Dommett FTW! Rose as a feisty sub...perect. Caius is so creeptastic. Poor Bree. I can't imagine Edward will let this go. I sense trouble on a much larger scale. Yikes! Loved this and will be counting down the next two weeks!

F-ing awesome update!!!!  Perfect birthday present for me!

isn't it March 9th today, is it? ;( begging for chapter 18. pleaseeee!

wow, i just got through the story of what you have so far and it's absolutely great. in this chapter i expecially like the different role playing rooms. can't wait for the next update

I am so excited to be caught up in my reading sorry you evil vixen I just couldn't stop I had to cntinue!!!  I have sinned for lacking in reviewing such wonderful work.  I would accept my punishment but fear it would be you withholding the next chapter.  I love the Jasper Edward Bella stuff I never ever thought I would but I wonder how far the three will actually go...  Will Alice turn out to be an experienced Sub?  You have lots of people who could cause damage James Laurne Tyler hell the worlds a small place when you live such an exclusive lifestyle.  Can't wait for me!!  I promise to never not review ever again. 

that was kinda weird....her finger slipped into his ass, lol if i did that to my bf h would freak out!!!!  soo looking foward to read the next chapter!!!

Oh my wow what a way to start!!!  Your story was suggested to me in a chat room and I just couldn't ignore it!!!  SQUEE!  Look froward to more!

awwww this is my favorite chapter....so far!

Poor Jasper........

This is almost too good!! Dinner should be very interesting !!

love all around!!

..... And I thought i treated my boyfreinds freinds good, guess not good enough!!!!! This chapter was hot, disturbing, but I love it!!

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