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Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 14
Kinky & Sweet!
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 13
Thank you for your story it's realy great.
The tyler issue don't bother me so much because edward take care of bella.
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 12
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 10
Great chapter!!
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 7
I'm curious to see how jasper will fit in edward and bella's home ^^
Reviewer: LitanyG (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2010 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 4
A realy interessant story ^^
Reviewer: Bethesda Gray (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wow, this is really powerful. I've been in BDSM for three years, and the feelings and experiences are so well conveyed here. I wanted to go cry and hide with Bella earlier; opening up to less than hardcore kinky people is one of my major phobias, and this scene was very well described. I love that there was no "I meant to do that" or blaming on Edward's part.
I think the Bella to Edward love scene was beautiful, too. Even super slaves need that sometimes.
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 13
This is one intriguing story. There is always a part where I'm surprised by the twist of plot. I certainly didn't expect the tan car scene. Hmmm....where is this going?
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 13
aww man, Jasper and Edward, I'm going to have good dreams tonight! Sorry it took me so long to R&R between graduating and planning a wedding I've had to make cut backs!
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 13
gosh darnit, I'm all caught up! *cries*
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 12
lol just a wee bit evil there ;)
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 11
uh oh, can't be good
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 10
very interesting...and I loved that they're able to just make love, too
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 9
well, well, well...just what kind of relationship did they have before? *chuckles*
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 8
very interesting...I'd like to know the answers to some of Bella's questions myself.
Reviewer: mimimgr (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 13
enjoyed this chapter, glad your still sticking with how Jasper is gonna be involved.
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 7
Uh oh, wonder why the intensity all of a sudden
Reviewer: mimimgr (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 10
I loved this chapter. A little sad at first, poor Bella felt horrible about herself, then the end was beautiful, loving. Yes they do really love each other, it's not just about sex games.
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 6
Nice move, Dr. Cullen ;) *giggles*
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 5
holy hell
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 4
scariest four words indeed
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 3
well at least he took 'no' for an answer once it was practically slapped in his face lol
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'm sure it wouldn't lol
Reviewer: naelany (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
well now, this is indeed interesting. Must read on
Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 13
Eeeeeek! Tyler again. Oy. I really hope he goes away soon. I will patiently wait for January 12 for an update. Thank you so much!!! :D
p.s. poor Bella... she liked her dinner so much, it's so sad she had to lose it. I hate puking. No matter what you eat it always tastes like shit coming back out.
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