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Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2011 02:41 AM · On: Truth and Consequences

wow..well, Alice is going to be happy that Bella called her therapist!



Author's Response:

I think so!!! :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: CanadianMommmyX2 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 10:19 PM · On: Truth and Consequences

Yay and early Christmas present, the demise of Tanya!  Loving this story more with each update!



Author's Response:

She's gone for good! :) Whoot! 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! I so appreciate it!

Reviewer: pbear (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

Cliffie my left foot!  Thank goodness Tanya is a lying poopie-pants!  Or she doesn't know who the daddy is... oh my...

Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Truth and Consequences

How sweet! Tanya finally fesses up! WITCH! Please dont bring her back!  So Jasper is now coming into the picture as Bellas Dr huh?  Alice and Jasper will meet up?  I know Alice is sad she has no one.  I couldnt sleep last night up at 2AM reading your story!  Watching the XMAS Tree lights, it was very nice.  Merry Christmas! Looking forward to the next chapter! 

 



Author's Response:

You're all caught up! Thank you so much for your reviews along the way - I really appreciate it!! 

Tanya's gone - for good. :) And of course Ali and Jasper will meet - how, I'm not sure just yet, but they're meant to be! 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :) Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!! 

Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

Loved this chapter!  Edwards tenderness and caring is really coming out now. Tanya, what a witch! I hope to hear more of Bella telling Edward more about the accident soon! You have created a beautiful story!  Thank you for it.  I will be sad when I get caught up on the chapters and then have to wait like everyone else.  Update soon! I am off to do some xmas shopping now.  Will read the next chapter later!

Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Discoveries

OHHH not good! I dont like Tanya. I dont trust her. I hope Bella can open up a little more about her accident, on to the next chapter....

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Feeling

damn, I gotta go to bed and you leave me on that ominous note!  

 

alas. More tomorrow! :)

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Scared

oh, silly, out of control Bella. she needs some therapy, and to fight out her rage with a punching bag or something. of course she's mad! her life got fucked up , she got hurt, she lost two people she adored AND got stuck in the car with corpses, lost her job, her money, her man, OF COURSE she's pissed at the universe! why can't she SEE it? 

 

alas. Things will get better, Bella, and Edward will make wild monkey love to you and all will be well. :)

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Dinner

OMG I'M SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONING!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Girlfriend

oh, hell NO she di-in't!!!!  what a HO!  and a pushy COW!!!  Is her middle name "Moo"?!?!?!?!?

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Truth and Consequences

I am so happy that we are done with TANYA!!!!  I've been wondering how Jasper comes into the story.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're happy Tanya's gone and the mystery of Jasper's arrival is solved. :) Yay!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Confessions (Part 1)

OMG! I would dye!  Smack Emmett right now!  Very funny scene!

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 11:04 PM · On: Unexpected

Hi there!!  First, love the story. Sad that I have to go to bed now - it's 2am! - and can't read more tonight!

 

Jake is killing me with his sweetness. yum! I'm glad Alice is moving West again.  Poor Charlie! Poor Renee and Phil - just TOO sad. And Bella, all mangled and so young? I can't imagine the ouch of rehab for a broken hip! I fell years ago - just a bad fall - and my hip is still effed up!  gah. 

One little grammar thing - in the 4th paragraph, Bella says "in the MIST of her humiliation."  It's actually miDst - "mist" is the soft rain, "Midst" means among or in the middle of. :)  

More chapters tomorrow! hooray! :)

PS: glad to see Dr. Dick is being friendlier today!!he mist of my humiliation. 



Author's Response:

Hi back! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for pointing out the error - it has been fixed. You'd think with me and two betas (it might have even been three at this point!) we would have caught that. Oh well. :) Thanks for pointing it out. 

I think you'll like Dr. Dick even more as you read on. Thanks for reading and reviewing - I appreciate it. 

Reviewer: hluvsdogs (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Truth and Consequences

Hi there~

I must admit I have been reading for a while and had yet to leave a review.. my real life has been crazy and basically I suck..lol!

I just wanted to let you know how very much I enjoy your story, and was particuarly moved by this chapter.  I had tears streaming down my face during Alice and Bella's heart to heart. I know what that feels like... I have been divorced for two years now, and it is the holidays, and last week my golden retriever passed away and I am feeling very alone. I wonder if I'll ever feel love or share my life with someone again, and the way you wrote those feelings really hit home with me. Well done, great writing.

