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Reviewer: bellangel5 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 7
Ahh a bell clit clamp - nice twist! hehe
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 7
can't wait for more
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 7
It was very interesting to see how Bella and Edward responded to Jasper being there. It was a delicate balance. I felt bad for Bella when she worried about how Jasper's return would impact her and their relationship. I would think she would worry about keeping Edward's attention often.
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 7
Interesting developments with Jasper arriving, possibly to stay in the near future too :)
Reviewer: scrapmypieces (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 6
HA! "darn plot is getting in the way of the smut"... yeah, it´s okay if we can see more of Dominantward mixed with McHot Doctor in action! ;)
You know what I´m very curious, about more people outside their little bubble. Their parents? Brothers? Sisters? Wedding is approaching so. :)
Reviewer: perfectchaos1 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
I was a little iffy about this when I first started reading it, but the way you write compelled me to keep reading, and I am glad I did. The subject of being so submissive 24/7 and giving your body, your thoughts, your life to someone else to completely control takes people out of their comfort zones. But I have really grown to like the dynamics between Bella and Edward and the trust they have built for each other. It's sexy and a bit thought provoking. I can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: Pyejammies (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 6
Looking forward to meeting Jasper. Have Bella and Edward had time to discuss how they are going to behave infront of him? She needs to know if she should call him Edward or Master and surely she won't kiss his feet or walk around naked.
Reviewer: jslpisces11 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 6
i love it!!!!!!!! It's a simple review yes- but damn this story is under my skin!
Reviewer: trulov (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm really enjoying this story! Its very well written and interesting. With their lifestyle being so extreme, I'm very curious about what the wedding will be like. Update ASAP!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 6
Yeah, great chapter.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
I liked seeing Edward taking such care of Bella in this chapter, in every sense, the sleeping, checking her physically, the relaxing during the day, checking she was doing what she had been told to. Of course the visit to the office was also good, and it served Edward's purpose, to make Lauren see he is with someone else and engaged. And from what he said, Bella will be going into his office frequently, that should keep Lauren at bay, hopefully.
Jasper has some clues to Edward's lifestyle, how much does he know? We'll find out when he gets there tonight.
Reviewer: shouldbegraceful (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 6
hmmm.
Reviewer: Twilightfan031493 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 6
Bring on the next chapter!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 6
I liked seeing Edward taking such care of Bella in this chapter, in every sense, the sleeping, checking her physically, the relaxing during the day, checking she was doing what she had been told to. Of course the visit to the office was also good, and it served Edward's purpose, to make Lauren see he is with someone else and engaged. And from what he said, Bella will be going into his office frequently, that should keep Lauren at bay, hopefully.
Jasper has some clues to Edward's lifestyle, how much does he know? We'll find out when he gets there tonight.
Reviewer: SallyThePumkinQueen (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 6
loved it!!!!!
Even though I kind of missed a lemon, I still loved it!!
Reviewer: zilly (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 6
Thank you for this story! I'm really enjoying it!
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 6
i guess he slipped her a ring???
Reviewer: ice (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 6
oh my god... Lauren is so a bitch and good for bella. what did she put in her purse... you have to update... and i actually read it this time... computer is all fixed...
and you HAVE to update it soon... i have alsway's had a love/hate relationship with cliff hangers...
Please update soon... ice
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 6
This story is amazing stumbled over it and read through it like no tomorrow. I hope you continue this story it is well written and balanced with smut, plot and information on the whole lifestyle.
Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 6
This is getting good. I hope there's a little Jasper/Bella/Edward action. And Lauren needs to fuck off.
Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 6
This is getting good. I hope there's a little Jasper/Bella/Edward action. And Lauren needs to fuck off.
Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 6
nice i like the soft side of edward althouh i love the bad side too i dont know what to pick!!!!!
Reviewer: Emilythestalker (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 5
I'm sorry but this has to be a short review as I have a HUGE physics test tomorrow but great writting. Your story is the perfect balance between smut and plot. Also the BDSM is great and your imagery is wonderful. Keep writting!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 6
This was a particularly awesome chapter, even tho there were no lemons.
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 6
Ha ha, nice slap in Lauren's face! I too was very curious about the effects their evening had on her. That subspace sounds pretty far out!
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