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Reviewer: WickedMind1901 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 14
January 26th can't come soon enough! I need my fix!
I L-O-V-E it!!!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 14
Thanks for the update!!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 14
It has to be really frustrating. There is nothing they can do at the moment, since all Tyler has done so far is just watch and be close by. Still, it is making Bella, nervous, jumpy and scared. REally scared. Something Edward isn't liking.
She needs certain structure in her life and when things are out of Edward's control, she gets scared and confused. She depends on him entirely to make her feel secure.
Jasper helped her, in a different form, but his presence there was quite useful during the stressful time.
But, as much as Bella has appreciated it, she needs her master all to herself.
This morning she got him and will do for the rest of the day.
Reviewer: bambi_frious (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 14
January 26??? I get an update on my birthday?? YEAH!!!!!!
I am in love with your story! I hope that Tyler fuck gets his ass beat by Edward. Just sayin'.
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 14
Hot as always. Its nice to see Edward caring for Bella after what happened. I'm completely down the middle now about Jasper but get its moot now. Can't wait to see their "normal".
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 14
Well...I've completely become hooked on this story although in the real world I could never be a slave like that...oh, and I was definitely on the pro-Jasper side...maybe I'm just a perv but I could totally handle being the third in THAT triangle. Okay...I COULD maybe be a slave for that.... ;)
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 14
I'm kind of hoping they get to have the picnic without any Tyler-drama for now... it'd be nice if they could get one clear day :)
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 14
Great job.
Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 14
I can't wait to see their version of normal. I bet it isn't like mine!!!!!
Reviewer: KaitlynAusten (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 14
this stoy fascinates me. I cannot stop reading it. I think it has to do with the fact that I don't understand. I could never do what Bella does in this story because I'm far to independent. I couldn't let anyone else tell me what to do. And yet it is incredibly sexy being denied something. as strange as that sounds.
I hope that doesn't sound too creepy. :)
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 14
Good chapter, but I'm glad it's the last with a Jasper interaction. I love Jasper, but somehow I just find it weird in this situation. Course it could just be that I'm weird. ;)
Reviewer: ajumbledmess (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 14
I love this story. I know I say the samething over and over. butyour the writer not me . he he. Your doing such a wonderful job on this. I have never reviewed a story before. I hopethat makes you understand how great thi9s story is.
Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 14
Great chapter. Really got a feel here of how Edward looks after Bella. Looking forward to the picnic! Thanks
Reviewer: Lotte (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 14
Love this story! I'm always happy when I see that you have updated - great chapter! I belong to that half that will be very sorry to not get any more Jasper/Bella action... So here's to hoping for outtakes ;)
Reviewer: TiffanyCullen (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 14
wow that was great can't wait to read more see u then
Reviewer: kas90 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 14
:) loved it.
Reviewer: jenni4U (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 14
i would like to say i love it, its so diferent you are a talented in deed. I love that you keep your word on the updates they are so good, its so sexy the way you describe the relationship between Bella and Edward its entertaining, fun to read, its sometimes crude to see a relationship like this one, but if she likes it and makes her happy. I need to find out a little more about the dinamics of this wonderful story. Thank you so much for posting more. This is a Gr8!!! story.
Reviewer: kneon (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 14
Great chapter. I had a feeling that there would be a nightmare. I can't wait to see how this picnic is. I wonder how they explained things to the police?
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 14
another fab chapter edward is so in tune with bella he knew exactly what comfort she needed, i like that their protocals are somewhat relaxed at the weekend , cant wait for the picnic and to learn what tyler is up to
Reviewer: insanecellist (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 14
LOVED IT! excellent chapter. I can't wait for more. Also looking forward to seeing what tyler will do...You're doing an awesome job with this story.
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
great chapter! update soon!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 14
great chpateR! update soon!
Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 14
Great chapter. I wonder though about Bella's reaction. Yes it's creepy that someone is following her, but he has yet to threaten her in any way. Is there something else behind her reaction to him? It just seems a bit over the top that she couldn't even go to the bathroom by herself. I'm very curious.
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 14
Actually, with your fic, this life is seeming more like normal with every chapter.
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 14
Interesting chapter. I think the only disturbing thing about it to me was learning that there is such a thing as "bloodplay". I am gratful for Bella's hard linit on that.
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