Thank goodness for Alice Dr. Whitlock is coming to the rescue and maybe one day that will happen for me as well. If not..like Bella said I will have to be alright with that too. I'll live through these beloved charecters that we are all addicted to and that you are doing justice. Thank you for that, and Merry Christmas. 



Author's Response:

Hi! :) Thanks for popping out to say hello and share your thoughts - I really appreciate it more than I can say. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, even if it made you cry. I'm so sorry to hear about your dog - they really are such a part of the family and losing them is horrible. My Max passed away almost seven years ago now and I still miss him like crazy. :(  

I've said a few times that I seem to relate to Alice in this story much more than I relate to Bella and in this chapter particularly. I can tell you that the conversation that A&B had in this chapter is one I had with my best friend not so very long ago - she playing B's role. I'm keeping the faith and I hope you will as well. :)  The holidays do make it much harder, but hanging in and getting through is the name of the game. 

I hope we both find our Edward, or Dr. Whitlock, soon. If not, I know it'll be okay too. Like I said, it's all about keeping the faith, right?

Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts and feelings with me - I cannot tell you how much I appreciate it and it means to me. I hope you'll keep enjoying the story.  Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.

~Scorp

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Truth and Consequences

hereth enterth jasperth



Author's Response:

LOL - finally right!? :) 

Thanks, Becs! As always!!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Confessions (Part 2)

ha busted

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Truth and Consequences

Yay!  Jasper is coming into the picture. And Bella is asking for professional help and Tanya is history and everything is going to be great....eventually.

Thanks so much for updating.



Author's Response:

Eventually, is right.  They'll all get there in the end. :) 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Dinner

Very sweet! I am beginning to like Edward.

Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 05:35 AM · On: Concession

Outtakes---MMMMM bonus! I will check them out.  I am really enjoying your story! Emmetts reaction cracks me up! Pulled up your story first thing this AM, coffee by my side and enjoying my morning.  Thank you for it! I enjoy your writing style.  Some people have a way of telling stories and some the stories are good but you just dont get into the author. Have a nice Holiday season!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. :) I appreciate your kind words - they've made my day. 

Happy Holidays to you as well and thanks again! :) 

Reviewer: obsessivebehaviors (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2010 03:07 AM · On: Truth and Consequences

Finally!  Tonya is out of the picture.  How will the relationship with Bella and Alice play as she confides with Dr. Whitlock - but as we know, who will become the soul mate for Alice.

Good things to come - as Bella deals with her past.

 



Author's Response:

I'm still working out in my head how to keep Bella's relationship with her (soon-to-be) therapist and his potential relationship with Alice from blowing up in all their faces. I guess at some point it would be a conflict of interest? Ah, who knows. At any rate, we all see where this one is going, don't we??? :) LOL

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! 

Reviewer: wazzoes (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Truth and Consequences

great update



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 07:00 PM · On: Truth and Consequences

Ding dong the bitch is dead, well not really. I never wanted to hurt a chick so bad in my life as I did Tanya. I feel so bad for Alice but I see Dr. Whitlock is starting to come into the picture :)



Author's Response:

LOL. I wish I could share Browns' comments when she beta'd this chapter - they ran right along the lines of yours. LOL. She was less than thrilled with Tanya and wanted to hurt her badly. Maybe I should set you two up to plan the revenge... :) 

Yes, Jasper is on his way! YAY!!! 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :) 

Reviewer: deborahlicious (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Truth and Consequences

Thank you for making the baby ...NOT Daddywards! Love this story-Deborahlicious



Author's Response:

LOL. I'm glad you're happy Edward is NOT the father! I think we're all a bit relieved at that!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: MrsCullen30 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Truth and Consequences

Yay!!! Jasper!! :)



Author's Response:

LOL. :) Yay, he's here!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2010 12:42 PM · On: Girlfriend

WITCH! LOL! I dont think edward likes her much either, kinda funny! Hopefully he gets rid of her soon! LOL, I cant read any more today, wil resume in the AM.  Thank you for my funfilled afternoon!

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