This was a particularly awesome chapter, even tho there were no lemons.

This is such an amazing story. I must admit, I found it hard to wrap my head around the premise at first. I have no issues with the Dom/sub lifestyle, nor with Edward and Bella being portrayed in that way of life. However, this is the first fic I've read where Bella is 100% sub 24/7. It was difficult to read Bella calling Edward, 'Master' and never by his name. This is so well written though, that I've become more comfortable with it.

Apologies if this has been asked (or answered and I've just missed it)- will we ever get an Edward pov? I'm rather curious as to what goes on in his mind at times.

Thanks for the fantastic chapter! :D

Author's Response:

I'm glad you gave the story a chance even though it might sometimes be uncomfortable.  And thank you for the kind words!

As of right now, the main story will all be from Bella's pov.  Mostly because it would reveal too much if you knew what Edward was thinking, too soon.  We'll learn more about him as we go.  I've been thinking about writing something from Edward's pov and posting it when the time is right as a companion to this story.  For now, he is meant to be a bit of an enigma...

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to review!

great chapter!

oh, there was supposed to be a plot to this?   

 

huh.  I gotta say, I'm totally ok with just the smut.

Take, that, you bitch, lauren!

love it

Yep, definitely interested in the one shot.  I love that Edward is so protective of her and sees that she is well taken care of.  It is very interesting how their relationship works for the both of them.  Clearly they meet eachother's needs, sexually, and they do communicate freely at times, but I wonder about his feelings for her.  Surely being her master 100% of the time must be exhausting for him.  He needs to always be attentive to her, more so than she is to him because she simply follows his orders.  He needs to be the creative one and keep her satisfied and engaged.  Doesn't he ever just want to go out to dinner and a movie with her?  Hold her hand and nuzzle her neck.  Is he hopelessly in love with Bella the girl or is in love with the idea of  the slave?  I want more of Edward's mindset.  I am addicted to this story!  Great update.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying the story.  You bring up a lot of really good points, most of which will be addressed as we go.  On the surface, it seems like everything is about Edward's needs, but in some ways this lifestyle is harder for Edward than it is for Bella and is more about her needs.

Thanks for reading and for sharing your thoughts.  I really appreciate it!

so is it gonna be a threesome when Jasper gets there.....hmmmmm

oh, what did he slip her.  I like that he is finally allowing her in his office, interesting that he has completely sepertated Bella from it till this point.  I can't wait to see how things go with Jasper.  I bet that it will be very weird for Bella in so many ways.  I can't wait to see how she deals.  I hope she tells Edward what she thinks about him in a Dr. coat!  To funny!

Fabulous chapter - this is really where Edward shows his love for Bella, not just his lust.  Loved the part with Lauren, too!  Smut is nice, and you write it well, but we all need a little substance along with it.

Looking forward to the next chapter - keep up the great work!

still lurvs it. So weird to read coz you said that you have some second hand knowledge on the matter and I could probably never do it but it´s so freaking facinating!  Oh lordy. 

 

I like one shots

alrighty!!

im likeing the story so far!!

but how can bella let edward treat her like that???

is she going to get....domy (didnt no wat to call it) with Jasper??

Is alice and rosalie and emmett going to come into it??

will bella be edwards sub forever??

xxx