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Reviewer: Lizzies (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 24
Ever since I read this story for the first time last week I haven't been able to stop thinking about it, rarely does a story grab and take hold of your attention as this one has.
You absolutely tread a fine line with this story, yet you do this very successfully. Even when I get slightly uncomfortable in where the story or characters may be going you just seem to know the right point to pull it back and reinforce B & E's relationship in a positive and loving manner. I still find it extraordinary that I can even contemplate their consensual slave relationship in this light, that just proves how very, very clever your writing is. I have now re-read a couple of times and each time I pick up something that I missed first time around, no doubt this is also partly because of the slow burn/reveal of the depth of the love in the relationship and I now view B & E with different lenses as the story goes on.
I am absolutely fascinated to see where you take these characters. Thanks for sharing your story and characters with us.
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 24
RL, what RL...Baaa
Reviewer: lmlx8 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 24
Wow. Poor Jasper, stands there watches that scene and has to have a major hard on, and goes back to his room to beat off. Edward could only wait so long, as soon as he did his after care he was all up in there...lol ... Next chapter The Wedding Planner (sounds like a bad movie title...lol) i pimp out this story, as one of my five favs. Most people says it's to much, and that's ok, let them read something more fluffy. Personally, i say bring it. This life style is near and dear, at least aspects of it. Every chapter i read i can see the love and devotion resignate through the two of them. Their first priority is to each other and what the other needs to be fulfilled...How much better can a love story be? Oh yeah i forgot about the night filled with orgasm's...it just got better ..lol
Reviewer: Bluecanoe (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 5
I'm just here at Chap.#5 in this story although chapter 24 has already been posted. I've read several stories along this line although they've been Dom&Subs, not this type of Master & slave where the sub gives up career and all possessions etc. I can understand most of it if this fullfills both their ultimate needs and they are indeed in love as they both seem to claim. But a statement Bella made when listening to Edward's explaination of his earlier mood about Lauren bothered the heck out of me.
She mentions that as Master he had the right to carry on with whoever he pleased at anytime, in fact he had a right to have sex with this Lauren if he was inclined and she had no right to object. We already know that she is not allowed this because she has to put Edward first at all times and be ready at his beckon call 24/7. She admits that she felt intense jealousy that she had to shove down when he talked about Lauren's advances. I know that this type of threat and those feelings of jealousy ultimately lead to insecurity. Would this not cause a strain on this very defined realationship? That type of insecurity would eventually errode the very fabric of this type of an extreme lifestyle? Especially considering we are dealing with a highly educated woman after she's given up so much? I would think being exclusive would be more fitting unless both are pressent in a play-party situation. How could someone feel comfortable not knowing if her partner was out sampling one's eventual replacement?
Author's Response: This is a very correct observation and I agree that that sort of insecurity could undermine their relationship. Prior to this situation, Bella has never had a reason to worry, so it never really was a problem. This will be confronted before the wedding - in a future chapter - so I can't tell you much more than that if I don't want to spoil the story. I hope you will hang in there to see how this aspect of their relationship works out.
Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment!
Reviewer: KaiaRose (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 24
Great HOT chapter! I love how much they love and respect each other.
Reviewer: wolf lover (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 24
Poor Jasper he gets to go take care if himself. Thanks for the update. Fun as always. Nancy
Reviewer: christylou (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 24
I wonder what kind of wedding will this be, really!
Loved the ending of this- happy- light-
they do have a way together- such interesting things they do!!
Reviewer: ChinaDollz (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 24
oh!! i want to put my hand up for punishment!! pick me pick me pick me!!!! lols great chappy as always
Reviewer: jillangel (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 24
That was great, what a sweet ending to that chapter!
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 24
Thanks ^^
Reviewer: Linda Romith (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 24
Nice chapter! Loved the three times asking and I really think Bella enjoyed the objectification once again. But I feel kinda bad for poor Jasper that he wasn't a part of the aftercare, perhaps he'll participate in the next chapte?
Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: lknots (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 24
*wipes sweat off brow*
Reviewer: Joshly (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 24
siiiigh
perfect
cant wait to see where ur going with this
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 24
great chapter! update soon!
Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 24
I love this story
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 24
another fantastic chapter, iy's easy to tell bella is very happy with her life, thanks tracy
Reviewer: benna (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 24
Loved this chapter.It was HOT!!! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: TiffanyCullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 24
wow that was great loved it
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 24
damn!
Reviewer: JeanneC (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 24
In the end in the bath he called her Bella. Does that mean they were just being Edward and Bella and not Master and Slave? How often do they do that?
Author's Response: Edward frequently calls her "Bella" or "love" - usually when they are not engaged in a scene. He reserves "Isabella" for when he means business. The same for calling her "slave." It is usually used intentionally to create a certain atmosphere or when issuing a command.
What is rare is for Bella to call Edward by his name as that is against their rules.
Being in a 24/7 M/s relationship means they very rarely set it aside totally (like at the end of ch10), but that doesn't mean they don't have tender, loving moments anyway.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 24
Great Chapter!!! I was hoping to see how Bella handled public and the planner and how she worked the marriage part I mean how did he propose... How did we get that? Hmmm I still wantto see normal every day Bella whose not a slave will we ever? I could never imagine being a slave let alone a 24/7 one... Post again soon I love the detailing to your chaps...My husband knows when I read your tsory I give him the look hehehe GREAT work!!!! Post again soon!!
Reviewer: Anadabyel (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 2
owwy
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 24
Still a little squicked out by Jasper watching, but I guess this is how he will learn. Still, creepy. Not much of an exhibitionist. You know this lifestyle just requires way too many tools, implements, rooms and planning! Just crazy. Bring on the wedding-I want to know what, if anything, she will be wearing under her wedding gown!
Author's Response: I'm putting all of my sex toy research to use in this story! I've got to figure out how to incorporate a few more things... :) Wedding dress details (and wedding day lingerie) will be revealed next chapter, though the wedding itself is still a ways off.
Thanks for hanging in there even though Jasper is still lurking! He's going back to Texas soon.
Thanks!
Reviewer: shecater (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 24
I would like to know what Jasper said to Edward after Bella left to start their bath.
I love how you have written Bella's POV.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 24
I bet you'd like to be punished! ...........as much as I would!
I enjoyed the chapter.......I would LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE to know what Jasper is thinking!...hint hint hint....(*coughs outtakes coughs*)
Author's Response: We may see an outtake from Jasper sometime in the future. But in the meantime, we'll get some idea of what he was thinking in the next chapter...
Thanks!
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