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Reviewer: funkydiva1978 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 16
really awesomely. i loved the chapter! I have so stressed these days but reading your update has really really helped with all my worries!
:)
can't wait for the next update!
xoxo
FunkyD.
Reviewer: agovita2312 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 16
I kinda found this by accident, but I am glad I did. I was home sick today so I read the whole thing. I can't wait for the next update. I really like what you made here.
Reviewer: rmcrms5 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 16
Love it as always!
Reviewer: jacqueline3508 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 16
Bella is just so oblivious to her own charm and her vixen look mixed with her inocent behavior is just a draw. What is it with man that they just can't take a no fo a no. Can't wait to read the club scene should be awesome.
Reviewer: Miss_Beckie_Louise (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 16
great chapter!
can't wait for the next update.
xo Beckie
Reviewer: flyrbrd (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 16
Oh, James and Tyler. I love this story. I would love a Bella/Jasper outtake.
Reviewer: justreadit (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 16
hmmm. well look I found myself waiting with bated breath for Feb 9 to come, and it was sweet, but seemed short (relative to my wait, which seemed four times as long as it actually was). but those are the breaks.
thanks
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 16
Thanks for another awesome chapter!
Reviewer: theladyingrey (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 16
While sort of a simmering, slow burn, this was still hot and full of the undercurrents of love and caring that make this story so perfect to me. The intimacy bordering on obscenity speaks of their time and trust together. You succeeded in painting James in broad strokes and still made him disgusting. Nicely done.
Very intrigued about the club and what will transpire there.
Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 16
Love the naughtiness referenced to the last time they were at Spice. Hello hotness!
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 16
OH man bella is just too hot for her own good! LOL yeah two weeks is a very long time :( but i cant wait :)
Reviewer: Mels78 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 16
Good chapter. Nice to seem them interact outside of the house. I am curious as to what part James will be playing in this whole scheme. Very, Very interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 16
Updates take so long now. :(
Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 16
Thanks, looking forward ti finding out more about Edwards club!
Reviewer: TiffanyCullen (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 16
that was great
Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 16
oooouu, truble at the kinky club... sooo can't wait ;)
Reviewer: tracygoodey1 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 16
poor bella does seem to attract attention everywhere she goes i hope edward doesa not keep her in as none of it is her fault, superb chapter with lots going on as usual, look forward to more and whats going to happen at the club ans to why edward was having a discrete word is he trying to set jasper up?
Reviewer: BelleDuJour (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 16
Bella is quite the popular girl!
At first I thought what Edward said to James was offensive and disrespectful to Bella, but then after thinking about it a while I realized that it was Edward's way of establishing dominance while reassuring Bella that she is safe.
Looking forward to seeing more in the club.
Love the story! Also love the regular, dependable updates. :)
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 16
Great chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens in the club! Should've figured it was going it be James' turn to harrass the lovely Bella. She's not having a fun time of it at the moment - well, I mean, when Master's not with her, cough, cough.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 16
Poor Bella!!! She didn't do a thing and she is finding herself in not the best situations, again and again. At least both Edward and Jasper know she has no active part in the mayhem she seems to stir where ever she goes.
Lets hope Edward doesn't decide to keep her hidden from the world.
What kind of trouble can she get in at the club? And what will Edward and Jasper do about it this time?
Reviewer: seeker (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 16
gosh poor girl can't go any where i think they might have to keep their sex lifes home. good chapter thanks
Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 16
Very interesting seeing them out as a couple. And yes, I can hardly wait two weeks to "see" this club they have just arrived at. I am anxious for Jasper to move out. I know he is envious of B & E's relationship and his gestures toward Bella are making me uncomfortable-but obviously not her!! Good chapter, as always!!
Reviewer: asoulenchanted (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 16
wow, that was amazing, again!
you never fail to disapoint :)
2 weeks is way too long :(
how many chapters will this be?? im just curious :D
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 16
Bella does seem to have trouble following her. Great chapter! Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2010 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 16
Good Lord that woman catches trouble everywhere she goes! Thanks for the new chapter, see you in two weeks.
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