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Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 10
Definitely my favorite chapter for reasons too numerous to list, but, just wow. Great job.
Reviewer: LCat2510 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 2
Holy crap this is good. Its so addicting yet so erotic. I although would like to see more action and a bit more detail on the rough parts. Good Job!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 9
OMGOMGOMG No way! Um, wow. This crap SO does not happen to me.
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 8
Me likey!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 11
Who could it be?
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 6
Um, me is curious about which of Jasper's needs exactly she will be serving.
Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 11
Oh double frick... he is such a nosy little wiener! Good chapter, but 2 weeks is a long wait :-(
Reviewer: justlooking (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 11
Freakin' Tyler strikes again!! I wonder what he accidentally, on purpose, heard. He is so annoying! I love how Bella put it in no uncertain terms that this lifestyle is her choice. I hope Jasper can come to terms with both Edward's lifestyle and finds some comfort for himself. Great chapter... can't wait for 12.
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 11
OMG Tyler is eavesdropping on their conversation this is getting to be so nervwrecking.
Reviewer: insanecellist (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
I think its mean to leave us hanging for so long. damn real life. I totally have a theory and can't wait to see if i'm right. Also...I get why Bella got over what happened so quickly, especially after writing about it cause that's totally helpful, but I guess I was just expecting her to hold on to it a bit longer I guess.
This was a great chapter though and I'll be marking my calender for the next update.
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 11
OK, so that was an interesting chapter. While Jaspar got a peek into why Bella chose this lifestyle, so did I .
So, who in the heck is talking to Jaspar, and invariably heard the entire conversation?
My money's on James and the possibility that Bella used to sub for him....
S
Reviewer: twilight_lamb (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 11
That's not fair 2 weeks...
Great chapter!!!!!
Reviewer: ashleighbabe (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 11
ohmygod!!! is it edward??
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 11
From the sounds of it I'm not sure Edward really wants the 24/7 deal and Bella is using it to hide from real life. So in otherwords Bella is actually taking advatange of Edward.
Mystery stranger is her old student who has actually become her stalker.
Reviewer: ownedbytwins (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 11
Hm, interesting how Edward seemed disappointed when Bella slipped back into her slave persona before he was ready for her to, and then later we find out Bella is the one who asked for this lifestyle, not him. I wonder if that will cause conflict between them in the future??
And I have a guess as to who the man in the baseball hat is - Tyler?
Reviewer: Toula (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 11
Why so long??? Great, fantastic story. ::)))
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 5
Um. Wow. Yeah. Edward Cullen can dominate me into delirium any. day.
Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 11
Okay the ball cap belongs to the former student right. Good work.
Reviewer: Belled (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 11
Ohh intriguing cliffy!!!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 4
So intense. I totally get why this woud wig some peeps out, but if you just give into the logic of the story it's very well done. I've read this kind of literature before and it's as good as anything I've read. Reading on...
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 11
I'm all caught up! Yea! :)
I'm all caught up... Boo! :(
And you leave us in the lurch -- who's the guy in the baseball cap?!?
Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: overthetoplessness (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 11
oh no its tyler, i'm scared for bella now
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow. Intense. Seems very realistic, well researched, has plot and scene logic.
Reviewer: Kalimando (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 11
Gah! Is it Tyler?
Another excellent chapter- loved reading Bella's reasons for being in this lifestyle.
Reviewer: googoocar1 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 11
I can't relate to this lifestyle, but I love this story...I even recommended it to a friend of mine! Edward's reaction when she says "Master" after their morning together in the first part of this chapter makes me think that maybe Edward would be OK if Bella wasn't his slave 24/7? He seems to be reluctant to let her go and return to their everyday life. She even says to Jasper that it's what SHE needs/wants...I'm interested in seeing how you develop this plot point (if you do). Keep it up, love it!!
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