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Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good start, love Domward, can't wait to read mor!
Author's Response: Thanks! Domward is yummy, isn't he? I appreciate your review and I'll get more to you soon!
Reviewer: Twilightfan031493 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
i can't wait to read what else you've wrote for the next chapters please post them soon. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I won't keep you waiting for too long. The next chapter will be up in a few days. Thanks for reading and for reviewing!
Reviewer: alexandra cullen (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
interested right here, keep the chapters coming
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know - I appreciate it! Next chapter will be up in a few days.
Reviewer: edwardbella1 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oooh, this is gonna be good!!! Domward - hell yes!!!
Author's Response: Right on! Gotta love Domward... Thanks for reading and reviewing. More to come soon.
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm completely in love with this story already. Please keep it up! And you might want to think of posting this on fanfiction.net :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking the story so far! Thanks so much. I appreciate the suggestion, but because of the content of this story, I'm not planning on posting this on ff.net. I wouldn't want to corrupt young minds... just mature minds! :)
Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow. just wow. interesting, i've never heard of this type of lifestyle before, I'll have to google it. but this story is pretty good, even though it's not neccessarily my style. I think I'll stick with it.
Author's Response: Thanks for giving the story a shot! And thank you for the feedback. Keep an eye out for the next chapter...
Reviewer: shelliemarie (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, this story is so different from the other Domward stories out there. It's very intriguing. I'm definitely interested in seeing where you go with this.
Reviewer: justfornow (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
Jeez...this is definitely extreme! Do they ever have any down time or is this strictly going to be this intense all the time?
Reviewer: blissfullyobsessed (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 1
Um... this is very interesting. Different too.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
Oh, there is interest. I am with you. Fascinating start!
Reviewer: 123appletree (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
Intriguing start. I am looking forward to following this story.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 1
very interesting, I haven't seen it done quite like this before, I am very interested to see where you go with it. Will there be any EPOV?
Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
Hey, know what? I like this story! It's so cool 'cause it's like one of those ideas that you know everyone's had run through their mind but nobody is either gutsy enough or has the cleverness enough to write. It's so intriguing to think of Bella leading a life like this, especially living in today's society that is so educated about the feminist movement and human rights and stuff. It's really cool to read this. Please keep writing it! Major applause for you!!!! and a fabby rating too
Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very intriguing. Please continue.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 1
It's amazing that a person can voluntarily give everything up to another person. Bella is absolutely under Edward's orders, comands and ideas. Absolutely nothing is hers, not even her physical needs. And as strang as it seems, she likes it, enjoys it and if she "does" something that shows her wants or needs she is told off and even feels guilty for it. That is mind power on both sides.
How does she spend the day? What does she do?
She seems to really care for her Master, will we get to see soon why?
Reviewer: andi_girl24 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 1
I've never really read a story with a consensual slave. It seems a little extreme, but I am interested to see where this story goes. Thanks for giving me new ideas to ponder.
Reviewer: caylab12 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm interested in reading more. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: vietmom (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
Good story. EPOV would be a good one too.
Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reads good so far....I hope we are going to get Edwards POV as well? Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey cool idea for a story =] poor bella =[ but i guess that is wt she wants =] it will be good to see where this story goes =]
Reviewer: bryane (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
I like this story....very well written! Please continue.
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 1
yes! Do continue!!!!! Sooooo hot!
Reviewer: erin_cullen (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
please do i think this is a very good story and i shall add it to my favorites please update soon
Reviewer: Lea Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 1
very intresting story. though i will have to change the actors out for this one, i dont think kristen and rob will work for these parts but i do have ideas of who, im very intreged where this story is going keep up the work
Reviewer: like_diamonds (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hmmn... All of my few morals are yelling WRONG WRONG WRONG but somehow... this intrigues me.
I'll see how it goes.
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