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Reviews For The Cullen Girl
Reviewer: linnfromia (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Breaking and Entering

Emmett, seen through the eyes of his brother, is hysterical.  Scrapbooks indeed.

Reviewer: linnfromia (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 06:17 AM · On: Blood Red

Props to you as an author for using something so earthy and mundane as a key to female bonding!  And for using Bella's humanity, her smells, her noises, instead of brushing it all under the rug.  It's brilliant that they're aware of it, that she's embarrassed by it.

Reviewer: linnfromia (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 06:00 AM · On: How It's Going To Be

Still finding commanding Jasper very -- um -- compelling (sigh).  And you have a good 13 year old Bella here, lashing out and taking out her feelings on others.  Which she's entitled to do, but you had me feeling Esme's heartbreak, especially when Emmett is chosen over her. 

Reviewer: linnfromia (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 05:51 AM · On: Something's Got To Give

Bossy, lethal Jasper, grinning at Emmett:  I love!  This was a good and surprising (but in character -- a surprise that fits) turn of events.  Happy that someone can stop the mopes; there's too much mopey Bella out there, even in canon.

Reviewer: linnfromia (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Sinking Deeper and Deeper

I like your Esme -- how she wants to jump in with both feet, how she's having to fight her nurturing instincts to give Isabella some room.  And Bella is already shielding herself from Jasper as well as Edward, although the numbness is worrisome.  I like the plot dynamic you've set up here, and Bella's teen voice.

Reviewer: ebonyy (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 12:43 AM · On: The Elephant In The House

Thankyou for updating, this is by far one of my favorite stories on this site and I love reading it :) Can't wait for more, I'm excited to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 12:16 AM · On: The Elephant In The House

Well, Bella's made it through the first day, even if it didn't quite go "well"... hopefully she finds someone truly friendly sooner rather than later?

I do like that she's not interested in being around the "false" friends, just for the sake of having someone, it's good to see Bella taking a strong stand there :)

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 11:56 PM · On: The Elephant In The House

Wow...this is just so much fun to read. Poor Bella having to live with such whinny kids. Those girls should be ashamed of themselves for trying to get to the boys thru her...Sigh...not unheard of though. Its to bad thier mama's aren't teaching them any better.

I sure hope things look up for Bella...with such awesome brothers though...things will...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 11:39 PM · On: First Day

Jesmond...starting at a new school is hell, and Bella has already been to the 10th level of hell and back...I feel for her...I wonder what happened.

Reviewer: occaquokka (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 11:37 PM · On: The Elephant In The House

Love the story so far

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Breaking and Entering

Awww I am so happy...the guys obsconding Bella's bear for her is just so sweet. I am glad Esme thought to send the boys over for a few momentos for Bella. Now that poor girl can keep her parents with her always...

I'm glad the Volturi ripped those sick bastards apart...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 11:07 PM · On: Blood Red

Awww I loved it! That was truly a lovely moment between Bella and Esme. I am glad they had something to bond over...LOL...oh dear lord the idea of Jasper with cramps is just way to freaking hilarious. PMS would be even better...snicker...

Reviewer: jerseyhalliwell (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 11:04 PM · On: The Elephant In The House

this chapter was still worth the wait :)

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:55 PM · On: The Human in the House

LMAO...I was wondering when this particular conversation would take place. Oh dear lord the trouble of living with vampires...snicker...this is great...I can't wait for more...

Reviewer: Alexis Danaan (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:53 PM · On: The Elephant In The House

It was an excellent chapter! I'm glad to see that Bella is working through her issues, slowly but surely. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:40 PM · On: How It's Going To Be

Wow...I never would have imagined Bella crying for Emmett to help her with Esme...that is just whacked out crazy...This is so exciting. I wonder if Bella feels if she don't listen to Jasper, he'll eat her...it will be interesting to find out more...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Something's Got To Give

OH that is so exciting...I can't believe Bella was out for four months!! That in itself is amazing...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:14 PM · On: Sinking Deeper and Deeper

Such emotional turmoil...it radiates with each word...I am riveted...

Reviewer: katie renesmee cullen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:08 PM · On: The Elephant In The House

That was great and just amazing!!!!!!!

Reviewer: katie renesmee cullen (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:08 PM · On: The Elephant In The House

That was great and just amazing!!!!!!!

Reviewer: marsbareater12 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:06 PM · On: The Elephant In The House

Nice job! :) Its amazing that your in the Fandom Gives Back auction. :) Great cause!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:01 PM · On: The Good Doctor and His Wife

LoL...oh those Cullen boys are a hadful...I love Emmett's big brother love and Jasper's acceptance. I feel for Edward for having a singer so close by will be hard for him...poor Bella...this is going to be so hard to take in. I am grateful for the Cullen's taking her in and protecting her...

Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 09:55 PM · On: The Elephant In The House

Long time no update! This was sooo lovely!

xoxo

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 09:47 PM · On: I Know What You Are

Oh poor Bella...I am thrilled with Edward's self control and hope that Bella can be at peace soon hopefully she'll know that she will be safe with the Cullen's. That poor girl has been thru alot in such a short time.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Prologue

Oh the fear of this poor child...to have seen her parents murdered as well...so terrifyingly heartwrenching...



Author's Response:

And there will be consequences for her seeing such a thing, but yes, it's a harrowing thing for a child to go through. Thanks for your review :)

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