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Reviewer: Milk40 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 18
I think Bella will save the day, not ruin it.
Reviewer: Rainbow12 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 25
I miss seeing all of me at the top of my updates. Are you ok?!? I'm not demanding you update but I think I speak for many fans of the story when I say we're worried about your deissapearance. Let us all know :)
Reviewer: luckychris37 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 25
hey whats up you kinda late on the update wondering if there's a problem.......
Reviewer: ljstar (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 25
is everything ok?
Reviewer: Sexygirl2 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 13
I want to go to dinner with Jasper and Edward please.
Reviewer: tightlybound (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 13
Guess I'm too skiddish about what goes in my mouth. What assurance does Bella have that either one of these men are free from std's? Please I don't think these men are displaying much intelligence certaintly not knowing how well of and educated they would be...
Reviewer: Sexygirl2 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh, I loved it! I loved how he took away her sadness and then she took away his. How they could make love and call each other by their names and tell each other they loved one another.
Reviewer: Sexygirl2 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 5
See his not all bad....
Reviewer: Moflo (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 23
As the story has progressed, I see that Edward loves Bella and worries about her safety, but I feel like he is too harsh of a Dom. Where is exactly is the LOVING aftercare? (not just to get her ready to fuck her?) I just feel like there needs to be more of a balance between The Master and Edward The Man that is supposed to be engaged to a woman he loves. And I haven't lost sight of the fact that Bella asked for this "slave" life, but she seems to be hurt a lot of the time? How is that fulfilling?
On a side note...you are a fantastic writer and the story has been compelling enough to keep me reading. I'm anxious to see where you take this.
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 25
I can't believe I didn't see Alice as the wedding planner coming! Is she somehow connected to the BDSM community? I'm getting pretty curious about the wedding.
Bring on the shitfan!
Reviewer: Moflo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 14
Looks like I jumped the gun on the Bella, Edward and Jasper hotness.....
Reviewer: Moflo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 13
You have a very nice writing style and the story has kept me intrigued. Your attention to BDSM detail is impressive. I do see how much Bella enjoys and needs her total submission and serving her Master. Her level of commitment is amazing. However, at this point (Chap 13) I'm still not seeing enough of a loving side to Edward. I do understand the weight of his responsibility of his role as the Master, I'm still wanting to see him as just a man (with the exception him making love to her.....once). The dinner with Jasper and Edward pleasuring Bella was one of the hottest "kinda threeway" scenes I've ever read! Smoking hot!
Reviewer: Chrystia (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm very impressed by the entirety of this story. Not only do I love a story with Edward and Bella smut, but you've done an amazing job depicting the bdsm relationship. The balance is so well done and explaining how these relationships work is certainly not easy so I commend you for a job well done. I do hope we get an update soon though, I'm quite taken with this story now.
Reviewer: Moflo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 2
still not liking this Dom, am I missing something? will give it another couple of chapters...
Reviewer: Moflo (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 1
ummm I like the BDSM stories, but your Dom seems like a dick
Author's Response: He's not so bad once you get to know him. Takes a few...er...10 chapters, though.
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 24
So, there wasn't any shit hitting the fan...
Confession time was interesting and I liked how Bella chose the scary whip and how it brought so much pleaseure. The wand was crazy!
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 23
Wow, I didn't like the funnel, but neither did Bella. I wonder about the wedding planner and if she is somehow in on the Tyler (James?) thing.
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 22
I'm glad it was Jacob and was surprised at the level of trust Edward had in him, but it made sense given the history.
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 21
I love how Edward is constantly listening to Bella's feeling about everything, even negative experiences and pulling out tidbits that could be used in play.
I have a feeling the movement in the garden wasn't Jacob. I'm surprised Edward didn't react to Bella's muffled scream. Or maybe he hasn't reacted yet...
Reviewer: realitysucks (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 1
hi, this is just a small request.....for the few of us on earth who cannot be arsed with twitter could you put a brief couple of lines on your profile just to say where you are at with the next chapter. Hope you are ok. Love the story x
Reviewer: cemyers3 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 25
Will you be updating soon? I hope everything is OK!!
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 20
I just knew that Caius wouldn't go as quietly as everyone said. Someone that wreckless in such a controlled environment, like the club, will certainly be worse outside those doors. Are all these menaces connected (Eclipse-style) or is Bella really just a danger-magnet?
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 19
I liked the Carlilse/Esme backstory and Aro with his boys (I always felt he was a bit gay, though I like the Jane bit too). I especially like Edward all vulnerable but, as much as I enjoy the smut, I'd like them to use something other than sex a therapy for whatever the next crisis is.
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 18
Danger-magnet, indeed - way to stay canon! I'm glad the Caius incident wasn't worse, for the red-head, Bella, or in what he said to Edward. Though I never doubted the Edward would believe Bella over Caius, I'm glad Caius knew that to be true as well.
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 17
It is definitely hot!!! That was crazy sexy! I like how Bella struggled to play the right role. It adds some realism into the play that the sub doesn't always know exactly how to play the part and they learn to take cues from one another in more than just safety, but also to find satisfaction in the psychological aspect of play and role-play.
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