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Reviewer: mrsckugs (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 11

this story is awesome!

Reviewer: jessnab (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 11

Okay so there better be a awesome lemon reward for the cliffy and it's my birthday on the 16th ......

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 1

Intriguing!  I'm in!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 11

Hmmmm......maybe Jacob ...or Tyler talking to Jasper?

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great chapter! I hope Jasper really understands their relationship now. I wonder why Edward was kind of cold to her this morning after they made love. And, of course I'm curious as to who Jasper is speaking with, though I have my suspiciouns. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 11

No. That was a horrible thing to do. Freakin cliffhangers.

Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 11

Another amazing chapter. I'm guessing Edward got upset when she called him Master when she still didn't have the collar on. Maybe he likes her to just be Bella sometimes? I'm glad that she had a chance to tell her side of things to Jasper. Now I'm dying to know who he was talking to!

Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great chapter! I'm glad Jasper had a chance to calm down and that he was willing to listen to Edward... And apologize to Bella.
But now december 15th can't come fast enough - who is the mystery man?
Love this story!

Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 11

uh oh is right. is it Tyler? did he hear everything? I'm really looking forward to the 15th!

Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow. Interesting. You've got me hooked.

Reviewer: justjo (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 11

Too polite to be a dom, heh!

Nice cliffie!

Reviewer: Princess (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 11

This is the first time that it seems like Edward doesn't really want 24/7 and might enjoy more vanilla time.  He seemed upset when she called him Master before he put her collar back on.

Reviewer: just4dee78 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 11

I really like this story!  Being honest here, it's a little difficult to read at times (only because of the subject matter, not your story or writing, which are fantastic by the way), but only because I'm probably, like most people, similar to Jasper with preconceived notions about domination/submission.  I think you are doing a wonderful job, I always squeal when I see an update from you! 

I also really liked your "Dog House" outtake - it gave a much more in-depth glimpse into Edward and Bella's relationship, not only the dom/sub part.  Have you considered doing an outtake/prequel about their relationship before they entered into the slave contract?  I've always thought from the beginning that it would be interesting to see where their relationship started, and how they progressed to the current time.  Just a suggestion, I'm sure you're busy enough already keeping us satiated with this story!

Great work!  Looking forward to Dec. 15 (or thereabouts!)

Reviewer: TattedMinx (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 11

Ok I loved chapter 10. Even if I was crying my eyes out reading it. But being a slave can be very sad and lonely at times. I know someone who tried it, Thank god it wasnt for them because she felt stuck and her Dom whom is now her husband loved her too much. So I have her back in my life. I also feel like I was right there with jasper in chapter 11. When I found out what was going on I went off and a Sub is one thing i'm not and I think I shocked the shit out of him when I went But I left her house and didnt talk to her for about 6 months. She came and found me after she thought I had time to chillax :P She told me that because I was ok with her being a Sub that she thought I would be ok with her being a slave. Well she was wrong!! I have known her since we were 3 years old so I had a good idea of who she was. I knew her as much as he did and I knew she wouldnt be happy. But these days atleast I have my bestie back. I told her about this story and read a few things to her over the phone. She told me you are giving a very accurate discription.So keep up the great work. I just felt the need to tell you alot of people would have acted like Jasper:) Thanks so much Love :) xoxo~Aud

Reviewer: cutter58 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 11

Dang it. Who? Now it seems like Isabella is the freak and Edward just goes along to please her.

Reviewer: Andi (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 11

at first i thought it would be tyler again but i think its bella's old dom that wasnt experienced. I cant wait to see what this brings!!!

Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 11

OH!! thats wrong, 2 weeks. Thats to far away.

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 11

Another insightful chapter!!  :)  I got the impression that Edward wasn't ready to go back into Master mode.  He wanted more Edward/Bella time.  She didn't have her collar on yet.  I would so love to see more Edward/Bella moments. 

So glad that Jasper and Bella talked.  I hope that it helped clear some things up for him.  The scene with Jacob was great.  I do love the thought the Edward puts into everything.  I can't imagine how trying that is for him.

Can't wait to find out who is at the table!!

Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 11

I was wondering if the outfits Bella wears are only in your head, or do you have pictures of them?  I can't even manage to clean my house in sweats without being covered in bleach, Pledge, etc.  I couldn't imagine scrubbing the tub with my bare ass hanging out!!  I liked this chapter a lot because Bella gives Jasper a good explanation of why she does what she does.  In a way, it's good to have him as he is the only outside party either one of them can talk to about their lifestyle.  He is sort of the voice of the reader! 

Author's Response:

Most of the outfits are from Victoria's Secret or something else I've found online, I can post pictures on the forum later tonight if there is interest.  I totally agree - I can barely manage to clean my house, period, I'd be a complete menace in anything nice.

Now you totally get why I introduced Jasper.  Plus, I lurve him! :)

Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 11

wow I can not wait to see what the nextchapter has to bring. I love this story it is really great

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 11

great conversation a nice chapter, btw is the hat guy (i'm assuming it's her old student ) following her?

Reviewer: truthordare (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 11


Reviewer: dlh32 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 11

Master's lips against my forehead stilled for a moment before he sighed, "Right."


It seems that Edward might not like the 24/7 thing completely. Bella even acknowledges taht it's a lot of work for him and he does it for her. I wonder how long people in the lifestyle play like 24/7. I mean it would be difficult with kids. Also I would think for Edward he has to wonder sometimes if she answers just what she is suppose to not really what she wants. I kind of wonder how the marriage proposal went. Did she "answer if it pleases master"?

After reading this chapter and the the doghouse one-shot I understand Bella's perspective, but I still don't get how anyone could do this long term (years).

I read an article or maybe a blog by a slave and she stated her goal in life was to become a mindless tool used by her master. I don't get how either party could really want that.

Reviewer: surpriseending (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 11

Tyler or the UPS guy? lol   Poor Bella. I expected her to freak out on being with Jasper and run. She can't want Jasper and I'm sorta or disturbed Edward allows her to do things with/for him. I expected more of a 'mine' attitude from him. I hope to see more 'love' between them.

Reviewer: daydreamer22688 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 11

NOOO don't make us wait that long! EVIL! :(

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