okay I gotta say something about your way of writing...

It's AW-E-SOME!!!!!

With the right amount of humor, drama, romance, you've got fine decriptions, perfect dialogues and good ways in expressing feelings. Use of time is perfect, you don't take too long, but you're not making a lot of haste in it.

All with all, a fine piece of story.

very good, I like people writing this good, like you.

keep going. an eight!

greetzzzz SM

Nope not just you, it's obscenly hot in here! Whew..... *Waves hand over face*

Love the story.. Keep up the good work..lol

Also I wanted to recommend a few books that, after reading this, I think you might like. That is, if you havent heard of them already..

Wicked Ties By Shayla Black and Decadent also by shayla Black..Very Good..But thanks for the awsome story!

Hmm... I think despite the fact that I'm not in the Hell Room right now, the temp in here might rival it. And it's all your words' effect on me... no fire, no candle, and sadly, no Domward. This was one blazing chapter. And I'm glad the club time isn't over yet! It feels like we get a bonus chapter with this dip into their past adventures. I love how the club has blackmail pictures of its clients but only uses them if you abuse your member rights. That's a pretty good way to get people to adhere to rules. 

Beautiful job with this one. It was sensual and artful and overall well-written which can sometimes be difficult with this much smut. I love delving into their life like the spying nymph we all are (at least I'm honest and can admit it).

OMG!!! Such a sweet ending. I was going to ask if Edward would still want/love Bella without the whole Master/slave relationship, but I think I got my answer. I can't believe that I didn't find this little gem of a story sooner!

So good, I can't believe I didn't find this story sooner.

Wow!! That was hot!  I need a cigarette and a cold shower both at the same time.

whoa.....

 I don´t know what to say ...,but i do have a some questions...is my first  time, ofcourse i read when i was young ¨JUSTINE¨but it was to be in open revolt at that time, and my feelings as i remember they were disgusting .Now i have found out more... .

Do you really think that this is love?

don´t you think she is as a person, broken?

 

This is hands-down one of the most well-written stories I've read, you are a talented writer.  You've brought to life a different aspect of this type of relationship, and it is utterly fascinating.  Every time you update, it makes my day.

I know you are working on some outtakes....and I understand this is totally one perspective and relating what HER life is like, however it has left me with some questions about Edward.  You say that she asked for this lifestyle....did he truly want it or did he do it to make her happy?  It seemed in that scene after the breakfast with Jasper when he told her that they were just Edward and Bella, that he would have liked more time with her like that.  This lifestyle is a huge responsibility for him, a lot of time and effort goes into planning their life, and she has the easy part.  Also, it would be fascinating to know what Edward reads in her journal and how he responds to what he finds. 

My mind works in overtime everytime I read an update wondering about the past that led them here and the future they have, and as I said, Edwards role in this.  Thanks for creating something that provides such thought- provoking reading.

GAH! The man has energy and libido i envy! 

 

Really great visuals in this chapter, had no problem seeing each room and thinking of them through the lines of text.

 

Very well done flashback, love the wax.

 

Come on March 9th!

a ha!  that's the villain i've been waiting for.