can we please have some more..... please.

 

I am really enjoying this story. Yes it is very different, but I have a feeling that there are some interesting times ahead for Edaward and Bella... sorry Master and slave.

 

I dont know if I can wait for the updates.... Please feed us some more goodness soon!

Damn....this is some HOT shit. Absolutely love it!!

Please update the next chapter soon as I can't wait to find out what Edward wants to talk to her about & the continuation of the evenings sex antics.

OME....I think i would have passed out fro mbeing upside down that long. Love the phone convo going on with Jasper while Bella gave him head. Can't wait for more!

HOTT! OME I am loving this story......more please!!!!

ooooohhhh........update soon!!!!!!!!

I'm really digging this story. I have to say I am a bit worried about the talk. I suppose I am suspicious of the Lauren character in this story. Can't wait for the next update.

Very intriguing and mysterious- which is pretty interesting and unique for this "type" of story, or rather a d/s story with edward/bella!

Please update soon!

great chapter. he wasnt as harsh in this chapter i guess and im looking forward to seeing more of the "softer" edward.

im glad i kept reading this [and its going to continue] because now as it develops i really can see it as more of a relationship between edward and bella rather then him just having his way with her and then discarding her. honestly, he could be treating her a whole lot worse.

hope that didnt sound too harsh!

great work, cant wait for the next chapter, im interested in seeing what this "talk" will be about, if we are seeing the softer side of edward in the next chapter, it cant be too bad can it? :P

update soon =]

oh and if there is a review from "puska" that is the same as this, ignore it, my sister forgot to tell me she logged in on the same computer.

 

i wish edward was MY slave..sigh...

waiting for chapter 5!!

Well, that was kind of ominous.   I really hope nothing is wrong.   When someone says that "we need to talk", the first thing that comes to mind is Uh oh and it's not usually a good thing.   I hope in this case, nothing is wrong. 

Just so you know, at one point Bella's arms are bound behind her, then they aren't and then they are again. How can Bella make a drink if her hands are tied behind her back.

Seriously though, I worry about Bella's mental stability through this and any slave really. What happens when she maybe gets too old for this and Master wants a younger slave or an additional slave? What the hell does Bella or any slave do then?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments.  Sorry it isn't clear, but Bella's arms aren't actually bound behind her back in this chapter, she is just grasping her wrists which is what she normally does when in her kneeling position.  She doesn't let go when Edward moves her between his knees because he doesn't indicate for her to do so.  Her hands were free the whole time and especially while she was making the drink.  You are right, that would be hard!

As far as what happens as a slave grows older, it probably differs, but from what I've seen, it seem like the relationships adapt as people age.  I can tell you what the future holds for Edward and Bella, but you'll have to wait for the last chapter. ;)

Oh no!  Whgat does he want to talk about... the phone incident, the garage incident, or Jasper's visit?

Love the story.  Very different but I'm not running away screaming. 

another wonderful chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks!