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Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 7

love it!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 7

I'm definitely wondering how Jasper will fit into this.

Reviewer: PCullen1974 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 7

Amazing story!  I like the little and subtle nuances to their relationship.  I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 7

Good, good, good.

Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 7

Oh, damn, so Bella is in trouble again?  But he can't punish her too painfully otherwise Jasper might hear-or would Edward command her to be quiet?  Oh, hell this is so complicated.  Where will the outtake be posted?

And even if you take longer to update, your story is so different, so compelling, that I don't forget what I have read!!

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 7

I can understand Bella's concern.   Edwrard spends all of his free time with her and has been for a long time.   If Jasper were to move nearby, he would be spending time with Jasper as well.   And since Bella really doesn't have any friends, it would really be hard for her to deal with Edward being gone more. 

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 7

Great chapter. Looking forward to the outtake.

Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 7

Good Chapter, plot seems to be moving right along. I do look forward to the nest chapter.

Reviewer: shelly8721 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 7

OMG--hope she doesn't forget about her journal on top of the fridge.  Does Jasper know about Edwards lifestyle? 

Thanks for updating!  Love/obsessed with this story!


Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 6

I hope Lauren gets what is coming to her

Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 7

I was SO happy to see that you had updated!  I said "yaaaay!" out loud.  Anyway!  I just love this, I don't really know what else to say.  I love it.  That's all. :)

Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 7

I wonder if Bella is going to remember the journal or if someone else will find it...

I don't mind the lemonless chapters... I think you have found a great balance between quite intense scens and everyday happenings. I'm really looking forward to the next update!

Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 7

Haha! Is the Master Jealous?

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 7

hey i deffinatly like both the plot annd smutty goodness =] really cool chapter and i really loved the ending ==]

Reviewer: soundsofhoney (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

This story is very different and it took me a while to feel comfortable with the type of relationship they have but I'm liking it more and more its not the norm but that's not always a bad thing KEEP IT COMING!!!!!:)

Reviewer: milehi767 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 4

Wow, I never thought I would get turned on by this type of stuff...I am enjoying it very much, even though I never understood it...

Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 7

I hope Edward isn't displeased.  This is alwasy where I struggle with BDSM, You are suppose to give honest reactions, because honestly is so important in that relationship, but I hate the thought that you can be punished for those reactions as well.  It is a hard dictomy.

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 7

So Jasper's moving to town...looks like Master is not the only one who's being possesive...

Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 7

Wow Edward is so HOT in the Dom mode.  It is easy to see that he cares for her deeply in all the little ways he takes care of her.  But why does he feel compelled to marry her?

Don't get me wrong, it's touching and sweet but what are his motivations to get married when he could keep it status quo?  Is the Dom so in love with his sub?  It seems kind of OOC for him, but sweet.

Are you introducing Jasper as a minor character or is he here to stay?

Can you tell I've become somewhat obsessed with the story?

Reviewer: bellangel5 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 7

Ahh a bell clit clamp - nice twist! hehe

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 7

can't wait for more

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 7

It was very interesting to see how Bella and Edward responded to Jasper being there.  It was a delicate balance.  I felt bad for Bella when she worried about how Jasper's return would impact her and their relationship.  I would think she would worry about keeping Edward's attention often.

Can't wait for more! 

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 7

Interesting developments with Jasper arriving, possibly to stay in the near future too :)

Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 6

HA! "darn plot is getting in the way of the smut"... yeah, it´s okay if we can see more of Dominantward mixed with McHot Doctor in action!  ;)

You know what I´m very curious, about more people outside their little bubble. Their parents? Brothers? Sisters? Wedding is approaching so.  :)

Reviewer: perfectchaos1 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

I was a little iffy about this when I first started reading it, but the way you write compelled me to keep reading, and I am glad I did. The subject of being so submissive 24/7 and giving your body, your thoughts, your life to someone else to completely control takes people out of their comfort zones. But I have really grown to like the dynamics between Bella and Edward and the trust they have built for each other. It's sexy and a bit thought provoking. I can't wait for the next update.

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