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Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2010 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 14
Awesome, as always!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 14
I like the interaction with Jasper more than I thought I would...hmmm...Its easy to forget that there is more to this story than BDSM, that it actually has a story line. This chapter reminded me about Tyler stalking Bella. And did I mention I love how you give a date to when we should expect another chapter? I love setting memos and getting a msg/reminder, it makes my whole day.
Reviewer: tigerlili48 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 14
aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 8
Thank you for the notice at the end about no man-on-man. I have enjoyed your story so far and that would have ruined it for me. I dont usuallly like AU-Human stories this is one of 2 that I enjoyed. The theme/idea of BDSm is something I havent really thought of, but your writing makes it kind of appealing.
Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 12:02 PM · On: Chapter 14
I am incredibly impressed with your story. It's beautifully written and powerful, and frankly one of the most erotic stories I have ever read. The fact that you don't participate in the lifestyle makes it all the more impressive, as your research seems to be spot on. I'm not involved in the lifestyle but have a friend who is a sub. It's also fascinating to read about a 24/7 relationship.
Thank you for writing this story in a way that is sexy, yet tasteful. It's refreshing to see BDSM stories written in the spirit of respectful erotica and telling a story, rather than an unresearched shock-value piece, or something that disgusises rape or abuse as BDSM. Well done and I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
Fascinating and well written! I'm intrigued and looking forward to continuing to read.
Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 14
Well if you know what you need, and you have those who are willing to give you what you need, then I guess all is good, huh? I do not think anything good is going to come from this Tyler thing. This was a good chapter. Looking forward to the picnic! Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: froggyqueen (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2010 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 14
I'm sad, no more Jasper and Bella time? oh well I still love this story and can't wait to see where it goes.
Reviewer: flyrbrd (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 14
Thank you for the update. I love how secure Edward is in his relationship with Bella. Their bond is permanent and unbreakable.
Reviewer: SherryJo (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 14
I hate to read that about Bella and Jasper. I mean to fucking hell with the people aganist his part with her. I loved them all together it was hot as all fucking hell . You are one of the best writers I have read . So please i beg you from the bottom of me heart to not stop writing all 3 of them together.
Reviewer: francy_princess (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 14
cant wait 4 more!!!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 14
This was a great chapter. Edward cares for her so very much. She is his every priority. It is so mesmerizing to understand the dynamics of their relationship. Excellent update!
Reviewer: duckyd16 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 14
I love it. ive read the whole thing. every chapter is a highlight of my day. THANK YOU!
Reviewer: funkydiva1978 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 14
My life is sooo busy that i have two or three chapters to read at a time.. to even catch up! i am sorry i don't have time to read more.. my life is very busy.
but i wanted to say i love this story... the whole idea was a lot to take in.. but really right now i totally get it. i mean i get it all.
I really love how u wrote how much Bella and Edward feed off each other.. and for her to know that.. it really brings the story into a whole different light for me.
Thank you for sharing!
Reviewer: angelica1 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
As someone who never has and never could, submit to anyone else's will over anything,I've avoided this story like the plague because I thought I would find it really distasteful. Something persuaded me to give it a try though and I'm so glad I did. It's fascinating and beautifully written. This is not a lifestyle that could ever appeal to me but it's really enlightening to see it from a different perspective and the story is gripping. The interaction with Jasper made me rather uncomfortable but it's an honest account and really the fact that it makes me squirm,shows what a good job you've done. You've managed to convery how deeply Edward and Bella love each other, I get the impression that Edward isn't terribly keen on quite such an extreme lifestyle but goes along with it because he loves her so much. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 14
Coolio chapterio, lol! I love how you write this! And you are awesome at making it so believable, even though most of us have never experienced something like this. You make the perfect combination of slave and master bella and edward and just bella and edward. it's perfect!
Reviewer: mom4ver2004 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2010 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 4
great chapter
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 14
I really love Jasper in this story. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewer: twilight legacy (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 14
This story fascinates me! You are doing such a great job! I can't wait until the 26th! :)
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 14
i like this more obviously loving Edward!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 14
Sweet :]
Marking my calendar for the 26th as we speak.
Great work!
Please update soon!
Reviewer: loyalluv (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 14
Another amazing chapter!
Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 14
This is a rather interesting story. I don't understand this lifestyle myself but I can tell that you have put a lot of time in getting the correct information for this story. As a reader I have to thank you because in your doing this it makes the story so much better. I look forward to the next installment of this wonderful story.
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 14
The one factor that is constant in every chapter is the love and commitment between Edward and Bella.
I fear for Bella's safety. I think Tyler has an obsession, so he'll make his presence know again.
Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2010 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 14
Great chapter! I like that we are seeing a little more of the love between the two of them, rather than just the Master/slave thing. Can't wait for more!!
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