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Reviewer: leigh1080 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 9
Thanks this is an interesting story. I'm just wondering where its going...
Reviewer: leigh1080 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 9
Thanks this is an interesting story. I'm just wondering where its going...
Reviewer: KalhanCullen (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 9
come on please more more
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 9
can't wait for more
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 9
Ooh, you've outdone yourself this time. But it didn't shed any light on where you're going with Jasper.
Edward's doing a little showing off ,huh?
Reviewer: ownedbytwins (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 9
Enjoy New Moon! I only hope I get to see it a half dozen times... Although I do get to see an advanced preview in NYC Thursday night. Yay!!
Anyway, yeah, thanks for leaving me hanging. I kind of like the torture... ;)
Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 9
Thanks for the new chapter. I enjoyed reading it.
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 9
Awesome! I can't believe he is practically sharing her with Jasper. I would assume that he would be much more possessive...
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 9
I am pretty used to Edward and Bella's relationship as it is in your fic, but when you bring Jasper into the picture and Edward has her parading around naked and serving him, well that just makes me a little more uncomfortable!! Because I feel as if Edward is demeaning her by sharing her. I'm sure that's not the way Bella sees it, but that's just my opinion. I still love your story, partly because it is just so out of this world different from anything else!! At least in my naive and sheltered brain!!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 9
"There was nothing for me to do but grin and bear it, or in this case, grin and bare it.".....LOL!!!
Jasper is so going to lose it when she puts the clamp on!
Reviewer: ChrisR (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 9
Whew! That was one hot chapter. Enjoy New Moon!
Reviewer: babybird66 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 9
Great chapter although I hate what Edward wants Bella to do with Jasper! How can he share what he loves the most? :( Although it could just be that I can't stand Jasper and Bella pairings with a passion. Either way it's an amazing story and I love when you update! I can't wait for more outtakes though I would love the one in the beginning of the story when Bella talked about the night before the start of the story and how Edward filled every possible orifice. That sounds super hot!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 9
great chapter
Reviewer: Rozalyn (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 9
i really dont understand you people with the love thing. there is not a lack of emotion in this story, its a DOM sub relationship. Slave overlords do not say "I love you" so slaves. thats rediculous.
Great job Flibbins, keep doing it as you are. You know what your doing.
Reviewer: Princess (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 9
Wow... just wow. This story keeps getting better and better!
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 9
;p interessting ending =]
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 9
Wow Jasper is so going to loose his cool when he sees how she prepares herself to put it on and where she wears it. Man dom Edward is hot and I can't wait till next week.
Reviewer: overthetoplessness (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 9
i almost choked on the hair thing not the best time for a drink of water
Reviewer: CorBen (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 9
I love this story, but I was wondering when you are going to show Edward's love for Bella. I remember you writing that you would and I'm sure that you feel that you have already displayed that.....but I haven't caught any real intimacy. The scene where they watched TV was very nice, sex infused, that was nice too, but lacked emotional intimacy. I know that Edward has told Bella that she is the most important treasure in the world to him, but I just don't see that as being the same. He doesn't really kiss her, he hasn't said I love you. I'm sorry, again I love this story but I just don't see that Edward really loves Bella, Bella loves Edward yes, but his side, from her POV comes off as so much more possesive and less caring?..maybe.
Reviewer: truthordare (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 9
you are so evil!!
this is awesome
Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 9
I hate this story but I can't stop reading it. lol If that makes any sense. I wish he'd show that he loves her for her and not just as a slave. I hate that he's okay with others using her. I hate this story. :-) Love hate relationships are generally the most exciting I guess.
Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 9
This is so excellent!! I can't wait to read chapter 10. The involvement of Jasper is super hot!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 9
Wow. Brilliant update! I am so intrigued with Jasper's role in their lives at this point. Edward is clearly proud of Bella and is showing her off.... I can't believe I have to wait a week until the next update. I can't believe that I will be seeing NM in only 2.5 days!!!! SO EXCITED!!!
Reviewer: Pyejammies (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2009 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 9
Oh you are wicked! Bella must be a contortionist, Master is very demanding. Does Bella have any life outside the house except for BDSM parties? I bet Jasper didn't think he'd get such an eyeful when he decided to visit. Despite what Master said, Bella was as good as naked. Oh, it's going to be a long week waiting for the next chapter. Mmm, must buy extra panties.
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