I think we need to see more scenes where Edward takes the collar off of Bella. We need to see her not in this mindset of a slave because it just makes you feel like she needs therapy...like Jasper said, it seems like there is something wrong with her. Why would a human being want this 24/7? I think you need to explore that a bit more instead of just throwing all this master/slave situations at us. We knew that there had to be some sort of love there but the ending of this chapter shows us that they are in love with each other. You need to show more of that.

I think this may be the best chapter yet.   I think Edward was shocked when Bella told him not to believe Jasper - that he wasn't disgusting or wrong, but to believe in himself and their life together.   With those words, the true Edward was released - the man who loves Bella.   It was very sweet how he took her from the Chamber to their bedroom and they were just together, without the dom/sub relationship.  They were just themselves.   I think it's good that they have that - maybe they can do that more often - a mixture of the both.   I know Edward really needed it and he just may have convinced Bella of it, too.  

i was completely horrified for bella at the beginning; i truly didn't think that there was any way that she could recover but i feel that their relationship is stronger now than i could have believed possible.

I think that throughout the story you've been showing us that Edward does this because Bella needs him to.  I loved seeing them together as just themselves.

I loved this chapter!! The emotion was so poignant. I had tears in my eyes, as I felt Bella's shame. I had tears again as she begged for punishment, and sobbed her heart out after her safeword. And then I loved the part at the end, when it was just the two of them, how she gets to call him Edward. *sigh*

Great update.  I really liked the ending when it was Edward and Bella, not master and slave.  I think they both needed that at that point.

That was so loving!  Interesting about Jaspers reaction!

Did Bella lose all her friends and family to become Edward's slave?

Wow, powerful stuff! B & E do fit a lot in before lunch!

great chapter! poor jasper but that does happen

I was so excited when I saw that you had updated!

Its was truly a very intense chapter, Jasper really upset me in the first part of the story. Por Bella was so upset! But I loved the ending and I look forward to your next update!

How long will this story be?

hey loved this chap so much it so so emotional and really well written =]

I loved this chapter.  It helped clarify the root of their relationship for me.  I had wondered whether or not the basis of their upcoming marriage was love or convenience/outward appearance.  I like that you showed how they affirmed both their power relationship and their romantic attachment.

OH. MY. GOSH. That was the most amazing chapter ever. I love your story so much. And I LOVE unguarded Domward. ^_^ This story rocks my socks. Keep it coming. ;D