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Reviewer: alisa21 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 8
at the beginning i was like "slave ,master" but now in like thats hot.
Reviewer: shouldbegraceful (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 8
Don't get me wrong, but i don't think Bella could leave if she wanted. She is too attached to edward. But sometimes I wish she would. I wish she would get tired of the 24/7 master and servant relationship and leave. I think the dom and sub stuff is good for when they feel freaky, but i honestly think it is unhealthy full time. Edward is teetering on the line of considerate freaky lover and an almost abuser. When I read bella's thoughts on punishment and masturbation it sounds more like she is a victim of stockholm syndrome.I just wish it would be more of a relationship with bdsm qualities than servantship.
However, I realize this is fiction and not reality. I like lemony goodness of it, but I just wanted to share my thoughts. I can't wait til you post some more. I am interested to see where this will go. I am not criticizing I am just sharing. Good work. Please post soon.
Reviewer: Pyejammies (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 8
Just knew that Jasper was going to get some action. It was good that Edward comforted Bella in the kitchen but suprised he made her sleep on the floor for the first part of the night. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Kalimando (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 8
Wow. Just... wow! I was not expecting that! I liked it though. Will Edward's reasoning for informing Jasper of his & Bella's lifestyle be explained? Like Bella, I'm curious. :)
This is such a unique work. I'm really happy that you're sharing it with us!
Reviewer: Kalimando (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 8
Wow. Just... wow! I was not expecting that! I liked it though. Will Edward's reasoning for informing Jasper of his & Bella's lifestyle be explained? Like Bella, I'm curious. :)
This is such a unique work. I'm really happy that you're sharing it with us!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oooh., This was a really good chapter. I loved it! Poor Jazzy. He has no clue what he just got himself into. Haha. I love Jazzy. Update osoon!! :)
Reviewer: vampire-romance (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 8
another great chapter. :) and im actually glad that you arent going to make them have a threesome or guy on guy action, i dont see it as that kind of story. you're writing an edward/bella relationship and thats all im seeing. which is good lol
i'll be sticking around and i hope you update soon...
Reviewer: andi_girl24 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 8
I'm a little nervous for Bella and am interested to see where you take this. Please update soon!
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 8
That was amazingly good. Very sexy without being too cheesy.
I can't wait to see where this goes. Is Jasper a permanent part of the story or just passing through?
So many questions!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 8
This was a great chapter!
Reviewer: k9border (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 8
Awesome as all ways.... keep up the great work
Reviewer: JessHansen (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 8
Like Bella said, so many questions...and I want to know the answers! I'm not sure how I feel about Jasper getting 'involved'. I shall have to ponder this some more.
Bring on the next chapter!
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 8
I really loved it and though I'm not so crazy about the J/B thing going on it was still good.
Reviewer: justlooking (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 8
Interesting plot development. I loves me some Sexy Jasper too!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 8
I was surprised that Edward 'shared' Bella with Jasper. I thought he would have been more possessive of her. I would have loved to know what the convo was between Edward and Jasper that led to this.
Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 8
Whoa. I didn't see that coming with Jasper and Bella. I actually thought she was going to get punished, but instead Edward "let" her .....
Looking forward to how this is going to progress.
Reviewer: leeshaann (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 8
Loved it, as usual it was great..I can't wait for more.. Hurry Please.. Update soon.. Will you ever do Edwards POV???? Just Thought I'd ask???
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 8
can't wait fo rmore
Reviewer: candycane323 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 8
This fic is so hot! I have read several Dom/Sub fics about Bella and Edward and this is by far the best written and hottest. Thanks so much for writing it - keep up the good work!!!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 8
delicious as usual!
Reviewer: shizzle (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 8
Love this story, I waas kinda on the fence but now I am addicted. Any chance for a EPOV? Keep it coming.
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 8
what a fun, sexy chapter!!!!!
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 8
man oh man!!!! I soooo have 1001 questions, as I am sure you know, but will try VERY hard to be patient and wait for more and not bug you on the forum. I don't promise but I'll try!
GREAT chapter! shocking too!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 8
wonderful chapter
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 8
hey cool chap =] it was a bit random with jazz what i mean is i didnt expect it =]
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