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Reviews For Pretend
Reviewer: Anomynous Author (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 06:38 AM · On: Puzzling Truth

This is Amazing!

Reviewer: Wolf_Lover (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Puzzling Truth

D O L L E N U Q N N M I A

what in the crap is that supposed to spell out?!?!?! 



Author's Response:

Doll

Mannequin

Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: MyaLuv (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Puzzling Truth

So she's like a doll now? She doesn'tfeel or anything? I'm confused.......

 

But it was still very emotional so.... I like it



Author's Response:

She's pretending the doll is Edward, since he's not there...

Thanks :)

Reviewer: alecat191 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Puzzling Truth

ohh! i get it! nevermind:))

so like was he a doll or wat?



Author's Response:

yeah, but bella thought he was real :) thanks for reading!

Reviewer: alecat191 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Puzzling Truth

i dont get it. they spell enuqnnma? im confused



Author's Response:

mannequin :)

Reviewer: sillyinfatuation (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Puzzling Truth

enuqnna

and

doll



Author's Response:

it's mannequin. :)

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Puzzling Truth

Mannequin?

Very emotional piece.



Author's Response:

Yup mannequin :). Thank you!

Reviewer: ipodRlover (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2008 04:06 AM · On: Puzzling Truth

still don't get what it spells but i like it!

Author's Response: Hehe thanks! It spells Doll, and Mannequin.

Reviewer: ber1719 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 12:52 PM · On: Puzzling Truth

it was really good but it seemed more like a poem than a story :)

 



Author's Response: Thank you (:

Reviewer: Karenly (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2008 11:43 PM · On: Puzzling Truth

wow, this was amazing...

i actually shed a tear or two! :)

congrats, I really liked it!!



Author's Response: Thank you very much! Really appreciate it :D

Reviewer: LeeLeeLove (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 05:32 PM · On: Puzzling Truth

Whoah..creepy. (In a good way=)) But i have a question..maybe i was doing this wrong..but what does ENUQNMA mean? I get the DOLL  part but i dont get that.

Author's Response:

It spells MANNEQUIN :P

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: meganbremer (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2008 07:31 PM · On: Puzzling Truth

Doll? mannequin?

i think i got the words right... but im not sure i understand the meaning?

is she saying that edward is a mannequin?

is she pretending the the doll is edward?



Author's Response:

Yes, you got the words right.

She's pretending the doll/mannequin is Edward D:

Thanks for reading (:

Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 03:55 AM · On: Puzzling Truth

What on earth is dolleuqnnma? Is it an anagram?

 

Anyway, I really liked your story, I just have no idea what it was about. :D But yeah, I did actually enjoy it. 



Author's Response:

Hehe sorry, I didn't make it very clear. The summary forms a word, the story another. It spells DOLL and another word. There are nine letters in the second word (the person who submitted the previous review has solved it :P)

 

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :D

Reviewer: Transatlanticism (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 07:31 PM · On: Puzzling Truth

Hm....

So I got Doll and Mannequin. Did I solve it?

 Nice use of non-grammar. It wasn't trashy or unappealing like I first thought it would be when I saw "grammatical errors" in your AN. Very powerful.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! 

Yes, you solved it :P

Does it make sense?

Reviewer: KayBressi (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 04:30 PM · On: Puzzling Truth

I honestly can't tell what it spells? I got... DOLLENUQNMA....???

Author's Response:

The summary spells DOLL.

There are nine letters in the story (: Oh, they spell different words lol

 

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: GoldIwannaB (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 03:35 PM · On: Puzzling Truth

Doll Enuqa? Did I miss some? I like this, but the bold letters thing messed me up. I love the "carelessness" of the gramatical errors, it really changes the power of the piece.

That makes no sense. What I'm trying to say is, the "errors" in the piece make it seem all the more real and serious.

Great job! I really like it! 



Author's Response:

Yes you missed some :P There are nine letters in the story, they make up a different word from the summary.

 

Thank you so much!!! :D 

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