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Reviewer: fairytaleland (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 11
Is it Tyler? If it is, sounds like she has a stalker. Can't wait till 2 weeks.
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 10
that was unexpected but wonderful begining to believe edward loves her a lot maybe they could do some weekends off and be edward and bella as she enjoyed the moment so
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 11
OMG! Who is Jasper talking to??? 12/15 can't come soon enough!!
Great chapter. Interesting how you are weaving Jasper into this story.
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 11
noooooo not for two weeeks!!!!! I want more NOW!!!!! lol
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 11
Sheer evil. Is the stranger a former Dom of Bella's??
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 11
oh my who is it ?? i can't believe you are leaving us hanging :(
is it her student?? dun dun dunnnnn
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 9
still fasinated by this story and what does on in these relationships
Reviewer: Twilightedaddict (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 11
Hmmm...is the man a colleague of Edward's? Will they be outed?
So I'm wondering if Edward seemed cold after they made love b/c Bella shifted back into her sub role so quickly, and maybe he wanted to be just Edward and Bella still? Or maybe that's just what I'm hoping...It seems like Bella needs the Master/Slave roles more than he does, and that makes sense since she was the one to initiate the TPE thing. Maybe Edward doesn't want to be Master 24/7?
Reviewer: Anemone (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 11
That cliff-hanger is mean! Two weeks? Grr---
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 8
so many rules she has to follow how does she remember them i dont think its fair she thought she may get punished for seeming to eager or not eager enough (the jasper thing) maybe edward should spell it out what he expects or is it her interperation this story is excellent did not think i'd enjoy it but i am
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 8
so many rules she has to follow how does she remember them i dont think its fair she thought she may get punished for seeming to eager or not eager enough (the jasper thing) maybe edward should spell it out what he expects or is it her interperation this story is excellent did not think i'd enjoy it but i am
Reviewer: brittainy (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 10
this was lovely. i think it shows the flip side to the relationship, that even though there is the Dom/sub thing, there is still love
Reviewer: chloeswan (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 10
amazing!
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 7
oh no i hope she is not punished for the conversation at the table bella is just feeling insecure as her life is so tied to his moving on to the next chapter
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 6
i hope the lauren thing is sorted, i wonder how the visit from jasper will go. does bella have any friends? is she allowed them? im realy liking this story now a lot more to it than just sex
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 5
i'm glad you showed their evenings together her getting time to speak freely and i'm begining to see his affection for her
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 4
oh would love to read about the softer side of edward
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 3
lick it off not too keen on that bit but getting in to the story more and more intrested to read about the dynamics of the relationship and what affection he has for bella
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 2
oh my goodness this story is a bit like a car wreck you dont want to look but you just have to, it sounds so severe but she does say she wants it i'm intrested to read more
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
ok never read anything like this before but i'm intrested i could never live like that but i'll read your story hoping there is some love involved she wants this life and asked for it as i say intresting
Reviewer: fretgirl (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 10
This story has so much depth and passion! I love it!
Reviewer: ashleighbabe (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 10
wow, just amazing! This chapter was by far my favourite, and I really think they should become a 'normal couple' whatever that is, as its clear they have such love for eachother! Personally, I wouldn't do anything like you describe in this story, but you make us understand why people do it. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Reviewer: weg88 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 10
that was a really beautiful scene- showing that edward needs bella just as much as she needs him- cant wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: Toula (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 10
Simply amazing. Post soon. :) Need I say more?
Reviewer: vampire-romance (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 10
wow, bella is SO dedicated to Edward. such a tense chapter for bella but i love how edward was so gentle with her and just kept trying to reassure her, it showed that there is more then just the dom/sub lifestyle for them.
great chapter, and i think the issue with jasper may arise again. and i really liked how you gave us some background info about edward and jaspers friendship.
cant wait for the next chapter =]
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