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Reviewer: Great Chemistry (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 15

I cannot tell you how much I love this story. I think about each chapter for days after I read it. So much so that I always go back and reread, trying to pinpoint exactly why I can't get it out of my head.

I think the reason is that, despite the extremity of their relationship, their aims and desires are universal. I can see it in every chapter. They each know with the utmost confidence that they are loved and cared for, wholely and constantly, by the other. What person, in any relationship, would turn that down? What would happen to any other marriage if that could be achieved?

I keep asking myself these questions and a million others, all stemming from this story. It's phenomenal. Thank you so much for writing!

Reviewer: Lou-La (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 15

I came across the rec that was posted on the PPSS for All of Me. I was highly intrigued to say the least. The funny thing is, I don’t read Dom/Sub. I have no liking of the Dom/Sub category at all. That being said, the snippets that were in the rec just captivated me, not necessarily in a good way either. Like I mentioned, I do not like Dom/Sub, both story wise and in a real life theme. I could neither dom nor sub in real life and have trouble understanding either aspect. That’s not to say I’m not at all fond of spankings or tying up, but once gagging and actual prolonged pain or any form of humiliation is introduced, I’m flighty. I’m very lightcore apparently.

Now that I got that out of the way, this is the most interesting story I have ever read. Their relationship is dynamic. As much as I fail to understand the Dom/Sub relationship and cravings, your writing has me accepting them for who they are, not what they do. I don’t honestly believe that I can actually read and get into any other Dom/Sub story. This one is so love filled, despite her not being able to call him name or use the bathroom without permission. I can’t completely understand the need to be controlled, but I can understand that she DOES need it, if that makes any sense.

Thank you, for opening up a door to me that I’d previously had locked, boarded, and rigged with explosives. Also for writing this truly amazing piece. I may not understand the want or need for something so extreme, but I can now say I enjoy a story that contains things my poor little heart feared greatly. You have done a wonderful job. I thank you dearly, and extend my congratulations to you for accomplishing the impossible -- and by that, I mean making me enjoy something I do positively detest.

And because this is already a novel, let me just continue.

I so very much adore Jasper. He frightens me, slightly. He seems very prone, almost too easy to sway, and with that, I fear he’ll make a terrible, possibly dangerous, dom. But he is seemingly so kindhearted. And hot. Hah…

Domward is certainly a panty dropper, even in the extreme sense of Dom. It’s his love and passion combined with the fact that he’s a get’er’done type of guy -- and of course, by that I DO mean get her done. I find he sways me, though, I would slap his ass to last Tuesday if he told me I couldn’t use the bathroom. I should stop making this review about me… I always do that! Sorry!

But yeah, were you also creeped out by Tyler? I got the same stalker vibe from him in the TL books as you are portraying in this story. I’m glad I can now assume I’m not the only one who got that vibe.

OH! And Carlisle. I grinned ear to ear at the thought of him being Edward’s Dom teacher.

I suppose I should stop now. But I have only reviewed once, which is sad, because I should have reviewed each chapter. :( This line: “I'd much rather face Master's cane than his feather,” made me laugh so hard! And I love their light, joking “insufferable wench” comments.

I think it’s safe to say I’m fan girling hard. I’m tempted to keep rambling, but I’ll shut up now!

Reviewer: frantic-daydreamer (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 5

BDSM stories always make me laugh because of the accessories! i can barely find two matching earrings most days. how would i ever keep track of the gags, the restraints, the whips and oh gee the furniture?! lol

it took my husband and i 6 months to pick out a bed, while we slept on the floor. almost a year for the sofa. i can't imagine the effort it would take to choose a whipping bench!

despite the giggles, enjoying the story.

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 15

Loved this chapter! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 14

Good ch!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 13

oh god tylers such a loon. this was a great chapter, though. "I don't work without her" Awwwww!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 12

Good chapter!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 11

oh god not the stalker!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 10

ZOMG. IT actually happened! Yeah, definitely my fav chapter so far, I guess it just shows I'm a total softie

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 9


Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 8

Good ch!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 7

good ch!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 6

hhaha "so there, bitch" love it!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 5

She sounds like she finally did get fucked good and proper and then super super high. Good ch haha!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 4

That was really hot

Reviewer: ladykt (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 11

got to be tyler and its getting really creppy

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 3

So good!

Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

One word: Intense. I'm def willing to see how this is though.

Reviewer: ladykt (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 6

need some plot too.   lol

Reviewer: ladykt (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2010 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 4

ugh  ya never start a convo like that.

Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 15

Yummy indeed. Tyler still scares the crap out of me. What's his game? Blackmail? Unhealthy obsession? Ick...

I love seeing a more playful vibe between Edward and Bella on Saturdays...

Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 14

I love that he stayed in bed so she wouldn't wake up alone and panic...

Reviewer: mom4ver2004 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 15

Great chapter!!

Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 13

 I think I'm going to be ill myself thinking about Tyler and how this could damage Bella...

Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 12

Gah! Can't wait for dinner...

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