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Reviewer: sydvalentine (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 15

OMG!  Can I sign up to be Edwards slave?  Who wouldn't?  I think I need to see the less fluffy Edward to scare me off, cause this lifestyle isn't looking too bad right now.LOL! .I really really LOVE this story...It is Sooooo good.

Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 15

cant wait for more

Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 15

Brilliant, as always. Perhaps we'll be seeing Alice soon?

Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 15

Tyler is really freaking me out! what the hell? por Jasper, he must be feeling lonely. I hope that Alice makes an apperance and cheer him up!

Reviewer: BonjourLorna1 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 15

Love Possesiveward! Meadow moment was great & so was the Tyler bit. Amazing chapter. (:

Reviewer: KrisB (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 15

Possessiveward is yummy, and Droolsper is pretty entertaining, too.  Poor Jasper... jealousy is an ugly thing.  I still have so much trouble wrapping my brain around this story.  I can handle a scene here and there, but the 24/7 thing still just blows my mind.  I'm not sure how he does it even more than I'm not sure how she does it.  It must be exhausting!

The Tyler thing is pretty creepy.  He must know, so the question is, was he stalking before he knew, or has he amped up his activities since stumbling on the fantasy of slave-Bella.  Because heaven knows there's plenty of sick b*stards out there who would entertain a non-consensual version of what Edward and Bella have, which has got to scare the bejeezus out of her.

BTW, the tickling things to get her to talk?  Probably the most disturbing thing I've read so far.  I'm not even ticklish, but the thought of that type of torture to admit something that you're too embarrassed, uncomfortable, or uptight about is pretty hard to stomach.  Add to that my perception that their "inhibition threshold" is probably about a hundred feet higher than mine, and I just... ugh.  Wow.

This story always makes me think.  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 15

This chapter made me like Edward more than I already did. It made him seem caring and understanding in a more "traditional" way.  Looking forward to seeing whats going to happen next with Jasper...is Edward going to help him find a sub/slave? N what is going on with Tyler?

Reviewer: froggyqueen (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 15

yummy chapter! Possessiveward is good but so is jealous Jasper!

Reviewer: justreadit (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 15

its a very sweet chapter. you portray this lifestyle so well. knowing nothing about it myself, you give it a very humane face, which is, I hope, as it should be.

Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 15

Great chapter. Great to get a taste of 'normal' for Bella and Edward. Poor Jasper though, you are going to find him a sub soon right? Thanks and look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 15

What was almost a perfect day, got a bit of clouds to it. They had had a nice time in the park, a really nice time and things were looking brighter for Bella. Not as much as she would have wanted when Edward told her she still can't leave the house alone, but there seems to be more than enough reason for that. Tyler was indeed following him. And he was doing a good job at it, since they didn't see him until he got close to the car. 

Edward is tensing up with the situation, even more than Bella I think. Lets hope Carlisle finds a way to help them.

And of course, what about Jasper? He isn't too comfortable again.

Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 15

great chapter absolutely loved the time in the park very romantic and beautiful, edward really loves her, edward also wanted her to have more down time but she did not ummmm, jasper thinks she something special possibally wanting to get into this himself and edward gets all possessive yes i agree yummy

Reviewer: ChinaDollz (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 15

so was that last tyler real or not?? bah cant wait till the next update!!

Reviewer: deeemonayy (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 15

Amazing! Tyler is a creepy creepy dude.  I can't even imagine what that would be like. 

Would you laugh at me very much if I told you that this morning when I was making tea I thought to myself "there's an update today! It's the 26th!"

I will wait patiently (ish) for Feb 9. Thank you for the update!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 15

This is beautiful: "We made love slowly, kissing and caressing on his grandmother's handmade quilt in the soft grass and colorful flowers beneath the blue sky and sunshine, with only the birds in the trees to hear our cries."

Reviewer: Gennell (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 15

Their time at the park was really nice, peaceful and serene.  Odd that Tyler would show up at the gas station and was nowhere to be seen at the park.  Or was he at the park too?  Very brazen to put his lips on the window like that!  Bella and Edward are definitely right for each other, but I doubt that that "just right" combination would be easy to find.  So Jasper may have a real problem if what will satisfy him is for him to find his own "Bella".  This was a really good chapter!

Reviewer: lucyv (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 15

I like it that Jasper's in love with Bella, really. He deserves a chance, what do you think? Besides, jealous Edward is yummy too LOL.

Reviewer: juliebee (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 15

Yep - Possessiveward is yummz.  Full epic win!  Great chapter - really good to see them in less formal roles, and we again see how loving and caring Master is.  He loves & cherishes her first, and clearly this is what she needs, wants & is comforted by.  Poor Jasper ... to be enamored with Edward's girl now!  But hopefully he'll find someone of his own.


I really like - though am afraid of - the Tyler storyline.  It adds some suspense and intrigue, really brings the story up another notch.

This has fast become one of my favorites.  Wonderful job and I look forward to more!  xo

Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 15

thank you a good chapter

Reviewer: Miss_Beckie_Louise (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 15

Awesome chapter!

Update soon

xo Beckie

Reviewer: TiffanyCullen (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 15

wow that was great

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 15

Great chapter.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 15

Fantastic chapter! I think its time Jasper found his own sub.  I love how caring and loving Edward is with Bella while still being so extremely hot and possessive. Yummy, indeed!

Reviewer: sweet17 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 1

im wonderin will jasper get his share of bella also???? pleaz

Reviewer: catmasters (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 15

awesome chapter!  so much in it and it was great as always, you do such a great job with these characters

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