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Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 05:22 PM · On: Feeling
What does that mean? And what is eating Alice? I hope nothing serious.
Reviewer: jinlor2 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 04:58 PM · On: Progress
I'm surprised that it was not a wedding proposal but I guess Bella is not ready yet.
Author's Response: Edward will have some stuff to say next chapter and he does briefly touch on which question he was going to ask her.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing - as always!! I appreciate it so much!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 04:46 PM · On: Confessions (Part 1)
Emmie Bear is wonderful. I don't know if I would want to fuck him or he be my brother. Jeez, that sounded creepy. Worse than Stalkward even.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 04:14 PM · On: Firsts
Well damn. What a way to end a perfectly good night, Bella!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 03:41 PM · On: Scared
Is it the head trama or is she really just B--I-T-C-H-Y? She can give Leah a run for her money. I hope she gets a job soon, a shrink might be helpful.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 03:22 PM · On: Dinner
Damn right swoon. He is so dreamy. I am really pleased with their progression. He is not dragging his feet at all. Excellent. I love Alice. She is such a good match maker. She deserves a match of her own. Paging narley surfer dude with tussled curls.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 03:04 PM · On: Concession
Ding dong the wicked witch is dead? Yes!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 02:51 PM · On: Girlfriend
How did she know that was his dad?
Author's Response: Tanya just introduced herself to whomever was closest to Edward; she didn't necessarily know it was his father. If you continue to read ahead though, you'll soon see that Tanya does nothing without design. Also, she and Edward dated for a couple of months and she had been in his apartment. I'm sure she saw pictures of Carlisle and Esme scattered around there and either put two and two together or asked Edward straight out who they were.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 02:37 PM · On: Unexpected
It must be the "hope". I bet Alice will get something out of Bella. How many impromtu visits will Edward make? I'm hoping lots.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 02:17 PM · On: Confusion and Hope
How is there hope, if he is not sure if Bella is unattached? What the hell is exactly going on with Bella and Jake?
Author's Response: I think the outtake "Patron and Realizations" will explain why he's hopeful - just having Bella around is a good thing in his eyes.
And Bella and Jake's relationship isn't anything like Emmett portrayed to Edward - it all comes out later exactly what he was doing when he told Edward that stuff. Jake and Bella are close; they have been since she moved to Forks. He's helped take care of her since she moved back after her accident. But he's very much in love with Leah.
Thanks so much for reading - and reviewing every chapter!! I really appreciate it!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 02:06 PM · On: Seattle
Hospital makes my blood pressure rise too.
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 09:18 AM · On: Progress
hi
that was awesome! I 've been waiting for him to ask her, but now is she going to say yes. and what about poor alice? awesome chapter.. A+ have a great Day. Smiles Leona
Author's Response: Poor Alice is going to wait a bit - her lonely heart has taken a back seat to Edward and Bella right now.
I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 08:26 AM · On: Agony
I sincerly hope Jake went to California and kicked Joe's ass.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 08:22 AM · On: Broken
I understand, but that was...mean.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 08:12 AM · On: Reunions
Alice is a good friend isn't she? What is Leah's problem? Is she jealous of Bella? What is Bell's adversion to Leah?
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 07:56 AM · On: Goodbye
So sad. Bella looks like she has quite the journey ahead of her.
Reviewer: inked-mom (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 04:19 AM · On: Progress
Not much to say except....Loved it!! :) Poor B. I couldn't imagine having to relive that horrible accident in my head while I'm awake let alone in my nightmares. And Edward is just......*sigh* Moving in together is definitely the next step to their HEA. Will Bella object?? Guess I have to wait and see huh? Can't wait for ch 25!!
I'd love to have a teaser but, you know, I won't be heartbroken over not getting one cuz if you have 4k words written already, that means the chapter will be coming sooner!! Right??? :D
XOXOXO
Author's Response: LOL. Yes, hopefully the chapter will be coming sooner - certainly sooner than the freaking month it has taken me to update lately. At this point it's done; I just need to edit it. Then it depends on my lovely betas who are very busy women. So don't expect it in a week, but maybe two? :)
I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it more than I can say...
Reviewer: LVB (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 03:57 AM · On: Progress
Ohhh, I love romance and Dr. Cullen is quite good at it. Another great chapter. Even though she was only mentioned in passing, I have to say the Alice you write is great- so wonderful and supportive. Can't wait for her to find her Jasper!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Alice is going to take a bit of time to find Jasper, but I expect it will happen in the next couple of chapters or so. :)
Thanks again!! :)
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 01:06 AM · On: Progress
You pulled a big psych at the end. That was awesome lol. Poor Bella though. Still battling the demons of the past. She's the strongest person...she'sll get through it.
Author's Response: You know, as I was writing it, I wrote "marry me" and "move in with me" about four times each, finally settling on the moving in. I didn't think Bella is quite ready to put a ring on it just yet, although I think she'll get there in the end. She's got one more big hurdle coming her way, but I think once she faces it and gets over it, all will be well and our story will be coming to a close...
Have I given away too much or not enough?? :O) LOL
Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing. I really means a lot to me that you do so.
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 01:04 AM · On: Progress
Wow! What an emotionally charged chapter! So many good points as well. Bella telling her doctor about the nightmares...as well as telling Edward...although i suppose it would have been hard to miss the big one! Props to Edward for the romantic get away! And the surprise at the end...WOW...that's it...lol
Author's Response: Sometimes I feel so bi-polar when I write this story - I've got them up, I have them down, then I bring them right back up again. So guess what's coming next...?
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it more than I can say!!
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 11:03 PM · On: Progress
Wow! Bella's psyche is in a very delicate state. I can't wait to read more about her journey towards healing. Great chapter, the lemony goodness at the end was a nice surprise.
Thank you.
Author's Response: Yes, Bella's in a delicate place right now, although I think she's stronger than she was when I first started this story. I hope she is...she's gonna need it. :)
Glad you enjoyed the lemony surprise!!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 09:23 PM · On: Progress
the phrase whiplash comes to mind after reading a chapter like this one
honestly, in the most serious way, that was a good sort of whiplash, i am completely spent
thankyou great chapter
Author's Response: LOL. My beta likes to tell me my Bella is bi-polar; I have her all over the place, no I'm not surprised in the least you feel a bit whiplashy from it. I apologize for it, and definitely understand it. But that's where our Bella is at - she's up, she's down, she's turned around. It'll all even out in the end.
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! :)
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 07:22 PM · On: Progress
Edward is the ultimate romantic boyfriend; although I was surprised they had hot dirty sex rather than something romantic to fit the rest of their night.
Author's Response: Sometimes, you just want down and dirty. LOL!! I picture these two having romantic sex all the time. I think they wanted something different this time. :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 07:02 PM · On: Progress
This was a great chapter!!
I was a little worried about Bella, but I'm glad she seems okay.
I can't wait to see what Bella will say...I hope it's yes!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, Bella is doing okay. She's making progress with Dr. Whitlock and is slowly coming to terms with what happened.
Bella's response is already written; I've got about 4.5K done of the next chapter so a bit more to write, but at this point I think I'm more than halfway.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!! I really appreciate it!!
Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 07:01 PM · On: Reunions
Yeah, Alice! Glad to know that my favorite character has a place in your story!
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy her place!! Thanks for reading!! :)
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