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Reviewer: Triger3happy (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 4

I really like this story a lot!!!! Thank you so much for writing it!!!!

Reviewer: Triger3happy (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow this is the most intense story I've read!!! i already like it a lot!!!!!

Reviewer: IvieM (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 2

Oh My..... this chapter was steamy and i'm anxiously awaiting my significan other to get home to discuss it with him.  Great story so far.

Reviewer: Mopsi (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 16

Oh my dear. I was torn between disliking and loving it until chapter 10 but I decided to very much like it indeed. I learned a few things and it has arisen some interest for me. Thank you so much and keep on rocking =)!

Reviewer: eva wilson (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 11

I do actually believe that people who submit themselves this completely in a Total Power Exchange do have issues. Fear of having to live one's life and make decisions to the point that all control must be handed over to another who consistently reminds you of that control in the most emotionally and physically invasive ways is not healthy. Finding comfort in being humiliated or hurt/injured by the one to whom you have given control, or only finding your own identity in being so frankly used is not healthy. I'm not using the term "normal", I'm saying healthy. That some have found a way to channel their neurosis or psychosis into this form lifestyle is I suppose one way for them to find peace in an uncertain world but it's degrading not beautiful. The claim is it's consensual but I'd wager an investigation into the slave's personal history might reveal some trauma or abuse.

Playing and scenes are a different story. Exploring a side of you that needs to be dominated or controlled and pushing those limits can be a healthy way to investigate the facets of one's sexuality. The closer to the edge one gets the more I think other deeper rooted issues exist but pain.pleasure, submission, bondage, restraint, anal, bi, whatever, as long as you are taking care of your self and and both parties are fully honest and aware is wonderful. But withdrawing from life by giving yours over to another's dominance 24/7 is not healthy.

Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 16

Poor Bella. I do hope the situation that they are in of Bella's stalker is resaulved soon. Again I love this wonderful story and I look forward to the next installment.

Reviewer: LeahSylvia (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 10

I found this so moving.  I am captivated by this story.  Very curious and titilated by the BDSM stuff, but just as interested by the relationships among the characters.

Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 16

Bella is alwaya attracting trouble. You just have to love her. But she does nothing to cause it. lol.

She and Edward sure do a lot of sexual stuff out in public!!!!!! 

This is the first time I will have to wait for an update.........and I am dieing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I found this story because tarasueme recommended this story over on Perv Pack Smut Shack! GREAT JOB!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 15

So, Tyler was really there. I am assuming that Bella did tell Edward that the lip marks were on the oindow since Edward wanted the police to come get DNA samples. I don't blame Edward for being so upset, I would be.

I am glad to see a little Possessiveard. I was afraid that Edward would end up sharing Bella with Jasper permanmently and I did not want that.

LOVED the park scene and the meadow.

Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 14

I am glad that both Edward and Jasper were there for Bella. I am glad that they both made her feel safe.

Is Bella's dream a sign of what is to come, maybe????? I hope not.

I am glad that Edward stayed until Bella woke and she was not alone.

Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 13

Loved the whole restaurant scene. I can not imagine having all of that done to me while sitting in a restaurant. Then having to bring myself to almost cumming 3 times and having to stop. No way. That has got to be hard for Bella.

OMG!!! I can not believe that Tyler is in front of their house. If Edward gets his hands on him....I feel sorry for Tyler.

Is Edward going to start sharing Bella with Jasper on a regular bases if Jasper moves there??????

Reviewer: vampire-romance (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 16

aww the picnic in the park was so sweet. :)

its coming along well, i like how you explore everything with E/B/J and also how tyler is slowly making his way into the just waiting for MORE to happen, with other characters etc.

my only worry is that its becoming a little too slow for me. i know this is this is BDSM story and that you want to show us another side to it but to me, its becoming a little repetitive. please dont get me wrong, im going to keep reading and even if i dont review, i still read.

you're doing a really good job with this story, congratulations on all the reviews and im interested to see what happens in the next chapter. :)

sorry if my comment sounded harsh, i didnt mean it to be :S




Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 12

I felt like Tyler was following her back when she said something about being watched. Did Tyler hear very much?

Jasper has really changed.


Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 11

What was wrong with Edward when he started getting dressed? Was it because Bella answered him as "Master" and not Edward. She did not have either collar on and he told her they were Edward and Bella NOT Master and slave.

I am glad that Jasper and Bella talked. I hope Jasper is more understanding now.

I can't believe that Edward had Bella do all of that in front of Jacob. I just laughed when I read that.

Reviewer: cullenbear (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 16

thank you for the update i love reading this story. i can't wait to see what trouble bella stirs up. lol ~_^

Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 10

WOW!!!!!! That was intense!!!!!!

What Jasper did does not surprised me. I don't think he meant it harsh like Bella took it.  I am sorry that Jasper and Edward had a fight. But I don't think it could have been helped. But Edward is right....He did push Jasper and if anyone deserved a punishment it was Edward.

My mouth dropped open when Edward took off Bella's collar. Does that happen very often?????? It was good to see them as a "couple".

I am so loving this story.

Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 9

You are bad for leaving your readers hanging....but one good thing is that I don't have to wait now....I can go on to read the next chapter.YAYAYAYAY!!!!!

I am glad that Bella finally got to have her release. But I will havae to say that it sounded like she was in an uncomfortable position. Glad she takes yoga. I don't think I could have been in that position and enjoyed it.

Busted out laughing just thinking about Jasper and his facial expressions and lord only knows what was running through his mind while Bella was cooking breakfast. HAHAHA!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 8

I am really surprised that Edward shared Bella. Even that way. If I were Bella, I don't know how I would feel about being shared. That would more than likely be hard for me.

Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 7

Edward and Jasper must have talked about Bella because Jasper made the comment about setting your watch by when Bella serves supper. What all has Edward told Jasper?

Bella is really into being a slave for Edward. I was kind of surpised when she asked if she could kiss his feet. Wow!

I hope Edward is not to mad at Bella. A girl can't help how she feels. Can't wait to go read the next chapter. I am off to read.

Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 6

Thanks for explaining what happened to Bella. I would love to experience that one day.

I had a feeling that Edward would "spy" on Bella that day. Just to make sure she was ok.

Liked that Edward had Bella come in the office so Lauren would see her. Now maybe Lauren will get the hint. I doubt it, but it was worth a try.

Why has Bella not been in the office? Why has Edward always made her come to the back? Was she ashamed of her? You said at one point in the story that they were getting married. Are they in love? Or are they doing it because it would just look better for Edward and for tax purposes (you mentioned)?

Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 5

I am glad to see Edward being a little more normal with Bella. I like that he asked Bella's option about Lauren and really listened to her. He even realized and ask what was wrong with her when he first got home.

WOW!!!! What a lemon!!!!!!!! What happened to Bella???? Did she cum to much??? HAHAHAHA!!!!!

Reviewer: PerennialAddict (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 16

Thanks for the Update!


Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 5

WOW!!!! That was some chapter.

I liked that you had Edward sit and talk with Bella. Evened asked her option.

What happened to Bella? Did she cum to much? lol!!

Reviewer: twilightobession69 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 4

Great chapter. A lot of people would think that having cum all over you is awful but it is not. It can be very sexy. I smiled when Bella teased him when he was on the phone. I have done that, not necessary the way Bella did it but in some other sexy, sinful way. LOL.

What does Edward need to talk to Bella about??? Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: sessahhh (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 16

Great job with this chapter. I wonder where Tyler is hiding. I liked the addition of the James element. He seems to be a bit full of himself and his abilities to bag the big catch like Bella. hehe. 

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