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Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 13

Great chapter. I like how the plot is intensifying (but we still get tons of the exquisite smut!). 

My favorite line: "I felt like the meat in a passion sandwich."

Reviewer: sam604 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 15

I read a review on PervPack from TaraSueMe and had to start reading this story.As i have enjoyed her's i wanted to see what yours was about. At first i was having trouble with the asking permission to use the restroom and kissing feet. But after Bella expressed feelings off the gratification she gets i kind of understand. Now with Jasper somewhat in the picture i kind of like it. not sure if i want to see Jazz and Bella coming at it but the teasing is nice. I am so down with the Possessiveness of Edward. It's hot and sexy. I would not have thought Tyler as the stalker, maybe Newton but not him. it's a nice change and can't wait to find out where that is going. amazing story so far and the unique love that Bella and Edward have is strange but it works for them. can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Endlesslove93 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 13

Love it

Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 12

Delicious. I think I need a shower for the mess I made sitting here reading. Or at the very least, a towel and change of panties. 

Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 11

Always leaving us with a little cliffie... Good chapter.

Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 10

I think this is my favorite chapter yet. It was so beautiful and raw and loving and I just want to squeeze the shit out of these two. 

Thank you for writing such an incredible story. It is so interesting and different. I'm so happy to have been recc'd this one from Tara as guest reviewer on PPSS. You have done such an immense job with creating this super intense relationship these two live in. And yet you took it even further by bringing in another character to rock their world, just a little bit. 

Reviewer: sam604 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 1

That was something. not sure how i feel about asking permission to use the restroom. but i want to read more and see how it goes for Bella.

Reviewer: eleonor317 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 15

Kai so i just discovered this story and read it in two days...its been one hell of a ride lmao I really like this story, i think its very well written and super interesting. I find the whole BDSM world really interesting although i dont think i could ever do it. Im still not sure how i feel about the whole slave thing tho...maybe its because its so unlike me. I dont think i could ever trust someone to give them all power over me or even if i would even want that. Im pretty stubborn lol But im really trying to understand and not judge ppl who live this life style. Im hoping as i read on ill be able to further understand their world. :)

Reviewer: Great Chemistry (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 15

I cannot tell you how much I love this story. I think about each chapter for days after I read it. So much so that I always go back and reread, trying to pinpoint exactly why I can't get it out of my head.

I think the reason is that, despite the extremity of their relationship, their aims and desires are universal. I can see it in every chapter. They each know with the utmost confidence that they are loved and cared for, wholely and constantly, by the other. What person, in any relationship, would turn that down? What would happen to any other marriage if that could be achieved?

I keep asking myself these questions and a million others, all stemming from this story. It's phenomenal. Thank you so much for writing!

Reviewer: Lou-La (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 15

I came across the rec that was posted on the PPSS for All of Me. I was highly intrigued to say the least. The funny thing is, I don’t read Dom/Sub. I have no liking of the Dom/Sub category at all. That being said, the snippets that were in the rec just captivated me, not necessarily in a good way either. Like I mentioned, I do not like Dom/Sub, both story wise and in a real life theme. I could neither dom nor sub in real life and have trouble understanding either aspect. That’s not to say I’m not at all fond of spankings or tying up, but once gagging and actual prolonged pain or any form of humiliation is introduced, I’m flighty. I’m very lightcore apparently.

Now that I got that out of the way, this is the most interesting story I have ever read. Their relationship is dynamic. As much as I fail to understand the Dom/Sub relationship and cravings, your writing has me accepting them for who they are, not what they do. I don’t honestly believe that I can actually read and get into any other Dom/Sub story. This one is so love filled, despite her not being able to call him name or use the bathroom without permission. I can’t completely understand the need to be controlled, but I can understand that she DOES need it, if that makes any sense.

Thank you, for opening up a door to me that I’d previously had locked, boarded, and rigged with explosives. Also for writing this truly amazing piece. I may not understand the want or need for something so extreme, but I can now say I enjoy a story that contains things my poor little heart feared greatly. You have done a wonderful job. I thank you dearly, and extend my congratulations to you for accomplishing the impossible -- and by that, I mean making me enjoy something I do positively detest.

And because this is already a novel, let me just continue.

I so very much adore Jasper. He frightens me, slightly. He seems very prone, almost too easy to sway, and with that, I fear he’ll make a terrible, possibly dangerous, dom. But he is seemingly so kindhearted. And hot. Hah…

Domward is certainly a panty dropper, even in the extreme sense of Dom. It’s his love and passion combined with the fact that he’s a get’er’done type of guy -- and of course, by that I DO mean get her done. I find he sways me, though, I would slap his ass to last Tuesday if he told me I couldn’t use the bathroom. I should stop making this review about me… I always do that! Sorry!

But yeah, were you also creeped out by Tyler? I got the same stalker vibe from him in the TL books as you are portraying in this story. I’m glad I can now assume I’m not the only one who got that vibe.

OH! And Carlisle. I grinned ear to ear at the thought of him being Edward’s Dom teacher.

I suppose I should stop now. But I have only reviewed once, which is sad, because I should have reviewed each chapter. :( This line: “I'd much rather face Master's cane than his feather,” made me laugh so hard! And I love their light, joking “insufferable wench” comments.

I think it’s safe to say I’m fan girling hard. I’m tempted to keep rambling, but I’ll shut up now!

Reviewer: frantic-daydreamer (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 5

BDSM stories always make me laugh because of the accessories! i can barely find two matching earrings most days. how would i ever keep track of the gags, the restraints, the whips and oh gee the furniture?! lol

it took my husband and i 6 months to pick out a bed, while we slept on the floor. almost a year for the sofa. i can't imagine the effort it would take to choose a whipping bench!

despite the giggles, enjoying the story.

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 15

Loved this chapter! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 14

Good ch!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 13

oh god tylers such a loon. this was a great chapter, though. "I don't work without her" Awwwww!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 12

Good chapter!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 11

oh god not the stalker!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 10

ZOMG. IT actually happened! Yeah, definitely my fav chapter so far, I guess it just shows I'm a total softie

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 9


Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 8

Good ch!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 7

good ch!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 6

hhaha "so there, bitch" love it!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 5

She sounds like she finally did get fucked good and proper and then super super high. Good ch haha!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 4

That was really hot

Reviewer: ladykt (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 11

got to be tyler and its getting really creppy

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 3

So good!

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