed yet, so we have a bit more to learn on that end.  I think she'll end up listening to Edward about the counseling - she better anyway!! :) Tanya has a lot of explaining to do and we'll see it all at the beginning of the next chapter.

Thank you so much for all the time and effort you put into your reviews - I really, really appreciate it! :) Thanks for reading!! 

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

Well Edward's had quite an interesting 24 hours! I'm dyin' to find out what Tanya has to say about getting caught & who's baby she's carrying.



Author's Response:

That he has. I hope he can hold on a little while longer. :) 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 05:27 AM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

Please oh please let Bella and Edward get a break and have her lying to Edward!

I am loving this story.  There is so much to it.  I like that it is not so cut and dry, and that Edward isn't able to "fix" Bella just by being with her.  It is more realistic this way.

I look forward to the next update!

CM



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story - I love that you are!! :) 

Thank you for reading and reviewing - I really appreciate it! 

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

wow. did not see that coming. I hope that Edward can help Bella.



Author's Response:

I hope he can too! I think he's good for her. :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

Scheming, scheming little Tanya, hmmm? I wonder who's getting the short straw next chapter, Alistair or Edward? As usual, a great chapter indeed :)



Author's Response:

Awww, can you guess? Would I bring you so far only to make Edward the dad? Yeah, actually, I probably would. LOL. I guess we'll just have to wait and see. :) 

Thank you so, so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it! 

Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 09:00 PM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

wow, that was quite the chapter. you are awesome at the plot development

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! And thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

(Let me know if you didn't get the teaser - I think it went through, but the site was being a bit wonky tonight, so I want to make sure!) :) 

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 07:48 PM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

Great chapter!

I'm glad that Bella is talking a little more. Hopefully it will help her get better.

I really hope that Tanyais lying to Edward. I really, really do.

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I think the more Bella opens up, the better off she'll be. Hopefully Edward will help her do that. :) As far as Tanya goes...we'll just have to see! :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: emma08 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

Great job!  I hope Alistair is the father.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! I hope he is too! *giggle* 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

I KNEW IT!!!!! I BLOODY KNEW IT!!!! YOU CAN NEVER TRUST THAT BITCH!!! OMG..BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!!! I can't wait to see her weasel her lying, conniving, slutty ass out of this one!!! HOLY SHIT!!! I literally jumped up out of my seat when I read that DR. MATTHEWS and TANYA were having a baby...HOLY SHIT!!!! I can't wait til the next chapter!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!!! Trysh, your reaction is the best. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :) 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: zannesg (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 06:14 PM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

Ha ha ha ha ha.  In your face Tanya!  I knew that she was totally lying.  She was just suddenly too goody two shoes.  How awful for Bella.  Not only does she have survivors guilt, but she has to deal with the fact that she could have completely avoided the accident, not that she had any idea that something was going to happen.  Thanks for the update.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) 

Don't be so sure that Bella could've avoided the accident - we haven't gotten quite the whole story yet.  There's still more to be revealed about that. :) 

Reviewer: mksims1 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 02:58 PM · On: Grounded

I have been waiting for the next chapter getting frustrated here

Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 12:49 AM · On: Grounded

what a rollercoaster
this is awesome!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! :) I'm glad you're enjoying it. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Grounded

i have a feeling the story is just about to begin? abk



Author's Response:

We're headed for some interesting developments I think! :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: vampiregirl1001 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 11:18 PM · On: Grounded

Tanya better not be pg w/ Edward's baby & Edward &/or Bella better not pull a new moon scene either. That's all I am saying.lol!

Author's Response:

Okay then! I'll keep all that in mind!! LOL!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Grounded

i actually felt sorry for edward and bella ,but i think they did the best thing possible by removing themselves temporarily from the situation ,ive read a few reviews and i think i agree with just about everything everyone said and i didnt think of the rest of the family having different views and they all seem to think that tanya is not being completely honest i myself was hoping that tanya would lose the baby but i know thats not nice maybe she's got some padding on(think glee...lol) anyway i just want bella and edward to be able to have alight at the end of the tunnel ,they seem so accepting of the mess that has been thrust upon them

oh and can we have another musical number from emmett?...lol



Author's Response:

So sorry for my late reply - time has gotten away from me this past week! 

Tanya is definitely pregnant, so no padding there. That being said, I think you'll like the next chapter.  And that's all I can say. :) 

I'll see what I can do about a singing Emmett. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! :)

Reviewer: DDiaz1170 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 09:54 PM · On: Scared

i have never so badly wanted to punch bella straight in the face. not even in Eclipse.

you've got me hooked on this story!!



Author's Response:

Ohhhh, ouch. I'm sorry you want to punch Bella so badly. :( That kind of makes me sad. LOL. (Cuz really, I wanted to punch her in Eclipse sometimes too, so I get it.) 

Try not to be too hard on her though - she's been through a lot and she's running scared. I do think she grows (especially in the last few chapters) so I hope you'll stick with me to see that.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!! :) 

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 06:14 PM · On: Grounded

Uh-Oh...what WILL Charlie have to say about the pregnancy?



Author's Response:

Um...not much actually. :) LOL. All will be explained next chapter...

Thank you for reading and reviewing!! :) 

Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Grounded

GO ESME! I think that tanya is so full of shit it's not funny! They'll get to the bottom of it. something is rotten in the land of denmark for sure. I'm glad that bella stood up for herself. they've been overprotective for far too long.



Author's Response:

Something is rotten, you're right. Very, very soon all will be revealed (like next chapter soon...)

I'm glad you enjoyed Bella standing up for herself...she needed to! 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :) 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 01:34 AM · On: Grounded

Bella has so much to deal with. She was so blissfully happy and now...not so much. I know she loves Edward but she ought to take a page out of Rosalie's book and smack him upside the head. And what I wouldn't pay to see Emmett singing Oops? lol



Author's Response:

LOL. I had to add some comic relief in there, and that's just what I pictured Emmett doing at his sister's store. A cop with a crazy sense of humor. I just love writing him. :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, as always!! :) 

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